Just read all 8 chapters! Amazing!

Its interesting to see a story with these size differences. Kinda refreshing.

I actually like Caitlin's use of tape, to make him bound and mute.

In this chapter, she locks him up in her wardrobe while he is still taped up. Does she really have to do that? I dont think so, unless her parents are back. (I hope so.) That would be a great plot twist. He might escape one giantess, but can he escape all 3?

Author's Response:

Caitlin locks him in the wardrobe, a) because it had a lock (!) and b) because she has stopped underestimating him. He tried to roll off the bed when she wasn't looking, and managed to escape and hide in the bathroom when she popped out of the room for just a moment, perhaps she's realised it's better to be safe than sorry? She also appears to spends several minutes making sure there is no way out of her bedroom and en-suite either, though you could argue that's because it's the first chance she's had to think about it since bringing him home. It was an impulsive act to kidnap Jack, so she's probably figuring this all out as she goes along.

Im with Antagoniser here.

This is the best chapter yet in this story!

Jack pulled the 'hidden in plain sight' card and he is doing a great job with it. (but for how long, i have no idea.)

Caitlin's reaction was great and it was realistic. I could sense her rage as she was already frustrated with whatever she was doing prior to arriving at home, and now she was steaming with fumes from her head and now Jack can feel it too as she cools down by unintentially hugging him.

It sounded like she destroyed her room just trying to find Jack. Now imagine Caitlin finding Jack. Man, I cant wait when that happens.

I really wonder. Does Caitlin know that Jack is there inside her teddy? I have a feeling she does and is pretending that she has no idea, forcing Jack to remain still whenever she is present.

Or, this is the best unaware scene that I have seen in a long time.

Since Jack is 'gone' in Caitlin's mind, does she need something else to relieve her? Will she have sex with the teddy? Will she strap that dildo on the teddy and use it like a sex toy, all while Jack is inside it?

I mean, you did mention that the neck region of the teddy was worn down a bit. Could happen.

I believe its Saturday now, so Caitlin might stay at home all day, or possibly stay in her room all day. That could be a problem for Jack.

There are so many possibilities; I just cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Caitlin is unaware that Jack is inside the bear, it wouldn't make much sense for her to pretend she didn't know if she did, either - she would have dragged him out instantly.

Wow!

I thought Amber was going to be a playful one.

Instead she is just as scary as Caitlin or even worse!

At this rate, they are going to drown him. Or at least give him a taste of water boarding.

Not sure how long he will last. Caitlin has already broken him down, and now Amber is going to take him home after this? It's all going downhill for Jack.

With the new girls, I wonder if they can be any worse than Amber. I guess we will see soon.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh boy, it's been months since I have seen this story. Good thing the title is unique enough that I remembered that I follow it.

First off, this must be a Christmas gift to us, becuase this chapter is the best chapter in the entire story in my opinion.

It also wraps up 2015 in a way that makes me realize how many stories I have read on this site since this story's previous chapter. Glad you are back and happy holidays.

This chapter should've been called gratification or graduation becuase welcome to the club Jack, you just had your first sexual experience.

But let's just take a few steps back. We start with Caitlin and this ice that she places on Jack's shoulder. She knows that her pool party was a bit too much and I think she believes that she went too far this time and is pondering some thoughts as she tends to Jack.

I love the description you gave for Caitlin as she came from the pool. Her sillouette is all he can see as light flows around her. Jack must think she is like an angel at that point, the kind where light glows around them. Because Caitlin is now being gentle with Jaxk as she takes him to her kitchen counter.

Caitlin reminds me of a former coach I met. He was always being tough on his players. When Caitlin said "don't be a fucking wuss" or "don't get comfy", I got reminded of him. It's like she is training Jack for some thing.

Speaking of training, her brutal torture on Jack seemed to be a way of making Jack obedient to her. She wanted to enforce this idea constantly and did it in such a fashion that Jack is scared beyond measure and Caitlin wants Jack to feel helpless. As Jack suffers, Caitlin gains pleasure. She wants Jack to suffer mentally not physically, and that's the key difference between her torture and what happened at the pool party.

Caitlin then continues to surprise Jack by not just being a cruel girl that we have seen in the last 10 chapters. Last chapter, we saw some concern, now we learn some thing else. Caitlin wants Jack sexually. And not like romantic sex, this was brutal and forced like a type of female domination.

It all started when she transformed cruel to sexy with the ice cube. She uses ice on his groin, and that stuff hurts deeply I bet. Then she immediately heats things up (literally) by wrapping her hands around his dick and purring like a cat with her prey. (Imagine a giant girl wrapping your penis. Yeah, I know right.)

Now Jack starts freaking out in a way that I began laughing. Like, now his captor wants to play with him sexually and his mind is spinning like "what the hell is gonna happen?"

Then part 2 of this chapter begins and Caitlin gets naughty, like she is on the naughty list right now even though she got Jack in bed for Christmas becuase that is exactly what happened. She scares Jack by whispering seductively and I'm thinking "Jack is so lucky this chapter".

