I think the mother going on a power trip is less farfetched than her son being shrunken.  I mean, IRL there are abusive parents, sexually, physically, emotionally, whatever.

It's okay to get a little crazy with it sometimes.  These stories are about X happening.  What would it feel like -if- you shrank and -if- your mother turned into this sexually charged giantess who no longer saw her saw as a person but as a toy or less.

Of course, I'm sure we don't think of our own mothers when we read these things.  We're thinking of pretty women. :D 

Anyways, enjoying the read. 

 I had a place to be but wanted to finish writing the story, so after Lindsey discovers the main character, it gets a bit rushed.

I want to go back and polish the ending a little bit more, then I might add an alternate ending or two if there's any interest in that.

Lemme know! 

Great writing. Everything is set up, I'm so impatiently eager for the next chapter.

>:) 

Loving it so far.

I really like the unaware stuff too.

As for things I'd like to see? I really like the close calls. The parts where "Oh my god, she noticed me, hey!" only she didn't at all and things get worse. I like a smidgeon of hope, then a bombardment of not-quite-hopelessness. Close calls and the like.

Also, however you could work it in, a huuuge fan of soft vore. No crunch, no gore, no ending a good story prematurely, but just enough mix of pleasure, pain and fear to be exciting.

 Howdy.

  I don't remember where, exactly, but I thought I had read that your fantasy works were less popular than the others?

  Personally, I love the fantasy stuff, but the ones I usually read just don't have the things I'm interested in. I dunno. Mostly size difference. I like the real tiny stuff.

And this one? This series is one of my favorites. I really like it a lot. The Pixie was great, but this last chapter you added? Perfect. I would -hope- for our hero to experience that kind of shrink spell again, buuuut once may have been enough.

I don't usually write reviews. Heck, I've started a handful of stories and then just stopped. Just get too into my head and quit.

Anyways, love this story, hope it keeps going for a long time. Thanks for writing it!

I don't wanna flood your reviews or anything, but this is still my favorite story on the website. I'd read a whole series about these adventures.

This last chapter? Awesome. >:)

I really love the idea of the succubus bringing out these negative emotions in everyone. I mean, obviously most people come to these sites for the smut, but it's just so much better with real stories and changing perspectives.

Dude, soon as I see a new chapter, I pop it open immediately. Great writing, wonderful characters. Love it.

Great story.

Any time a story has that initial shrunken recognition, I get chills. This guy looking up, realizing dawning on him, it just takes me there, you know?

I also really appreciate that he isn't perverted. This isn't some guy stammering about foot worship, this isn't him going, 'Boy oh boy, I wish that beautiful girl would give me attention.'

It's a someone not wanting this to happen, but having to deal with the consequences anyways.

Great writing! :D