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Alice in Wonderland Growth Adventures by Jim1989 Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

A series of one-shots based off of Disney's Alice in Wonderland (1951).  Each one-shot is based off of one of the shrink/growth scenes in the film.  This is merely a hypothetical of how each scene might play out under different circumstances.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Object, Mature (40-49), Crush, Destruction, Gentle, Growing Woman, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35684 Read Count: 49840
[Report This] Published: April 12 2021 Updated: June 21 2021
Reviewer: tostitos Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 12 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

I was hoping someone who knew their way around the keyboard and had a way with words would make such a story. The ever present "what ifs" that I entertained when I saw the movie now being put to print.
Thanks for trying your hand at this and I do hope you do manage the rest/more.

It was faithful up until this version of Alice opted to not cry an outright pool and still stayed within the voices of the characters afterward. I was entertained by the descriptions and how Alice tried to make amends.

Though the Doorknob can't very well see the world from his newfound position tucked away. I would think he would be on her shoe like a buckle or in her hair in her bow or tied somehow. The shoe would jostle though, and the crown of her head would just afford him a view of the sky - which is still more than the walls and ceiling and floor he was bound to.

 



Author's Response:

It was something of a gamble from the point Alice became a giant.  I gave it a thought over about what might happen if she ate more than one "Eat Me" cake in this scene.  Given the circumstance of her growth, the cake box would be somewhere in front of her, given what was seen in the film, so if she simply searched for it and had another cake, what might possibly happen?  Given that I preferred a large Alice compared to a small one, I tried to end this one-shot with her staying a giant (in this case a bigger giant).

As for the Doorknob, I tried to figure what to do with him once Alice outgrew the hallway.  Given her propensity to apologize when she believes she has done wrong, I figured she would bring him along as a companion of sorts to make up for her growth.  Since she has placed other items in her apron in the Disney film, I figured that would be an easy enough place to store him on her journey.

Thanks for the enouragement and I'll see what I can come up with in future chapters.

Reviewer: tostitos Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 17 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: White Rabbit's House Episode

The iconic scene.
Of the various ways that depict how Alice grows in the Rabbit's house across iterations this one always sticks with me. Thanks for doing it justice, and for keeping the growth growing.

The Rabbit would be far more hesitant to go along with the now bigger Alice, I feel. It could just be the spectacle through his spectacles, but I do like how the rationale is that he can still make it to the Queen to fulfill his duties if he humors the giant.
The Doorknob seemed like the more levelheaded individual through this animated version so I do see him more readily joining up. And the Dodo is zany enough to go along. Bill just flat out being exhausted by his trip and resting along was a good fit. I am glad he is alright all things considered!

The mention of her chest filling and her outfit shrinking was different, no such emphasis was made in the previous chapter. Was this going to have some additional roll here or possible prep for a setup for a future chapter preparing the reader for other things that can happen to Alice?



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the course of events I laid out for the White Rabbit, the Dodo and Bill the Lizard.  I prefer happy endings as opposed to tragic ones in the stories I create and the ones I read.  As far as Alice's physical developments regarding her figure, it was somewhat spur of the moment as I was typing it out.  I was trying to make her appear more sexy and majestic as she grew, though I didn't want to go too far into X-rated territory with the descriptions as I was writing it.  I was aiming for a sort of benevolent goddess in her overall character, powerful but gentle all the same.

Sorry to get your hopes up, but each of these chapters is a one-shot, so there won't be any interconnection between them.  Basically imagine watching the 1951 film as it is, then imagine a fork in the narrative road, so to speak.  I like to put a lot of detail into the growth process for Alice, then figure where the story will take off once she increases in size while maintaining her overall character.  That was my intention with this little project.  Hopefully, that won't turn you off to the remaining chapters once I've posted them.

In any case, I appreciate that you enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: tostitos Signed
Date: June 21 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Trial Episode

Definitely an improvement to the courtroom scene! There's also something very splendid about giant Alice walking off on top of the land at the end of each chapter and this joins the rest in that goodness PLUS has that benefit of the ending.

Daydreams into reality. Cheshire Cat is a gentleman and a scholar, and so are you. I hope time and energy can come to you and you'll be able to do more projects in the future.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the growth sequence in this chapter.  I figured I would have Alice grow the most at the grand finale, and I also wanted her to stay a giant after returning from Wonderland.  While it certainly was a stretch, I ended up having the Cheshire Cat be the one to serve as a sort of deus ex machina to Alice's dilemma of returning home.  Thought he had enough mystery to his character to be able to pull something off like what I ended up writing in the closing part of the chapter.

Overall, I'm glad you've enjoyed this project of mine.  Not sure when I'll have the drive for another one, but I've got some ideas brainstorming for now.  Until then...

Not so Small Vacation by ReclaimerChief17, Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Two girls want to take a break from their stressful everyday lives. However, what happens when their trip takes a drastic and mysterious turn and they end up in a world not like the one they are used to? Journey with Liz and Vicky as they try to figure out what is going on and whether they can make it back to their world!

**Gullivera-type story**


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples, Destruction, Feet, Gentle, Lesbians, New World Order, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30087 Read Count: 29650
[Report This] Published: December 01 2021 Updated: February 28 2022
Reviewer: tostitos Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 01 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This looks promising and is definitely a welcomed sight to see on this site. Guess they are skipping along on the Gulliver-a type of start with no bondage, all limbs are free and ready for action.
With two of them this will also help the dynamics among their encounters.
I hope the two of you can make magic with the two of these lasses.



Author's Response:

Thanks man! Reviews always help motivate us to keep going :) 

Mega Laetitia by alexg Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

This tale follows the adventures of one young woman living a boring, lonely life in the middle of a typical American city. But all that is about to change, as she becomes very, very big and explores what it means to be a giantess in our tiny world.

A typical story of a giantess enjoying herself while destroying the city, inspired by classic stories from the turn of the millennium.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Destruction, Footwear, Growing Woman, Insertion, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46564 Read Count: 119496
[Report This] Published: January 01 2022 Updated: April 05 2024
Reviewer: tostitos Signed
Date: January 02 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Trouble With Work

A classic setup with all the ingredients in place for the first chapter.
I look forward to all those tags coming into play.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I look forward to much more as well.

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