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I love giantess stories, especially with a giantess and a tiny man. Giantesses with authority are my interest. Teachers, doctor, moms, policewoman, etc. I tend to write longer than average reviews. It's just my style. Also, I love a long response to my review. It tells me that you care about my review want to address every part of it. Female domination and bondage are my favorite subjects in these stories. So if a giantess dominating a man who is taped to her body will always get my attention. I believe a good balance of sexy action and dialogue is key for a good story. Some stories are just filled with thoughts of a character while others are just many types of action without savoring each moment with words. Favorite author is Duggernaut. All of his stories are worth reading, and have enough action and drama to keep you engaged until the sexy stuff can occur. The writing is brilliant, and if it was a movie, I would pay to see it. 2nd favorite author is ThomThumb. He has perhaps the best 2 stories on the site in my opinion. Long stories filled with sexy stuff, drama, torture, and lots of creativity.
Chloe finally gets to use the serum, and along with Jennifer's help, two more unsupecting victims fall into the ultimate experience.
Is it me or is it getting hot in here?!! Because that was by far one of the best chapters you have ever wrote in my opinion and is probably "Bob's Ultimate Experience".
I appreciated how you responded to my review with a new chapter. Fantastic! Hopefully this is just the beginning of these sexy scenes! :)
You are such a tease! Mallory tells Jill that "I think he wants to get into your panties" and I thought things were about to get real again!
Then Mallory talks about Bob massaging feet? I mean really? That was so random that I thought you wrote that just to bug me or something. haha.
Wow, that young waitress has mastered the art of female domination! I wonder where she learned that from...hmmmm.
To be honest, I expected this sexual behavior from Diane and the waitress to be gentle.
Diane was the authoritive force in her house, so I assumed she would control Bob like the waitress did here.
The waitress on the other hand, is this innocent girl, nervous if Bob was even real. I thought she would take care of him like a little girl and her doll.
Some interesting personalities you have for your characters. Quite the surprise. However, I enjoy surprises like this chapter. Keep it up!
Sorry for the long review. I will make it more concise next time.
Oh I see. Now that makes sense. Looks like that giantess was the performer. This should be fun.
Once again another great chapter. Not many tags in this story, so I didnt find this story immediately.
First of all, the the descriptive sentence of Diane was fantastic. As well as your use of the setting. Waking up early morning, and then saying it was dark outside; At first, I thought I misread something, but you actually had me thinking that at early morning, there were still stars out. I enjoyed that mini puzzle even though it was unintentional.
Also, is the main character, Bob, Bobby, Rob, Robert? or are they the same, becuase I hear a mix.
One thing that felt awkward as I was reading was wondering how Bob was able to see the mail box name while his body is moving rapidly up and down with Diane's hand?
Lastly, I am curious, why the hand? Usually its not the hand which carries a tiny during a jog. Its not that sexy in my opinion, and I feel that a jog/walk would eventually heat up and gradually open that hand to let in air. I dont mean to be rude, but of all the other places, why the hand?
Anyway, I wonder how Chloe and Jennifer handle their tinies which seems like they may pick up from the bar. Now here is a twist. If multiple shrunken men appear in the same scene, what if Bob gets accidently switched and Diane has no idea! Or Carly finds Bob, ties him up, then another tiny finds Bob, Bob then ties that tiny up to save his own skin, and Carly has fun with the tiny she still thinks is Bob.
Lots of possibilities my friend, keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Diane occasionally calls Bobby 'Robert', (as that is actually his name)- Bob is short for Robert. ) Bob isn't small enough to fit completely inside a womans fist. He's six inches tall, so Diane was just securely holding his legs as she carried him along with her on her early morning walk. She wasn't 'rapidly' pumping her hand up and down, only slightly- as she was walking. Diane's very careful with her tiny son-in-law, but even just the slightest motion while riding inside her hand would make someone 'So small', feel like they were floating up and down...
Yes, there's several possibilitys! This story is could take any direction at this point. '*-_-*' no spoilers though.... (heh, heh, heh)
Wow, Jen and Chloe shrinking both of them and then having a foursome. That would be interesting.
Also, I really wonder how Carly is going to approach her mother, and how Diane reacts. I could picture this.
"Mom, i have a confession." Carly asked.
"What is it sweetie?" Diane asked as she sat next to Carly.
"You know Bob?" Carly asked.
"Robert? Yes" Diane responded now thinking of Bobs current position currently in her underwear.
"Well, I shrunk him and made him run away."
"What happened dear?" Diane asked leaning toward Carly.
"Well, I....um....(Carly didnt know what to say). Well lets just say I hurt Bob and I..."
