Penname: mikey31 [Contact] Real name: mike
Member Since: December 18 2014
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Categories: Adventure, Feet, Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4 Read Count: 46966
[Report This] Published: July 25 2013 Updated: February 15 2014
Reviewer: mikey31 Signed
Date: December 18 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 10

Incredible story!  I only read it just now.  The characters seem so real, and my favorite relationship is between Lydia and Ethan.  I'd love to read more of their relationship--really focusing on that please.

Theirs is really a unique relationship.  You managed to make Lydia morally pure and good, while simultaneously having her dominate Ethan as her pet, due to the culture of her world.  Very interesting scenario. :)

It'd be awesome if Lydia introduced Ethan to her cleavage, while still having Ethan determined to be independent and equal, with the goal of returning to his own world.  Please continue this one.

You wrote Lydia as very attractive character...sort of a maternal goddess figure with a playful, teasing form of superiority.

Summary:

Sam, a 17 year old cocky student, finds himself shrunk down in school one day through a bizzare turn of events. He soon finds himself at the mercy of his friends and schoolmates, and has to make difficult decisions for his every crucial move as old friendships rekindle and new adversities unfold.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Butt, Adventure, Body Exploration, Couples , Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67964 Read Count: 339267
[Report This] Published: June 09 2014 Updated: March 30 2018
Reviewer: mikey31 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Getting Wet

Both stories are excellent and well-written.  I especially like the Tina/Suzanne route, as I like the sexual nature of it.  I like the whole revenge theme where Tina is his ex and he dumped her, and now Sam is helpless in her possession.

I'm excited about Suzanne coming over to Tina's--it's the best thing that could happen to the reader. :)  All I can think about is how awesome Sam's last encounter with Suzanne was--down on the the board game, and then he's dwarfed between her pink socks, and she smiles down at him.  Awesome!  There's so much potential in this Tina/Suzanne/Sam threesome.  And it need not just be physical.  I really enjoy the dialogue you write, emphaszing their size and power differences--like Suzanne did simply by standing over Sam.  Btw, I just started reading this story a few days ago.

If you're unsure of what to write... a creative game played by the three of them is a possibility--but write whatever you want.  Really enjoying it.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the feedback, I'm glad you like it :D

Yes I myself like those parts too! (the ones that imply just how small Sam really is compared to them)

I encourage you t read my other story as well (tough it's not finished) if you enjoy a more violent theme.

A game sounds like fun, I'll certainly consider it if it fits well in the story, thanks!

Our Desires by Zaphe Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Edward is thrown into a life after making a wish of his ultimate desire with a supernatural being. They explore their desires both known and unknown, while traveling around the world.
Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1043 Read Count: 4528
[Report This] Published: December 30 2014 Updated: December 30 2014
Reviewer: mikey31 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07 2015 Title: Chapter 1: My True Desire

This is the best opening I've ever read to a story, and I've read at least a hundred on this site.  Please continue and have some cleavage or breasts in the story, as it fits with your own personal story direction.

Here are some things I found great:

I love her name... perfect.  I liked your line: "To put it plainly, she was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen."

Ka'ano'i has a sexy personality from just a couple pages+, and I love how she is an exotic, powerful being.

It's also awesome how she grants specifically one *sexual* wish.  And Edward should be commended for his quick thinking, and asking to be her shrunken pet.

And Ka'ano'i gave Edward fair warning, before granting his wish, that their new relationship would not be one of equals. :)

Also, noted how you ended with saying it was a flash of *warm* light... it's a sort of loving, protective form of domination with a kinky, sexual twist.  Gotta love it.

Please continue this one.  Thank you.