Reviewer: AprilJoinerWeb Signed
September 03 2016
Chapter 1: Wake up bro!
This story is so good I wish I didn't have to stop reading! I like the unaware stuff! Definitely have to keep some of that in the future chapters. Especially when they were in the lingerie store and when Ricky was glued to her panties. You should do some unaware stuff at the school. Either with teachers or students in the classroom, toilet, gym, etc. Maybe they get seperated. You're the expert and you definitely need to write more often :)
Oh my, could this be a female here? I saw your name is April Joiner so I'm assuming you are a female?
I only freak out because I haven't actually met a girl that is interested in this fetish and I WANT TO MEET ONE SO BAD! xD I am by no means an expert but thank you so much for your kind words. I'll defintiely try and incorporate more unaware stuff. If not in this story, then any others I plan to write for sure. I may dedicate one completely to unaware. Like maybe a short story. Beacuse you wanna know a little secret? Unaware stuff is like my favorite. It's probably the one thing that drove me to attempt writing. I am so happy with the amount of Love and support I am getting from everyone that has read my story so far. When I was writing the first few chapters, and having to make revisions, and at one point I even changed an entire chapter to make it better. I was so nervous because I was wanting to make something everyone will enjoy and Love and make something for everyone. Not just ass guys (like me) but also for unaware, feet, and even the super kinky stuff while also trying to make it realistic to the characters.
I will write more often for sure :) maybe I'll get to the point where I can manage two stories at once like Duggernaut is doing. Super talented guy.
You should stay in touch with reviewing my story! If you are a female, then you can totally suggest some things with the girl characters since you are a girl and all. I assume that since you are enjoying it so far, I have done a decent enough job with them?
Thank you so much for reviewing! I appreciate all of them from everyone!