I would love to be in the clutches of Julianne as well.

I know it's unlikely, but will Tom ever end up with Julianna?

He is with Nancy right now, and it would be awesome if Julianne just snatches him up.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

So, what exactly was the game? It sounded like Ajet had to start from the arm of the couch and get somewhere by also dodging Julianne's fingers. Otherwise, I was kinda confused and couldnt tell if Ajet actually made it or not. Ajet was told the rules, but not me. lol

Ah, now Jane has Ajet, and Julianne has Cary. Marie still has Jimmy and Samuel, but they are exhausted. They should be rested by now though.

When Jane was desciribing the consequences of the game, she made spending time with Julianne as the punishment if Ajet fails at the game. It seemed as though Jane knew that Julianne was more crueler than her. I wonder how Jane knew that, becuase I would love to listen to that discussion.

At one point, Marie said that if Jane and Julianne wanted to use them as slaves, go ahead. However, when Ajet was stuck in Julianne's thighs, Marie found that unnacceptable and wanted Julianne to stop. Those two scenes contradict each other, unless Marie happened to change her mind.

In addition, when Jane was telling Ajet about the punishment of staying with Julianne, Jane said that "he had to do whatever she says, or else." I really want to know what is the 'or else' part becuase I think Julianne has the most humiliating tactics of tormenting these guys. Of course, she is sexy, but in reality to the men, Im not sure what is worse than being tied to a pair of painties and being worn 24/7.

Anyway, Im glad Julianne has a tiny now. Things are starting to heat up and I cant wait for the next chapter!

Ha! There is no way that Julianna would just kill her toy just like that!

She just got him from Marie.

I believe that she will step over him, like he is below the arch of her shoe, so he still lives, but gets quite a scare.

I liked the tickling concept, becuase of how much cruelty and control Julianna has. It really makes her queen of torture.

Captain Jim's torture was freaking sexy though, and this wasnt. So, This torture has to be paired up with other things. I just cant believe that Julianna would finish Cary like that when there are many other things to do before he dies.

Julianna was watching Jane torment Ajet, and she was getting horny. I didnt expect a tickling chapter, but I hope its like a setup for something else.

Orrrr!!! Perhaps this is a way that Julianna will find a new tiny! Maybe she does kill Cary! Maybe she finds a little tiny called Tom, hehe.

Otherwise, I find no other reason for her to kill Cary. Jane will probably be dissapointed. Marie will be angry.

My guess is that she just scares him and doesnt kill him. She loves to torment, not kill. She even spared Capt. Jimmy's life.

Nice try Wildcatman, but I believe Cary lives. The real fun begins next chapter. I cant wait!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  After this next chapter, we'll check back in with Major Tom and see how he's holding out!  :`)

Wow, I cant believe I didnt review this chapter. I must have skimmed over it while looking at the most recent section.

Sofia sounds very sexy, but she sounds like one of those girls that acts tough around friends and then reveals her true self to certain people as a nice and caring person.

Nancy so far gave me the best punishment with her panties. Sofia seems to be just teasing me so I expect something more interesting later.

Also, why was the first half of this chapter a staring contest? lol. I know it was just your vivid descriptions making the chapter long, but it also felt like they were staring at each other for a long time as well.

I hope the next chapter is not my last, the giantess are great and I would love to see Tom spend time with other people as well. I would rather die to an adult rather than a teen, but who knows, maybe in this story, the teens just love me.

Hoping for the next chapter soon, unless maybe you were waiting for my review first....

Anyway, I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Well, I did start to think that 'maybe', I had gone a little too far, with Sofia's insulting remarks,... However, I assumed that your skin was tougher than that!  Ha!  I was kinda, holding up, and waiting for you... since you were the central charactor. 

If I had to grade your chapter, I would give it an A.

I think the hardest part in this story is trying to get some background on each character since there are so many of them.

The details of Missy's life was very well explained. Obviously you put a lot of effort into this one.

Nice teaser; leather boots, a whip. Kinda read resembles a mistress.......(lightbulb appears)

I wonder if she is into bondage. She could tie me up anyday.

I'm curious where you are going with all this film stuff. I guess I will find out later.

Also, I love the description you gave Missy. A shy but confident girl. Also a grad student. Could it get any better!

