Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed
Date: January 15 2018
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Great start into the new year, happy to see you write on. The story is one of my favorites and I enjoyed the sex scene a lot. So ironic how Sammy isnt aware it wasnt his best friend. And just Bobbys shitty gf ends like this. Wish to see way more chapters in the future, and you keep the mood, this was really well written and had better length than 99% of the usual plots on here. Could you maybe do more of the panties tf of the victim stay inside without fading to nothingness. That was so great. I would also enjoy some pure object tf too like the panties, or part of an object. Fleshlight would be a good one, another condom, toilet paper, little part of a boxers. Maybe get another teacher to "vanish", or some bullies. I liked the idea of the party and Sammys fear of it. Maybe have some bullies invite him but this time it goes horrible, at least at first for Sammy.