Penname: sithlordnergal [Contact] Real name: chris
Member Since: April 14 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm just someone who enjoys gentle GTS and turning the tables upside down and inside out.


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Summary:

A girl keeps a tiny city in her room and uses it to satisfy her own carnal desires.  She lets her friend in on her secret and worlds change...


Categories: Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Object, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10113 Read Count: 265066
[Report This] Published: June 15 2011 Updated: August 11 2013
Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: July 31 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmmmm...honestly I feel kind of bad for Cara. Sure she is using an entire city to pleasure herself and what not, but she doesn't deserve being called a whore or fetishist pig. =( Especially not when she was just informing him of what her fetish apparently is. I mean honesty, she was opening up a very sensitive part of her, and the guy she wanted to share that with basically spat in her face. =(

 

The one I don't feel bad for is is Chavi. She is the leader of a cult that promotes sexism and keeping people as second citizens, controls the populace with lies, and doesn't even believe the order she runs. If she believed in her "religion" then it wouldn't be so bad. But no, she knows what she teaches is false. She's just manipulating the fears and hopes of the people in order to be the one in charge. I'm actually rather surprised no-one else mentioned Chavi...but it's still early.

Summary:

A female explorer gets stranded on an alien planet. With no recollection of how she got there, she must find a way to coexist with the miniature civilization.


Categories: Maternal, Giantess, Adventure, Couples , Gentle, Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13691 Read Count: 55483
[Report This] Published: February 19 2013 Updated: February 17 2014
Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: May 13 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter I: Crashed!

Well well, that IS an interesting development. >w> I haven't seen many stories where the tinies in the story are as devious as Alin and Carn. One befriends her, the other makes her his "enemy", and they both plot her downfall. I like where this is going, and while I hope Amanda gets through it without much trouble, I also hope she remains benevolent towards those who haven't caused and do not wish her harm.

Summary:

Sam and her childhood friend Nick are trapped in a world where there are small people who are treated as bugs for the amusement of others. 

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Couples , Crush, Feet, Insertion, Mouth Play, Toilet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69006 Read Count: 251104
[Report This] Published: May 24 2013 Updated: December 08 2013
Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: June 24 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmm, not bad. :3 I would like to see where this story leads to, so I hope you continue it.

World of Silver by geeman Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

In a world where giants rule and humans are left to scrounge for scraps, a man named Tommy finds himself in the possesion of a mysterious silver-haired giantess.

 

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*Hey guys, I added drawing-less chapters for those that prefer to go: full imagination with their reading or those who don't like cartoony drawings or something. It's just an option!

Someone let me know if doing two versions of chapter's is breaking a rule and I'll take the extra ones down, thanks!


Categories: Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74011 Read Count: 230151
[Report This] Published: July 04 2013 Updated: July 30 2014
Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: July 05 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

This seems very interesting, especially Kim. She seems like she could turn out to be a very neat character. I could see her turning into a giantess who wants to be kind and loving to tinies, yet has to battle with wanting to abuse them as well. I'll be keeping an eye on this story. ^_^



Author's Response:

College setting, dont want any minors.

Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: July 08 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I am really growing to like this. Heh heh, Kim is so far turning out the way I had hoped, and unlike Smith I see the pattern. She's alone and lonely, she feels bad for the way humans are treated, and she wants to keep Tommy safe. The only way she can accomplish all of those is to keep him, willing or unwilling. And since he is unwilling, and he told her that he was trained as a pet, it only makes sense to toher to treat him as a pet until he trusts her. I bet that her making him call her mommy is a way to try and form some kind of bond between them. I also bet that unless he manages to befriend Kim quickly and convince her that he trusts her she will see him less as a person and more as a pet like everyone else.

...or I am totally off base with my analysis of Kim. ^_^ Am I at all close?



Author's Response:

Yeah, you probably have a well enough description. Although she also kinda was horny when she made him say that, so yeah, but hey, she didn't use him like he thought she was gonna.

Home Invasion by carnaj2 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
[Report This] Published: October 18 2013 Updated: October 28 2013
Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: October 24 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Discovered

Wow, let me tell you what wow. This is very impressive and a WONDERFUL story. I absolutely LOVE how you switched the roles here. Usually it's the tinies who are getting tortured and are helpless as some uncaring and cold hearted giantess haplily tortures them. But this? This is a beautifully done role swap. I actually hope Jennifer gets free and shows those tinies a thing or two, starting with Linda. Maybe not kill them, but certainly punish.

Summary:

People die all the time. These people death's have a giantess twist. 


Categories: Unaware, Giantess, Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1492 Read Count: 8967
[Report This] Published: December 23 2013 Updated: January 01 2014
Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: December 24 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm going to say Helen. The others were fairly stupid, but their deaths were due partially to bad luck as well as a little bit of pour planning.

 

Gordon probably figured, as most people do, that a water current wouldn't effect him as long as he's not swimming in it.

