A young woman keeps her playthings in a shoebox under her bed
@ Tom Speedy
I think the mom sounds the most fun too; even though she was just given an introductory character developement, she gives off the air of having a closet full of shoeboxes stuffed with tinies.
Duggernaut is doing a terrific job with this story, so I don't want to sound critical or be influential of his plot because I really like what he's doing.
One thing I would like to see is Cadence finally getting her hands on Carver and having the fun with him she mentioned in an earlier chapter. Afterall, we haven't yet heard what her favorite activity with tinies is; though didn't she like Faith's boots and want to wear them? Some possibilities there perhaps?
Is Cadence really going to let Julian get away with all those insults? A small punishment might be in order, like another bathroom trip or a good ole fashion spanking.
Thanks for the props. Next chapter will see some retributive payback for one of our little captives...
Oh SON OF A B&%$^!!! Again! I write out a bunch of comments, saved them to copy and the site both told me my comments could not be posted and deleted my copy.
FIX THIS SITE!
Great story as usual.
Not to go over all the different torture scenarios I wrote out, AGAIN; but wouldn't it be interesting if Josh and Julian find tinies Julie is torturing in her room. More erotic-perverse than bone breaking devices. A few tinies locked in gibbets dangling from Julie's toilet seat into the bowl below. Tinies being sewn into the gossets of Julie's panites. Female tinies locked in a circular stockade where the head of one woman is in the crotch (or ass crack) of the next, and so on to complete a full circle.
You know, weird stuff like that. (I can't believe all I wrote out was lost, again darn it, after I copied it too). Bare in mind, if Josh or Julian help or release any of Julie's tinies, then their plans are blown and their cozy accomodations are lost. So it's pretty much leave the others to suffer Julie's tortures.
Is Cadence ever going to get her fun with Carver? Perhaps make him her buttplug, or even her all out suppository.
Hi DW sorry the site has been messing with your ability to review. I appreciate you taking the time to resubmit. Helping tinies does open a whole new can of worms for our little saboteurs and we will visit this topic again soon. Cadence is by no means done with Carver and don't think she hasn't forgotten Julian s insulting and condescending banter.
Nice! Very nice indeed! Sounds like someone's prisoner in Julie's workout panty. Front? Back? Perhaps one each? Heck, who says all her panties don't have a tiny or more sewn permanantly into them. That is, assuming that's what's moving. I'm kinda getting ahead of the story.
A pile of used gym socks, sounds like a tinytown. How many tinies can be captive in her socks, the discarded shoes or anywhere else in her room. Does Julie even eat her tinies, or keep them alive surviving on her sweat, dead skin, toe jam and her other bodily goodies?
Makes one wonder if the mother, with the large breasts, actually eats all her tinies or keeps them safely “close by” her.
Unexplored territory. Who knows what things the two are yet to find?
The mother is HOT! Keeping someone prisoner in her panty, possibly keeping her tinies in a hanging birdcage (always love that scenario).
I guess the mother could kick off her shoes, revealing one or two tinies wrapped around her little toes as living, decorative toe rings. Or perhaps Julian will get to see her pull something with someone(s) attached from that nightstand.
It would be great if Julian gets caught by the mother; but he probably still has a role to play with Faith's little butthole doesn't he.
Sounds like some strange device is in the closet, perhaps the annimated shrink ray exists! Let's hope it's too big for tinies to operate. Then again, it could be the mother's collection of "shoeboxes"!!!
She is very hot. more on her soooooon
There's always the chance Julian finds Faiths' butt actually IS sweet. Perhaps finding this out gives Julian the idea the mothers' butt hole must be a varitable candy store and worth the risk of introduction. Maybe the companionship Julian always longed for is actually up the moms' hiney, he could even have a girl friend live up there with him.
If Faith is going to put Julian in her butt, hopefully it's for a prolonged time. Let's say as long as it takes a spranged ankle to heal. Faiths' asshole and convalescence spa!!!
Would be nice to have a scene of Julie getting undressed and all the tinies stuck on various spots on her body or trapped in her clothing.
Just read Toms' review, well yeah, the mom is HOT; but still so is Faith. I do have to disagree with Tom on one major issue, if the mom is going to have fun with a tiny, don't make it the one already in her panty. The one already in there should be no more than that, a well trained panty prisoner for the mom, 24/7 mostly solitary confinement with no chance of parole, ever.
Of course he can please her and should, that's a major benefit for her; but when she REALLY wants pleasure the mom should have an army of tinies each with their individual designated task. Some may join her lone captive in her panty, others perhaps between her toes, a few dozen on her large breasts, others kissing her all over, some between her legs prostrate praying up to her womanhood.