I can't wait til we return to Missy and Tom!

Of course, Zena and Max hadn't been seen for a long time. So I can see why they are next.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom,... Yeh, this one was slightly rushed.  I could have made it much longer, and gone into more detail. 

Of course Max will survive! That's why Tina is showing up so there will be even more fun later.

I completely forgot who Tina was. I thought she was a new character at first, but then you mentioned the time when someone noticed Max's boots. Now it's making sense.

Max seems to love her pussy. He should be sent to Julianna. Haha. That might change his mind.

Tina, you said is a 16 year old cheerleader. Hmm, if I had to choose which giantess is better, I would go with Zena. First, you said Zena was 30 years old and has an atletic body like Tina. Second, the maturity level. I think Zena has to teach a few things to Tina.

And what happens when Tina comes over? Hmm. Tina obviously knows that Zena has a tiny, so maybe Zena should start showing how fun it is before Tina even begins to question Zena.

Zena could hug Tina when they meet, and Zena just slides her hand into Tina's panties and drops Max in. Tina May be shocked, but a little movement from Max and boom, Tina likes it.

Or Zena welcomes Tina in, and she introduces Max slowly and not all at once. Then Zena begins 'showing' Tina how fun Max can be.

I can't wait for the next chapter! If you run out of ideas, you can always switch to Julianne and Cary, or Jane and her tiny. I'm there's lots of ideas for them.

Author's Response:

Tina is 21, she's just short, and very petite,... short, dark hair and big brown eyes.  She's doing her college intership at the T.V. station, working with Zena Maxwell exclusively, as her camera person and personal assistant.  She likes to wear those skin tight stretch pants, and Zena teases her about them,... calling them, her 'Fart Pants'...

Seriously? Im sure Indian kids know what an xbox is and how to pronounce an xbox.

I even know an Indian friend who's Dad works in microsoft.

Those stereotypes have happened a long time ago, and it is only protrayed stereotypically in movies and stories like this. Not anymore in real life. You could do better than that.

As for the story, it wasnt really funny in my opinion.

I hope it gets improved in the next chapter.

Very good story. Brutal ending.

Like what Wildcat said, A friends mom, a neighbor's mom, his girlfriends mom would have been a better idea. (Its just my opinion.)

I actually enjoyed it a bit better when I imagined that this college kid was a burglar, and he thought there was something valuable in the basement.

Anyway, a great first story. Im a big MILF fan, but not with their own mother kind of story.

Hope you write more wonderful stories. :)

Author's Response:

You're just not into the family aspect i take it? I actually just posted a story about an unaware giantess gf and her mom. There's a little family stuff in it since the gf's brother shrinks with the bf but I think you'd like it.

Haha. How does Marie even live her life in college with that demeanor? Its hilarious, I like it.

Anyway, another great chapter.

I really want this situation to happen. I want Andy to be shrunk, then shink again, and again, until he is at the tiniest level. Then I want Carla to dominate him as a full sized person.

That would be awesome.

Little Sherri hiding her antics, I love it. She will probably have her way with all of them in the end anyway.

I try to categorize everyone by size preference so I can anticipate their reactions.

People that want to be small
-Jerry, Andy, Marie.

People that want to be big
-Paul, Vera, Carla, Dale, (i think Hailey too).

The next chapter will be a bit more spiced up, dont you think? Perhaps a little fun with some people?

Well, you already know so I will wait. Cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking it so far! Things will get "spiced up" soon, but as I said with these long-form stories I tend to ramp up to that slowly.

I think Vera's team will win. Then Paul will shrink and Vera will find his weakness.

Also, dale will grow and the tables will turn and he will make fun of Paul.

In addition, this water gun/easter egg thing seems fun. Little Marie is gonna spray everyone for fun. Wait no, i take that back. Bettey and Sherri will have their own swuirt guns and secretly squirt from long distance, freezing the comtestants. Thats my prediction.

As for the sizes in jeapordy part, I think that means that the losing group are the only ones whose names can be voted on in those 3 boxes. So of the four, one will enlarge, one will shrink, and one will get blocked.

You impressed me Benton. By the time i began reading chapter 4, chapter 5 was already out.

I love it! I cant wait for the results of this competition!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it! You'll see which of your predictions come true soon.