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Time-Out 6: Power Play by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 244]
Summary:

Scott Stevens, shrunken and incarcerated in his own home, faces dire consequences for his crimes in the hands (and shoes) of his giant family and acquaintances.  All the while, his mother Judy is hard at work on her senatorial campaign, and as usual has some conniving tricks in store.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Couples , Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70647 Read Count: 348359
[Report This] Published: July 15 2014 Updated: February 15 2015
Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed
Date: February 12 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

Will it just be Scott and Judy in the last chapter? 



Author's Response:

Essentially, yes, though one other character will appear tangentially.

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Date: February 11 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: For the Good

Speaking of Nancy,  any chance we'll see what Judy will do to Nancy so she doesn't take advantage of Scott again in the last chapter?



Author's Response:

That's probably not something that will be shown, as in all likelihood it'll just be a conversation between the women. However Judy is confident, and rightly so, that she can convince Nancy to keep things PG-13 with Scott from now on.

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Date: February 11 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: For the Good

Man, it's kinda hard to read Judy.  I do believe she's upset over what Nancy did and i look forward to see how she makes sure Nancy never does it again.  But at the same time,  the way she treated Scott in this chapter. ..

Though this chapter did confirm to me that part of her motivation is making sure her "little boy" stays with her forever. 

Also,  I'm guessing Maggie told Judy about Nancy? 

 

Looking forward to the next chapter! 

 



Author's Response:

She definitely wants Scott to stay in her grasp for the foreseeable future, though not necessarily forever, as we may see in future stories. Judy has a plan here, for sure. And yes, Maggie told Judy about Nancy.

Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: February 04 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions

This does beg the question,  what is the line Maggie won't cross?  Obviously she wouldn't do what Nancy did.



Author's Response:

You're right that Maggie definitely wouldn't do what Nancy did. The line is intentionally unclear, but it probably exists wherever Maggie believes she's doing actual, lasting harm. Most of what she's done to Scott she views as temporary punishment for his sins, and feels justified in it. When she sees him at his lowest, though, she begins to realize the kind of impact that vulnerability is having.

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Date: January 30 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Nancy Gets Her Way

Nancy probably should hope Judy doesn't find out about this. What she did to Scott might certainly count as going too far.

 

It's certainly worse than anything Judy or Maggie have done. 



Author's Response:

Definitely safe to say this is the most extreme thing to happen to Scott yet. Nancy's actions will indeed become known though.

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Date: July 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

Two questions:

Will we ever see Judy shrink Maggie? Previous stories have implied she has been shrunk too.

And since we know Judy does care for her son even if she likes shrinking with him, what's the line she wouldn't cross and what are the guidelines and limits she gives Maggie when having her fun with Scott?

I really enjoy this series, l

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Date: December 27 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Family Politics

Another great chapter,  looking forward to Nancy getting her fun with Scott and for to see what's in store for Scott at the museum. 

Also, i really hope Judy's motherly affection to Scott isn't all an act.  I like thinking that while she likes having fun with Scott at this size, she does still care for his well being. 

Helps differentiate her from Maggie. 

Anyway,  looking forward to the next chapter, the museum sounds like it's going to be fun.

 



Author's Response:

It's fair to say that Judy doesn't want Scott physically harmed, though of course that doesn't mean she can't also strategically place affection to get what she wants at the same time.

Judy certainly is very different from Maggie in some key ways; hopefully by the end of this story, those will be even clearer. Thanks for reading/reviewing!

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Date: December 07 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Looking Up

Another great chapter and i hope we see more of libby soon,  I'm starting to like her and Scott as a paring. It's also starting to seem like she's planning on taking Scott away from there. Or at least she's thinking it.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Libby probably has considered the possibility of trying to save Scott, though she's also aware that there are a limited number of people that want to help him, so she'd be more easily incriminated.

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Date: November 13 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Judy to the Rescue

Any chance we'll see Judy petting/massaging Scott again? Maybe as a treat for a job well done? He seems to enjoy it.



Author's Response:

There will be a bit more of that later on, though maybe not so much in Scott's favor.

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Date: November 12 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Unfortunate Discovery

It seems like Maggie's on thin ice and doesn't even realize it. I hope we see Judy using the PMRD on Maggie soon.