"How did you hurt him?" Diane interrupted.
Carly paused. "I sort of...used him...for my desires."
"Oh really?" Diane was now interested as she smiled and looked down and crossed her legs.
(Just a suggestion)
Anyway, another great chapter. Happy presidents day!
Author's Response:
You just can't wait to get back inside those tightly fitted, mildly moistened, steaming hot panties can you! Lol!
Thanks 4 the suggestions, I ll concider it Mr. Speedy....
Haha, You bet I cant wait! Especially when I am witnessing this relationship grow stronger every chapter. It will only be a matter of time until I see Diane confidently put him there. She could also show him how to pleasure a mature woman. I cant wait!
Haha, it was purse! Man, you had my heart racing for a while. I thought it was something else and then I read all those clues which made me reconsider my thoughts.
Wow, impressive connection. Making the reader unaware of the situation just like Mark and Tony.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! That's what I was trying to do... ;)
Lots of descriptions, but not much action.
I felt like something was going to happen, and then the chapter ended.
Author's Response:
I am trying to carry out a storyline here. Not every chapter will have a sex scene. Dianes not a nypho, or a cruella type giantess, she's a real sweety, and if something happens with her, it will most likely be because she had no other choice...
The nature of the beast is slow and smooth. Makes for a much more meaningful effect when it seems more realistic, don't you think? :)
You know what, Im glad that these dialogue chapters are here setting up scenes in the future. I guess I was a little too anxious for some action.
For this chapter, I always enjoyed it when someone tries to hide something, but the other character already knows. Carly's stuttering is sure hinting that her mother knows the secret. Diane played it beautifully.
Author's Response:
You have to restrain yourself Tom! Try taking some deep breathes, and counting backwards from one-hundred. "0.0" - LOL!
..... thanks for commenting/reviewing!
Great chapter! I hope Mark was not actually swallowed and instread just saw the swallowing action in front of him. It really makes Chloe's point on who is in charge.
This chapter did not feel that long even though you mentioned it. Perhaps, I was just completely into it. (Thumbs up!)
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Next chapter will continue right where this one left off, so... (hopefully Chloe didn't really swallow him alive?)
Please tell me the next chapter is about Bobby! What a cliffhanger!
Of all the outcomes, of all the hot women he could be with, he ended up in the trash die to his hesitation. Haha.
I wonder how do we move on from here though.
Does Bob find a fork and hikes to the top, and finds a supermodel eating at a nearby table?
Does Bob get taken out to to the dumpster, but cuts through, falls into the feet of the girl taking the trash?
Does Bob gets completely sticky in there, that he stays there until the garbage truck takes him to the local dump and a girl steps on it?
Does Diane freak out and demands the waitress the location, she finds the trash can ans Bobby is saved?
Does a teen carelessly drops her iphone into the trash can sticking to Bobby and this teen pulls her phone out with a new prize?
Does the waitress remember she felt something and checks the trash to find Bobby?
Does Valerie witness the whole situation and finds Bobby?
My challenge to you, midnight, is to have a new chapter not based off any of these ideas. (unless you already wrote it).
Good luck. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Well, you had my wheels turning there, THEN, you said "NOT" to, 'use' those ideas? ;XD Thanks!
Ha! Bobby will get outta there somehow, I'm just not sure yet... how?
I know that you are very creative so I wanted to test how creative your writing is.
Sure, you can use those ideas in the future but for the next chapter about Bobby, I want you to surprise me.
I did not expect that waitress to use that napkin Bobby was under, but to me that was creative. I like that.
If I really wanted you to use my ideas, it would be Diane placing a collar on Bobby's balls and that collar is always tracked by Diane's phone so Diane will find him. (Of course this means that Diane had to have explained to Bobby that the collar around his balls is for his own safety, so she can always be aware of his location.) That way, Diane will find Bobby, and probably punish him for escaping. (By now you know what I mean by the "punishment".) Bobby serves his punishment as she drives back to her house immedialty going toward her bedroom and taking Bob out and having her way with him.
That would be my idea, but this is your story. I want to see your vivid imagination in your writing. You never dissapoint! :)
Author's Response:
Um, did you mean that Diane should use the 'Multi-purpose, ultra-sensitive, semi-restrictive, testicular tracking devise?'... she would never use such a 'bondage' type thing such as that, would she? Maybe Sandra might thou'.. ;)
Interesting chapter, but I'm a little confused.
Bob was in a resturant, and the same cart from that restuarant moved to a bedroom? Could you clarify that please?
