Now this. This is the level of quality all giantess fiction should strive for. Not just smut for smut's sake, there's a real story here. Shift how the horrors Melanie inflicts are presented and this becomes a really brutal horror story, and I mean that in the best way. Melanie as a character is already so horrifying, that a college girl could be so broken and so twisted that her obsession could push her to do such terrible (yet extremely sexy) things. And how she developed from being a nervous doormat to becoming empowered and letting the power (arguably rightfully) go to her head was so fascinating. Not to mention that you gave her a totally believeable cause for being the way she is. A family teaching her toxic lust and obsession as love fits perfectly for a Yandere character, and most Yandere in fiction that I know of don't have that, they were just born that way which is so lazy!

As for Adrian, I suppose I should have seen her ending turn coming. She certainly didn't start the story being willing to enslave tiny women for her own sadistic sexual pleasure (unless I forgot about a moment establishing her as a petty, vindictive person) but combine being the object of adoration by a cruel goddess for weeks with being forced to kill someone, then being forced to compromise your morals even further to even have a chance at returning to normal, anyone would lose their empathy in this situation. I do have to wonder if Melanie spiked the cure somehow to make sure Adrian would fall in love with her once she returned to normal, but that'd be way less interesting from a character arc perspective.

Also, I love that Nicky, once in a non-abusive situation, is shown willingly remaining tiny. Gentle giantess stories feel rather hard to come by, and Juniper, while not getting a ton of focus, was a fun character and perfect for that style. Like, of course a stoner would be totally chill being the tiny buddy of a friendly drug dealer. I'd love more fluffy stories about Juniper and Nicky's misadventures. In the end, Nicky was really the only one to come out unscathed and likely happier than before being kidnapped. Scarlet accidently did her a favor! XD

Speaking of the other victims, having so many different reactions and perspectives made the story constantly engaging, and they all were always believable. Then Paige. What a great, climactic antagonist for Melanie (yes, I'm claiming Melanie is Thanos levels of a good villain). At a certain point I stopped reading for the smut and just read for the story, I mean that sincerely. You crafted an immensly engaging narrative and always kept the plot moving but character focused. So many hard choices made from all the characters, it was genuinely entertaining likely even without the smut.

All-in-all, this is an amazing story and I definetly plan on reading more of your work!