Speaking of Judy, it seems like she's starting to realize that Maggie is a little too interested in her brother lately and might go to far. I mean, if she feels the need to threaten her with the PMRD. Am i reading that right?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. We won't see Maggie affected by the PMRD just yet, though; Judy is actually a bit less concerned about how her children are interacting than she seemed to let on there.

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Date: October 23 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: A Familiar Face

Was it Kyle that left the remote for Scott, or did Judy or Maggie just accidentally left it there?



Author's Response:

More than likely, the remote was just left there accidentally.  Maggie's the only one who intentionally places it anywhere while thinking of Scott.

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Date: September 21 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions

Speaking of Kyle, is there any chance he'll soften up his brother? I'd almost say that his brother giving him the cold shoulder bothers Scott more than what Judy and Maggie do. Almost. 



Author's Response:

You're right that it hurts Scott more that Kyle treats him like this, because Maggie and Judy have always been rough, but his kid brother had been an ally before.  There is a definite chance of Kyle starting to come around, though, and probably later on in this story, in fact...

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Date: September 21 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions

Another great chapter. Though I gotta say part of me hopes that Kyle will get the shrink punishment too so he can better understand what his brother goes through. He seems to be needlessly rude to him.

Maggie too, but her getting shrunk was suggested already.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  We will definitely see Kyle reduced in size at some point, though not in this particular story.  He's just deeply embittered towards Scott because he feels betrayed.

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Date: August 01 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Safety First

Another great chapter. Going by her question, i take it Maggie was concerned and maybe worried when she found him knocked out? 

 



Author's Response:

She was concerned, although at least partially because she knows the consequences would probably be dire for her if she permanently harmed him.

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Date: July 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

Two questions:

Will we ever see Judy shrink Maggie? Previous stories have implied she has been shrunk too.

And since we know Judy does care for her son even if she likes shrinking with him, what's the line she wouldn't cross and what are the guidelines and limits she gives Maggie when having her fun with Scott?

I really enjoy this series, l look forward to future chapters!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Maggie has actually not been shrunken by Judy before (for a fairly specific reason), though I can't say it won't happen at some point down the road. Judy's limits generally revolve around trying to keep Scott from being permanently harmed, hence why she doesn't want Maggie wearing him during games, though she has no problem with him being humiliated beyond belief if he's not being physically injured by it.

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Date: February 03 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions

A very heartwarming chapter, it was nice to Maggie showing empathy.  She's obviously not happy with Nancy, so the question is, will Maggie tell Judy what Nancy did or will Maggie take matters into her own hands to make sure Nancy never rapes Scott again? 

Looking forward to Ella's return and what she might think. 

 

I also look forward to see if Judy thinks Nancy has gone too far. 



Author's Response:

Maggie will definitely make sure something is done about Nancy.

Judy's got plenty of opinions about the events of this day that will be shown in the final chapters.

Like Mother, Like Daughter by Jacksmith Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

A shrunken teen, newly on house arrest, finds himself underfoot when his mother decides to instruct his younger sister on how to lovingly yet firmly handle him.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Oversight
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6049 Read Count: 57687
[Report This] Published: March 01 2015 Updated: March 09 2015
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Date: March 09 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great story,  i really enjoyed it and hope we see these characters again.  I was a little confused why Joy didn't realize that he couldn't fight back because she was putting too much pressure on him though. 

 

And for next time, i wouldn't mind if it was something mundane like helping clean her sister's feet.



Author's Response:

Thanks much. I will probably bring the characters back again, especially since they fit well into short stories like this. And Joy was just being a little too thorough to fully realize.

That may well be a situation explored in any future stuff with these characters.

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Date: March 09 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I also wouldn't mind seeing Mark enjoying himself in one of his activities with his mom or sister.  They don't seem to want to scare him after all.



Author's Response:

"Enjoyment" may be tough since he'd rather not be shrunken, though he'll probably be a happier camper in a future installment as long as people aren't standing on him the whole time.

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Date: March 01 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Joy seems nicer than Judy at least. The mothers in this universe confuse me though,  when it comes to weather they care for their kids i mean. 

 

Joy does seem more loving so far though. 



Author's Response:

Joy actually does care for her kids and genuinely puts them first, so there is a definite difference from Judy, even if her methods are unorthodox.

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Date: March 05 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Seeing as he's not being crushed,  does he have super endurance while tiny? I mean,  even Scott Has Gotten Bruised.



Author's Response:

No super endurance. Becky's still not putting her full weight on him, just steadily adding pressure. Scott usually has someone actually standing on him.

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