One thing that was kinda confusing was the positioning of these two during the bed scene, like I couldn't tell who was on top or bottom of what. At the end it was clear but when the scene stars, I had difficulty picturing it all enfold.

Caitlin could've tied Jack up with some tape or rope, but Caitlin manhandling Jack was even better. It just showed how much power and control she has. I mean, her hand alone keeps Jack from getting up. Wow. In addition, her legs wrapped him up like a doll. It felt like she was kinda squeezing him with her legs as you described her weight holding him down.

Lastly, thank you for including some good old facesitting in her. It is one of my favorite positions and you described it beautifully. Caitlin used his face for her own pleasure for the rest of the chapter and I wished it could have gone on longer, I mean that was fantastic.

Best chapter in this story so far in my opinion, and I can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response:

Quite a lot to respond to here!

You know that feeling when no matter what do, it won't change the outcome? Well, Jack is in this moment. No matter what he tries to do to escape, he will always be caught and punished. Now he just gives up in this chapter.

Jack had many things before he got captured. He had friends, family, and an identity. Well Caitlin took everything from him, including his identity. Jack kept fight until he lost something special to him. His virginity. Yeah, I know some people don't consider that to be losing virginity, but for Jack, he wanted his first sexual experience to be with another Beta girl, not like this, and Cailtin took that away from him too.

Hmm. I never considered jump rope as a bondage tool until now. I mean, this is an everyday item that most people have and it could be used for some humiliation like this.

When Jack mentioned that his hands were resting above his head, I thought Caitlin was going to tie him up to the bedposts and go for round 2. Perhaps another time.

Alpha food must look like a buffet for Jack. Just one plate may fill him up and he will never have to get seconds. However, Jack does get a meal, on Caitlin's thigh. Then he gets seconds on her foot. Might be worth it considering how desperate Jack is.

Jack said multiple times that he did not want to give her satisfaction of his humiliation. It looks like there is still something that Jack actually has control of. He still has hope. The question is for how long especially with Cailtin being so unpredictable these last few chapters.

The couch scene was nice. Caitlin comforts Jack and it actually doesn't comfort him. Instead, it seems to scare him because it doesn't know what to think of her anymore. Should he feel mad, thankful, he doesn't know. She keeps doing opposite things to him which confuses the crap out of Jack.

I think Caitlin is just breaking him down until Jack just gives up. Then she cheers him up until he gets some energy. Then, she humiliates him again when he starts showing signs of vigor. It's a cycle. She probably enjoys breaking him down again and again and Jack hates it so much.

If I was Jack I would start acting like crap all the time so Caitlin would comfort me all the time. Of course, she might catch on my idea so I would resist here and there, but for the most part, I think Jack can exploit this by faking his misery. Now I wonder if Jack can hear my idea.

As this story goes on, it feels like a social experiment. "Hey, let's put him in the pool". "Hey, let's throw him". "Let's try forcing him to orgasm". "Now let's force him to eat off her foot". "Now let's mess with him and have her comfort him". Well, if this were an experiment, I would say it is going well if the point was to break Jack down.

I wonder what Caitlin has in store for Jack next. I'm loving the bondage stuff (rope, tape, gags, cuffs). Would love to see more of it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

There's a lack of consistency in Caitlin's approach that could be explained by a few things. I'm definitely trying to hint at the fact she's just doing what she feels like, and if it happens to be mean, or nice, or sexy, it's not like she's really thinking about it as much as he might think she is - she might just be a bit naive and doesn't really understand how to be very cruel particularly well. It's not in doubt that she has some kind of fascination with him, whether she straight-up likes him, or just likes how small he is, or what it is he represents to her. She's very much a bully, and most of her friends are just yes-men, so maybe she doesn't know how to be normal with him at all, and is just trying to do what she thinks he would react best to, or expects, as an inferior manlet. It's not beyond the realms of possibility that someone has trained her to treat him like this either.

He was expecting to go to hell, but instead he found heaven.

Author's Response:

Very nicely put!

This is getting good. I hope it gets cozy.

Next thing you know, Penny pulls Jack up into her and they cuddle up and she hugs him like a teddy bear. Then she falls asleep with her legs on top of Jack and he can't escape with her legs wrapping him up.

I'm really excited like Jack too because I have felt a similar experience. It started in class when most of the seats are filled up and there is this one seat next to you and a hot girl shows up and takes that seat. Class activity is to talk to the person next to you and we start talking. As the class goes on, she gets more friendlier and playful but I doubt she is interested in a relationship with me and I was too shy to ask her out. I loved being friends with her and I didn't want to jeapordize it by asking her. Soon, we got assignments together and we have to go places. One place, we had to go get food there was one table left with one chair. She tells me to sit down and then she just sits down on my lap afterward. I was so "aware" as Jack put it, but this girl just acted as if it was normal. It's these little things that I love and makes me relate to Jack.