Author's Response:
Well, some lounges, like the 'Fireside Lounge', have a Bar and and restaurant, with several motel rooms in the back. Mostly used for 'special guests' like performers that are going to be there for a week or so at a time. The room is provided for them while they are performing there, so that they can keep all their stuff with them right there.
The waitress!
The way you described Roseane didnt sound that appealing in my opinion.
Also, i think the waitress, airline hostess, secretary, nurse relationship is always good. They have their job to do, and its great to see these types of women intereact with tinies. Then they break rules to have fun with the tiny which is always fun to read.
Or we can have the waitress go back to Diane. She could serve him to Diane.
Example:" Miss, would you like a foot massage?
"Yes please. My right foot is sore, and my toes would like some work", said Diane.
The watiress brings Bob, hidden inside her fist.
She bends down to Diane's feet and takes Diane's right high heel off.
She places Bob inside the high heel so his head is in the toe section. Bob's legs are in the arch area and Bob is looking up, the back of his head in the grooves of Diane's toe prints.
"Stay still, and relax" the waitress whispers to Bob winking at him. (Diane doesnt notice.)
The wiatress then lifts her head from under the table and gently inserts Diane's foot into the high heel shoe.
Diane feels a cushion but doesnt realize that it is Bob since he is still.
"Thank you, have a great day" the waitress waves goodbye to Diane. Diane just gave her a tip for the cushion.
Bob, suffers trying to breathe and begins to slightly move. Diane doesnt feel mich because she is walking.
Diane drives home still thinking that the cushion is just adjusting to the shape of her foot. The waitress told her it will move after a while.
Bob meanwhile was trying to move, his body trapped under the weight put on him, his voice muted by the foot on his face.
Diane finally reaches home and arrives in her bedroom. She sits down on her bed, and takes her feet out of her heels.
Then she hears it. It sounded like screaming.
Diane noticed it came from her shoe and looked down. She saw Bob yelling words of pain. She looked even closer to see any wounds. Just bruises, she was relieved.
She gently puts him on her palm.
"Bob, were you in my shoe this whole time?"
"Yes" was all he can say.
"How can I make it up to you"?
"Just keep me safe" Bob answered.
"I promise. Want to have my leftovers?" Diane asked like a caring mother.
"I would love to, thank you Diane."
--End chapter--.
Well, that was fun. I guess I got carried away again. Great chapter. I hope its the waitress next!
Author's Response:
Hm, I don't know Tom. If Diane 'unawarely', walked on tiny Bobby, (while trapped inside her shoe) 'Realistically', her weight would puverize him into a jelly-like paste that would ooze out from between her gigantic toes and dribble all over her shoe. The weight convertion, would be something like 60 tons, compared to him.
Nice idea though...but, if she were 'unaware'?
I could tell Jennifer is trying to remember her dreams of a giantess since she first met Bobby. She wanted to do so many things to Bobby, but now she can with little Tony. I wonder what Chloe is gonna do with Mark after she got her ideas from Bobby as well.
Tiny Tony and Mini Mark.
Sandra is cruel, Diane is caring, Jennifer is playful, Carly is random, and Chloe is next.
Thats a lot of giantesses! This is going to be a wild ride!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Well, actually... every woman on the entire planet, would be an actual giantess for Bob, Mark and Tony. It's the three of them that are miniature men!
~an entire planet of giant women,.... would be pretty awesome huh?
A woman has shrunk various people in the course of her day and plans to have fun with them. But what she sees as fun, they may not. Will they survive the night?
This is a departure from my normal style and not my normal gentle fare. it will only be two or three chapters and the chapters will be fairly long. I hope you like it!
I agree, this story is very hot. She knows how to use her body. I wonder how she will use the other three.
Author's Response:
i can think of two places eaisly....scratches her foot as she sits comfortably...or maybe a prolonged kiss?
Charlie is an average college kid, but when he get's stranded, he comes across a house that lures him in. After he is mysteriously shrunk, he is found by a lovely girl named Ash who is willing to help him find out what is going on, and see if they can find a way to return him to normal.
Fantastic chapter! Even though these last few chapters seem to be setting up the fun stuff, know it will be great later on.
I also liked the reactions of Mark and Kat. It seemed very realistic and I can easily picutred it in my head.
You mention Ash's dad a bit, but what about her mom? Is the mom there in the story, or is she away like the dad. It would be cool if Ash's mom showed up. I wonder what her reaction will be.
This story keeps getting interesting by each chapter. I can't wait for the next one!
I love these kinds of stories, when the main character is in a strangers house. Soon he meets the entire family on by one.
Have you considered this in a future chapter, or will it be just Ash for a while?
Either way, I love the setup and story so far. I cant wait for the next chapter.