Well well, that IS an interesting development. >w> I haven't seen many stories where the tinies in the story are as devious as Alin and Carn. One befriends her, the other makes her his "enemy", and they both plot her downfall. I like where this is going, and while I hope Amanda gets through it without much trouble, I also hope she remains benevolent towards those who haven't caused and do not wish her harm.

This seems very interesting, especially Kim. She seems like she could turn out to be a very neat character. I could see her turning into a giantess who wants to be kind and loving to tinies, yet has to battle with wanting to abuse them as well. I'll be keeping an eye on this story. ^_^

Wow, let me tell you what wow. This is very impressive and a WONDERFUL story. I absolutely LOVE how you switched the roles here. Usually it's the tinies who are getting tortured and are helpless as some uncaring and cold hearted giantess haplily tortures them. But this? This is a beautifully done role swap. I actually hope Jennifer gets free and shows those tinies a thing or two, starting with Linda. Maybe not kill them, but certainly punish.

Oh yes, oh yes, yes, yes, yes, YES! Hahaha, I have to say, Melody and I are exactly alike so far. XD I was hoping that she would take the money but not follow through on the bribe, like I would have done, and she did. Plus she's unable to go through with physically hurting others, even when punishing them, but doesn't seem to mind manipulating them. Haha, Marion just majority screwed herself over. Not that I'm surprised that she did. She's far too entitled, and has never been knocked off her high horse thanks to daddy. Glad to see she's getting a dose of reality.

I do share the concerns of the others though. I believe Claire stated before that Omegas naturally want to protect and care for Betas, and they generally are supposed to enjoy punishing Alphas. So what is there to prevent an Omega from going too far and turning into a giant version of Marion, or deciding the only way to protect Betas is to wipe out all Alphas?

You know, reading that chapter really shows just how much Stephanie cared for her little brother...and it also makes me wonder if it really was Marion's doing that made Steph into a cold and uncaring person. As someone who has gone through a period where I found it easier just to not feel anything at all, I can tell you that it doesn't take someone else to do that to you, just the right, or rather wrong, circumstances. Considering how much she loved her brother, finding out that she accidentally killed him would be more  than enough to push a person into not wanting to feel emotion.

Which in turn makes me wonder...how well would Claire fare if she found out she accidentally killed her brother? Devastated yes, but I also think she might have ended up a lot like Stephanie.

Well now, Claire managed to majorly redeem herself a lot in this chapter by explaining to Ashley what she did wrong, why she's being punished, and what she should do in the future. She even helped Ashley out by giving that little story about how she tried to take over her brother's life. I'm happy and sad Jenna didn't interrupt. What Claire told her will help Ashley realize that her "God-Like, perfect sister" and her friends are not infallible. However, I kind of wish Jenna had interrupted and poor Ashley never found out what the punishment was for. ^_^;;;

I'm also glad to see hints on how Ashley will see Melody and the others in the future after this. ^_^ 

And to answer your question, I would really like to see that chapter. =D

Hmm, this certainly was not what I expected from Jenna. Everything we've learned up to this point about her personality speaks of a much...crueler individual to me then this. In fact, she managed to raise my opinion of her just a bit since she is showing Ashley just how little effort is needed to hurt a Beta.

I would like to know what happened to their relationship, and I want to see how it changed. Because even though they are being easy on Ashley, they still shattered her original belief that she's their equal. And I would be very surprised if that belief ever returns. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if it had the same repercussions as the ones Ashley thought of when she was thinking about that Beta boy, and how she effected his life.

Very well done so far, very well done indeed. I hope we get to see some of Claire and Melody's thoughts on punishing Ashley. I think I can already read Jenna's thoughts easily enough, and how that girl managed to befriend an Alpha is beyond me. To be honest, Claire and Jenna seem a bit too...gung ho about all of this. Melody is too, but those two seem particularly malicious, which was a bit unexpected with Claire. I fully expected Jenna to be Jenna, but this Claire seems a lot more cruel and merciless then the Claire dealing with the girls who hurt her brother. Perhaps this is what helped to make her more merciful? =o

I know it sounds bad, but personally I really hope they overdo the punishment and Ashley's relationship with all three of the girls is ruined, or at least irreversibly changed to something less then what it was. Maybe her never being able to fully trust her sister again, always treating her with a bit of fear and hesitance. Just enough that Melody and Claire would be able to notice. I don't want Ashly to hate them or anything, I just want her to serve as a stark reminder to Melody and Claire as to what happens when you decide to take things too far. I doubt it'll happen though.

Yes, I have been waiting for a story like this for a while. And if what the other reviewers are saying, then you may be the perfect person to write this. I love Akbar's setting, and I like the possibilities. However, there has always been a major question on my mind that has never been answered, what happens if they get something wrong?

There are soooo many ways this can go and so many things I'm interested in seeing. First and foremost, I can't wait to see if she is innocent. Of course I am hoping that she is innocent and did nothing wrong, as that would show just what happens when they get it wrong and what Omegas do to fix such mistakes. Another interesting addition is that it's her friend punishing her. I hope to see both POVs, and judging by what she said earlier it seems like she has a great record. I'd like to see her friend's thoughts on the whole ordeal. You have my attention with an excellent premise and a great opening. I know you won't disappoint, so no pressure. ^_^

Hmmm, that is very damming evidence against Alexandra...I'm still hoping she is innocent though, but I'm very curious how she is innocent.