 

Jeffery was purely bad timing, and I doubt many people would be able to run if a giant fight like that broke out in front of them. I wouldn't be surprised if he had been in shock and was too frightened to move.

Tom was another case of bad luck and bad timing.

 

Helen though...Helen has no excuse. First of all, she challenged a GTS-Goddess to a growth match. That alone is stupid. Next, she made herself grow 70 miles tall. I highly doubt it was instantaneously as no body and no amount of science could let someone handle such an instant change, so I bet she had time to reverse the effects when she realized she was too high. Everyone knows you can not breathe in space. Finally, out of all the deaths, I'd say her' s would have been the most horrific. For one thing, the lack of air pressure would have gotten to her as well as the lack of oxygen. Oh, and may I remind you, SHE CHALLENGED A GODDESS TO A GROWTH MATCH!!!!

Summary:

Three girls must face the consequences of their actions after they assault a member of a smaller race.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94864 Read Count: 296452
[Report This] Published: January 10 2014 Updated: July 03 2015
Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: February 11 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Imprisonment

Oh yes, oh yes, yes, yes, yes, YES! Hahaha, I have to say, Melody and I are exactly alike so far. XD I was hoping that she would take the money but not follow through on the bribe, like I would have done, and she did. Plus she's unable to go through with physically hurting others, even when punishing them, but doesn't seem to mind manipulating them. Haha, Marion just majority screwed herself over. Not that I'm surprised that she did. She's far too entitled, and has never been knocked off her high horse thanks to daddy. Glad to see she's getting a dose of reality.

 

I do share the concerns of the others though. I believe Claire stated before that Omegas naturally want to protect and care for Betas, and they generally are supposed to enjoy punishing Alphas. So what is there to prevent an Omega from going too far and turning into a giant version of Marion, or deciding the only way to protect Betas is to wipe out all Alphas?



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed Melody's little ruse.

 

As for what exists to make sure an Omega doesn't turn into Marion...

 

Well, there's Kayla Everett.

Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: March 11 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Imprisonment

Hmmm, this was an excellent chapter, with plenty of my questions answered. Though I still have a few. In particular what happens to an Omega when they do go way too far?

Kayla is...interesting to say the least. I'd like to know more about how she gained so much power. She's a very interesting character to say the least, not nearly as one dimensional as some goddess-esk characters I've seen. What interests me most is her more sadistic side that showed when she was talking about Marion. She's an intelligent and strong woman to be sure, but as they say absolute power corrupts absolutely. It would be interesting to see if has to deal with such corruption and what kind of fail safe she has if she falls and turns into what she's trying to stop.



Author's Response:

We may see that at some point.

 

I'll eventually get started on that origin story, which will answer a lot of questions I imagine. 

Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: June 02 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Imprisonment

You know, reading that chapter really shows just how much Stephanie cared for her little brother...and it also makes me wonder if it really was Marion's doing that made Steph into a cold and uncaring person. As someone who has gone through a period where I found it easier just to not feel anything at all, I can tell you that it doesn't take someone else to do that to you, just the right, or rather wrong, circumstances. Considering how much she loved her brother, finding out that she accidentally killed him would be more  than enough to push a person into not wanting to feel emotion.

Which in turn makes me wonder...how well would Claire fare if she found out she accidentally killed her brother? Devastated yes, but I also think she might have ended up a lot like Stephanie.

Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: June 22 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Imprisonment

Oh my, this is going to be emotional. =< I kind of feel bad for Steph. However, I still don't feel that Marion was the major cause of what happened to Stephanie. Closing up like she did is a defense mechanism, as I said before. And it is one I am familiar with. ^_^;;;; 

 

I desperately want to see a dream sequence with Clair accidentally crushing her brother...just to give her a way to fully appreciate what Stephanie is going through. This is an amazing story, keep it up.

Summary:

Ashley's big sister decides to intervene in response to conduct she finds unacceptable from her smaller sibling, with some help from her friends.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Feet, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16569 Read Count: 76487
[Report This] Published: March 15 2014 Updated: April 15 2014
Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: March 22 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Cold

Well now, Claire managed to majorly redeem herself a lot in this chapter by explaining to Ashley what she did wrong, why she's being punished, and what she should do in the future. She even helped Ashley out by giving that little story about how she tried to take over her brother's life. I'm happy and sad Jenna didn't interrupt. What Claire told her will help Ashley realize that her "God-Like, perfect sister" and her friends are not infallible. However, I kind of wish Jenna had interrupted and poor Ashley never found out what the punishment was for. ^_^;;;

I'm also glad to see hints on how Ashley will see Melody and the others in the future after this. ^_^ 

And to answer your question, I would really like to see that chapter. =D

Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: April 04 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Cold

Well, first off you were right. I was pre-judging Jenna when she doesn't deserve it. I loved how this chapter turned out. It's wrapping up very nicely, and it really put Jenna in a wonderful light. You are doing an amazing job. :D



Author's Response:

Really glad you enjoyed it, and I'm hoping I can put a nice enough bow on things. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: March 29 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Cold

Hmm, this certainly was not what I expected from Jenna. Everything we've learned up to this point about her personality speaks of a much...crueler individual to me then this. In fact, she managed to raise my opinion of her just a bit since she is showing Ashley just how little effort is needed to hurt a Beta.