I hope Penny accidentally just sleeps on top of him. I bet Jack would be so aroused and doesn't want to wake Penny up. Even if there is some pain from her weight, he can't deny that he feels great being under Penny. (That's my take.)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Nice ideas - I like the way you think!

Well, well, well. Look who is back. I think with the title of this chapter, we should reflect on such a great year of this story.

Jack reflects about the whole incident and still can't get rid of Caitlin. He can't get rid of Penny in his head either. Something about these Alphas keep sticking to him. I think Jack has some sort of desire in the back of his head despite what he has gone through.

Jack suffers from ptsd, or seems to. This experience was too much. How it affects how love, his school, and how he receives physical contact. Did you see what happened when Delon patted him? Jack refered to the abuse. Jack is fucked mentally now.

Wow, Jack's parents don't seem to give a shit about what happened to Jack. Video games all week? How does a parent even buy that? Jack's parents should like call Delon's parents and ask why they let their boys play games all week.

If Jack looked like shit, how come the parents didn't seem to have concern? It was only until Delon brought the conversation about some sort of sickness that the parents seemed to care.

Great work on Jack feeling claustrophobic in his own room. That's some story development right there. Using the environment to show a change in the character. Makes me wonder if would rather feel crowded, or comfy on a large bed with the memory of Caitlin. I'm sure he would rather be cramped.

Well Jack can't hide in his bed forever. Also, Delon might be spied on by Caitlin. Anyone watching Jack's locker? I don't think this bag retrieval is as easy as it sounds.

Hmm. What if instead of Delon showing up aftersxhool, it's Caitlin? Now that would be a plot twist. Jack all happy to get his bag, then nope.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Jack didn't come home on Friday night, but on Saturday Delon got in touch with his folks to say he was staying over, and then he was returned back on Sunday morning. He's basically spent Saturday at Delon's so far as they know, apparently revising, but probably playing games and chilling out, It's implied that this sort of thing happens relatively often, and it's been established that he's pretty shit with his phone: “I’ve been texting you for hours, what have I told you about not checking your phone?” - Chapter 3. I'm not saying Jack's parents are idiots or anything but they are completely oblivious to the specific kind of Alpha-inspired problems he's encountering, they themselves grew up in an era with far more Betas, associate with a lot of similarly-positioned Betas their own age (at their jobs etc) and are relatively care-free, laid-back people. To be honest they're more concerned about his grades than whether he's home at night, they trust his friend Delon and they also know Jack's a bit insular and mopey so they probably don't really notice anything out of the ordinary.

This was so close to April that I thought this was going to be an April fools joke. (You should do one.)

But, I'm glad this was another quality chapter that had so much detail that we can discuss for hours.

Jack's deception of his parents is so true! While I wasn't that creative to warm myself up to make my body that hot, I would do a fake cough, or pretend to be asleep and trick my parents here and there. Good times.

I feel for Jack waiting for Penny's message. I once met a girl that I didn't express my love to, but I had her number and we would talk and soon, she didn't respond anymore. When a holiday came around, I would say "Happy (holiday)" and she still didn't respond. All these questions formed in my head, did she get a new phone, lost my number, didn't want to start a conversation, or what.

Penny has 1 pic on social media. That makes meeting her in person more special becuase or how little she is portrayed online. For Caitlin, her online page deceives everyone by thinking she is a super fun girl. And she probably is, but not for Jack. What he saw online contradicted what he faced with her in person.

It's 7, and it's too late for a message? Wow, people text me up to midnight.

That shower must have felt good. Wash away the pain, the dirt and the filth that his body has gone through. He can cleanse his body of that experience and start living a new chapter of his life.

I was wondering when Jack said he was looking for online videos, if maybe he found like a Caitlin sex-tape or soemthing. Hear me out. What if Caitlin was recording her scene with Jack on her bed and uploaded it secretly and Jack somehow stumbles on it. The video hurts Jack and the comments are even worse. Jack reads about people wishing to be in Jack's position and the worst part is Cailtin responding that she can have sessions with them and Jack is scared thinking that Caitlin is going to bring them to hell and those people won't be as lucky as they think they will be. (Plot twist maybe?)

The last few paragraphs have stumped me. What are you hinting at with this Caitlin is a year older stuff? I know some other readers might understand and get this hint, but I really want to figure it out. Intriguing.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey TomSpeedy, thanks for the review!

Probably the first chapter not filled with drama. Makes me miss it a bit.

If I was Jack, let Penny walk in front so i can watch her all the way. At least, Jack is not desperate for Penny. Sometimes in stories like this, the Beta will fall down in front of the Alpha girl and let her fall on him and the Beta guy enjoys feeling her weight on him.

Jack should have ordered the glasses by phone so he could have gotten them sooner. It sounds like he visits this place often, so he should know how it operates.

Since they both are eating from the same sandwich, will Jack eat one end, and Penny the other, and their lips meet in the middle? Will Penny feed Jack like he is a child?

Also, I wonder why Penny chose this Beta school. Probably had something to do with their past.

I can't wait for the next chapter!