Penname: Michael1258 [Contact] Real name: Michael Turner
Member Since: September 17 2013
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Summary:

17 year old Derrick gets more than he bargained for when he discovers a way to make his wildest dreams come true.

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Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10393 Read Count: 76132
[Report This] Published: March 12 2012 Updated: July 21 2017
Reviewer: Michael1258 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Panties

Keep it up man. This is awesome. I like the descriptions. Better than I could ever do. My personal suggestion is to keep it unaware, it just makes sense. something that small should not be spotted. Throw your character into a bunch of horrible situations: sex with the boyfriend, being nearly eaten, lost in certain laces and picked up by someone else. I dont know what to tell you about an ending so far.



Author's Response:

I'll do what I can to continue the plight of Derrick.  His journey is far from over.  Thanks for the comments.

Planet Tit by MrHippo Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Quick intro:Jack Thorson cheats on his wife who just so happens to be a witch,and well the rest is as we say Cappucino!


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1282 Read Count: 14351
[Report This] Published: February 25 2014 Updated: February 28 2014
Reviewer: Michael1258 Signed
Date: February 25 2014 Title: Chapter 1: New home

Very good so far. 



Author's Response:

Thank you

Summary:

Samuel and his gothic girlfriend Lucretia have been stuck in a rut, but things quickly liven up when Lucy wins a night out with her favorite actor.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Couples , Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Lucretia's Night Out
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5095 Read Count: 52035
[Report This] Published: March 30 2014 Updated: April 01 2014
Reviewer: Michael1258 Signed starstarstar
Date: April 01 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Lucy Gets Ready

I agree its a little odd as well. At first i was thinking it was the girlfriend trying to explore new guys and fulfill her boyfriends fantasies in a mildly sadistic fashion, but introducing him to tom when theyre about to have sex is a bit off the wall. If i were tom id instantly think wtf is wrong with her. i would have suggested making it completely unaware for the third party. but you started off great. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback! In hindsight, it's not too well elaborated on, but Tom's eagerness to go along with Lucy's plan is semi-explained as egotism.  His fame has brought him worhsip from plenty of fans, but the idea of taking that concept to such an extreme as dominating over a tiny person is too novel and enticing an offer for him to decline.  He felt enough like a god before and is persuaded to go that extra step futher, if just over one life.

I actually did float the unaware idea when the story was commissioned, but ultimately they wanted Sam to be discovered after the date.  I did manage to stretch it out into the foreplay, though.

Summary:

In this direct sequel to Lucretia's Night Out, Lucy and her shrunken boyfriend Sam must deal with the aftermath of the previous evening, as well as new challenges presented by Lucy's power.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Mature (40-49), Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Lucretia's Night Out
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9418 Read Count: 60570
[Report This] Published: April 05 2014 Updated: August 12 2014
Reviewer: Michael1258 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Digging in the Dirt

ok the ear part is a little odd, but not in a bad way. you mad some good progress from last story. Id suggest maybe introduce new characters. either get sam lost on some small adventure or have lucrecia find a new guy. maybe let her experiment a bit more before she decides if she likes sam the bf or sam the pet. bar scenes are always fun and sexy. good luck and good job



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks man! Glad you think the story's coming along.  Yeah, the ear thing happened because it's unusual; I wanted to do something that isn't often seen in these sorts of stories.  New characters are definitely something I'm cooking up, it's just a question of who and why.  I've got some ideas, and I'll see how I can work them in.

Summary: Join Tim as he survives some onslaught of unaware torture from his mom, dad, brother, and two sisters. Read to find out what will happen. Who has the last dragon ball. That had nothing to do with the story but WHO HAS IT. This is my first multi-chapter story so please review what you think.
Categories: Odor, Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Watersports, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FM/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5409 Read Count: 127551
[Report This] Published: July 26 2014 Updated: July 31 2014
Reviewer: Michael1258 Signed
Date: July 28 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The beginning of Tim's journey.

Its pretty messed up yet pretty awesome at the same time keep up the unaware aspect please



Author's Response: I already wrote out up to chapter 6 and im not giving away spoilers Sorry but thanks anyways for the support and stay tuned.

The Spice Up by TinyBrad Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Follow Jessica on her rise from spicing up her marriage to discovering and acting on carnal desire.


Categories: Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27531 Read Count: 97169
[Report This] Published: July 27 2014 Updated: September 01 2014
Reviewer: Michael1258 Signed star
Date: August 13 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

man i was really hoping to see some giant/giantess action. :/

 

Summary:

A story about a girl named Paige and the people in her life shrinking .


Categories: Violent, Feet, Incest, Unaware, Butt, Crush, Couples , Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5925 Read Count: 77946
[Report This] Published: August 03 2014 Updated: May 11 2015
Reviewer: Michael1258 Signed
Date: August 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The beggining

im all for the unaware stories ive made a couple myself.