I would like to know what happened to their relationship, and I want to see how it changed. Because even though they are being easy on Ashley, they still shattered her original belief that she's their equal. And I would be very surprised if that belief ever returns. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if it had the same repercussions as the ones Ashley thought of when she was thinking about that Beta boy, and how she effected his life.



Author's Response:

I wouldn't be surprised if it never returned, no. If it doesn't, it's a question of how they deal with it afterward as to where it leads.

Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: March 17 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Cold

@Sketch: I actually doubt Jenna ever considered Ashley to be a friend. I think she only treated her like one because of her friendship with Melody. I could easily see Jenna putting on an act like that to keep that friendship with Melody and Claire, especially since she managed to hide her sadistic side so well in the past. Abigail was surprised when Kayla told her that Jenna is a sadist.



Author's Response:

All this Jenna hate before she even does anything ;_;

Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: March 17 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Cold

Very well done so far, very well done indeed. I hope we get to see some of Claire and Melody's thoughts on punishing Ashley. I think I can already read Jenna's thoughts easily enough, and how that girl managed to befriend an Alpha is beyond me. To be honest, Claire and Jenna seem a bit too...gung ho about all of this. Melody is too, but those two seem particularly malicious, which was a bit unexpected with Claire. I fully expected Jenna to be Jenna, but this Claire seems a lot more cruel and merciless then the Claire dealing with the girls who hurt her brother. Perhaps this is what helped to make her more merciful? =o

I know it sounds bad, but personally I really hope they overdo the punishment and Ashley's relationship with all three of the girls is ruined, or at least irreversibly changed to something less then what it was. Maybe her never being able to fully trust her sister again, always treating her with a bit of fear and hesitance. Just enough that Melody and Claire would be able to notice. I don't want Ashly to hate them or anything, I just want her to serve as a stark reminder to Melody and Claire as to what happens when you decide to take things too far. I doubt it'll happen though.



Author's Response:

We likely won't really see their thoughts on this, at least not from their perspective (though maybe in a separate work, we'll see). I will tell everyone straight up that they would not be wrong to picture Claire holding Melody's hand during this upcoming chapter.

 

There will be a change in how Ashley views Melody, at the very least. I won't speak to the volume of it, but it will be there.

Summary:

On the set of a reality TV show of the future, participants are shrunk and submitted to the unaware whims of a giantess drudging through the tedium of a daily ritual. Watch the various stories of each of the twenty individuals as they try to survive the unrelenting danger.


Categories: Insertion, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Crush, Feet, Toilet, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3254 Read Count: 20820
[Report This] Published: June 04 2014 Updated: June 05 2014
Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: June 04 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Introduction

This looks interesting. =D I love unaware stories like this

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Summary:

A young woman, prosecuted for a crime she didn’t commit, is placed in the hands of her titanic best friend to learn a few lessons she didn’t earn but most certainly will never forget.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44494 Read Count: 130156
[Report This] Published: July 12 2014 Updated: October 24 2014
Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: July 12 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Disorientation

Yes, I have been waiting for a story like this for a while. And if what the other reviewers are saying, then you may be the perfect person to write this. I love Akbar's setting, and I like the possibilities. However, there has always been a major question on my mind that has never been answered, what happens if they get something wrong?

There are soooo many ways this can go and so many things I'm interested in seeing. First and foremost, I can't wait to see if she is innocent. Of course I am hoping that she is innocent and did nothing wrong, as that would show just what happens when they get it wrong and what Omegas do to fix such mistakes. Another interesting addition is that it's her friend punishing her. I hope to see both POVs, and judging by what she said earlier it seems like she has a great record. I'd like to see her friend's thoughts on the whole ordeal. You have my attention with an excellent premise and a great opening. I know you won't disappoint, so no pressure. ^_^



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing! I hope to do justice to Ackbar's world. I don't want to spoil anything, though you can rest assured all those questions you mentioned will get answered in the story, and the perspectives of both girls will indeed be shown.

Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: July 29 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Disorientation

Finally, I've been waiting for this for ages! Ahhh, I can't wait to see how this is effecting Bridget, and I desperately want to know the alleged crimes. Also, I wonder how many times mistakes like these happen...



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed
Date: August 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Disorientation

Hmmm, that is very damming evidence against Alexandra...I'm still hoping she is innocent though, but I'm very curious how she is innocent.



Author's Response:

Hehe. All I can say is there's definitely more than meets the eye here.