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Tom's Story by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1033]
Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2407415
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
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Date: July 09 2016 Title: Chapter 106: Four's a Crowd

Miss Hardwood isn't very truthful, didn't Tom get stuck in her vagina at one point and almost suffocated?  Still, at least Miss Hardwood is more understanding than Lina.

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Date: June 26 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

Looks like things have become far more complicated for Lina. 



Author's Response:

Absolutely but Lina is still very much in the game...

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Date: June 27 2016 Title: Chapter 103: Girl, You’ll Be a Woman Soon

Sounds like Lina didn't know how bad things were between Tom and Janine. I mean, i think she knew Janine was rough, but not that rough. 



Author's Response:

Eye opening to say the least...

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Date: June 27 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy : That's if Tom is well enough for a round two though. 



Author's Response:

Come on it's Tom...

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Date: June 29 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

Raphaella seems to determinedto be stopped. Honestly, i hope Tom and his mother do reunite. I want to see her mommying and fussing over the small boy.

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Date: June 30 2016 Title: Chapter 104: Tess

I can't blame Tess and by the sound of it, neither can Cassidy. Tom is constantly in danger and he clearly can't take care of himself. 

Hell, even Lina couldn't put up much of an argument with Tom in the state he currently is. I can't tell of Lina is worried about Tom's health though. 

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Date: June 30 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

I also hope we see miss Addison one last time. 

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Date: June 30 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy: Except at this point it's clear Tom doesn't know what's good for him. He's like an addict that thinks they can handle it, but they obviously can't. 

Regardless of what you think of her, Tess is in the right here and the the only one that cares for Tom well being 100%. Especially since if Lina has her way, Raphaella will never see her son again and Tess will never see her brother. 

 

@Carycomic: Problem with that is that Lina wouldn't just kidnap someone and she doesn't know Raphaella's sister has Tom's shrunken Grandpa with her. 

 

Why are you making Lina into a bad guy anyway? When in reality there are ways she could resolve it amicably with Raphaella. 

Like you know, coming to some sort of compromise with Raphaella. That seems far more in character than deciding to just kidnap someone. 

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed
Date: June 30 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy: I also don't want her to be overturned because i really want to see some Mother-Son bonding. 

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed
Date: June 30 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy: That's a bit of a reach, Raphaella is clearly not abusive and clearly cares for her son.

 

You also forget that Tess did want to inform her mother from the start, remember?  But Tom talked her out of it. So Tess didn't, even though she clearly wanted to. 

She'stelling her now because it has become obvious that her instincts were proven right, Tess probably wishes she had told Raphaella from the start. 



Author's Response:

Bingo!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed
Date: June 30 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

@TomSeedy And Tom clearly doesn't know what he's saying, or he wouldn't be as beat up as he is now. Even Cassidy said Tom is in pretty bad shape. 

 

Even Cassidy is agreeing with Tess in this chapter. 



Author's Response:

More dialogue to come I'm afraid...

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed
Date: July 01 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy: I don't know, i think Raphaella and Lina could work something out. I mean, as long as Tom isn't badly hurt, it's always possible that Raphaella would let Tom have his fun. 

Though they would have to keep the Jessica incident to themselves. 



Author's Response:

And some of Janine's less than mutually rewarding antics...

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed
Date: August 10 2016 Title: Chapter 114: Law Lady

Lina is a little delusional if Raphaella would just agree to just give away her only son just like that. She also is not aware that Raphaella already knows.

 

On a different note, i hope we see miss Addison again soon. 

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Date: September 06 2017 Title: Chapter 180: Epilogue

Not sure if i want Tess to shrink or for Tess to shrink Samira, either way i love how Tess ended up doing what her grandfather couldn't. 

 

And I do hope we get a shrinking girl if there's a continuation and hopefully more Miss Addison :p. Sorry, couldn't help ask one last time.

Great epilogue to a great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for playing along as this thing took on a life all of its own!

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Date: December 02 2016 Title: Chapter 140: When the student is ready, the teacher shall appear

Sounds like Miss Hardwood isn't as nice as we think she is if she was thinking of kidnapping Tom. Though ultimately she didn't to it ,  just kept him for herself for a bit.

 

Little sad though , i thought by the title two teachers would be involved . 



Author's Response:

I never thought of that, however when I read it from your POV it made sense. In my mind was the song Teacher by .38 special.

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Date: August 04 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

I hope we get to see Miss Addison again before this is all over. I really wish you had used her more.

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Date: August 21 2017 Title: Chapter 179: Back to School Blues

Love It! I'm happy Tom and Addison finally got some closure.  I still wish she was used more, but I'm glad with how it ended here.



Author's Response:

You have been a champion for Miss Addison for ages now and their parting was brutal with Janine's bullying. I wanted to show Tom was above it and wanted to validate her feelings even if she is a little off center.

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Date: November 10 2016 Title: Chapter 135: From Russia with Love

Awwwww, i was hoping Miss Addison would find him. 



Author's Response:

I get the feel there were a whole bunch of different ladies people would like to have found Tom, now that he's little again, who knows...

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Date: August 19 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

I hope you'll come back to these characters ,especially since Tom's sis fixed the machine.

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Date: April 28 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

I don't know if you'll read this Duggernaut, but i just want you to know i still enjoy this story. I hope you are well.

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