Actually I disagree with Tom on two major issues {Sorry Tom} Faiths' Asshole is still SUPER HOT and if Julian talks his way out of going up there, somehow, there's always room for Carver (or is he reserved for Cadences' butthole? Perhaps Faiths' till Cadence shows back up, then up Cadence goes Carver "bye bye")
Being up Faith's asshole could really be a pleasant experience for Julian. Perhaps he'll find he likes the security, the giving up of control and responsibility, the aroma and taste up Faith's asshole. Let's hope it's a long, long, long stay.
There's always the chance Julian finds he actually likes being in a female's asshole; but that he'd rather it be with Faith's mom.
Faith could announce Josh has to decide the fate of two of his companions, and she wants his decision once she's done pleasuring herself. Choice 1: She could keep Julian up there, with her powers he won't ever be coming out for any reason, and everyone else gets to live happily on, so to speak. Choice 2: Or Josh can chose to have Faith eventually poop Julian out, alive of course, but Carver gets sentenced to life up Cadence's asshole never to come out or be seen again. If Josh refuses to decide, both Julian and Carver live out their lives in the girl's behinds and Bohdi gets swallowed.
Cadence goes Carver
At least Julian would avoid being alone. Right now he's sweating his sack off and praying she doesn't sick him any deeper into her mud pit. Cadence hasn't given up on Carver
FINALLY!!! Yaaaa! Julian is finally, at long last not only in Faith's asshole but he's "like way up in there"! Oh Julian, how can Caesar not be at full attention now, despite the hot, humid air? Perhaps if Julian decides life up a woman's tush is the life for him, as nice as it's really turning out to be in Faith's, poop and all, we can listen to the mental struggle in his mind {"Why have I always been an asshole to people, especially women? Because up inside a woman's asshole is where I have always longed to be and now that I'm here, in Faith's, I love it. But is it Faith's asshole, or her mom's asshole that awaits as my destiny?"} he he he
Would be nice if Julie winds up finding dozens of tinies bound up in her room.
Well well well, now did Josh volunteer to be the hero or "take one for the team"; or did Josh secrectly "want in" Faith's panty? Did Josh realize he wants something much more than he does being restored to full size? Something inside Faith's panty, or just Faith as the Goddess she is to him {if not a bit more benevolent, at least to him}???
Josh took one heck of a chance rescuing someone when it could easily alert Julie something is amiss. Hopefully Julie has lots and lots of replacements. Guess we shall see.
It would be nice if Faith kept the rescued man in the tape, washed him off, replaced the tape over his mouth so he can only breath through his nose, then dropped him either in the front or back of her panty. Of course Josh will complain; but Faith can tell him any future rescued victims she'll give honest consideration to for better treatment in their terrarium, for now she feels like using this guy to indirectly get back at her sister Julie.
Seems to be only a matter of time before Julian runs off and surrenders himself to Faith's mom. Perhaps he could sneak into her room while she is sleeping, climb in the sheets with her and pleasure her to a wet dream. Would she wake up and find him, maybe even the next morning all cuddled up nice and warm in her pussy. It would make for a heck of a conversation between the two. Or maybe Julian would slink back to Faith's room, leaving the mother for another night, and another.
We shall see how the rescue is received by Faith. Lol I think you have pegged Julians character. We shall see
A girl catches a half inch convict in a society where prisoners are shrunk!
Nice start. I can see how it would work as a comic book. If I could make one suggestion, since you intend on making a comic out of it; you may consider putting some description in such as (the boy pulls out a small jar from his satchel) so we can get a feel of the artwork, if that makes sense.
They should put the cut section of tubing back so no one notices and she can come back for more. That's if it's your story plot of course.
There's a comic about a prison with normal sized female gaurds and shrunken male prisoners, "The Big House" by Dreamtales. It's not the same concept as your story as there are a few shrunken prisoner stories out there. I myself have one involving POWs in a future war.
Best of luck with your comic, can't wait to check it out.
I forgot about the tubing, in a society that technologically advanced, it might have a GPS on it that could be tracked, so they would definitely leave it behind. Thanks for reading and commenting!
A girl shrinks five people and experiments on them.
Nice start; but you may want to clean up the plural-singular pronouns and verbs (e.g. "he" becomes "they" then back to "him")
It would be interesting if she put a tiny in the snot tissue she blew her nose into then blew her nose on top of them again. Better yet, just stuff a tiny up her nose.
Keep up the story. Very interesting shrinking process by the way, it has lots of potential as does this girl's character.
You've predicted the future!
Story about a young man, who meet's two gorgeous girls who turn out to be something he didn't exvept.
It's a nice start; but the grammartical errors make it a little tough to read. Perhaps you should have someone proofread it for you before you post. Otherwise it has the potential for a terrific story.
The part about Vanessa not having washed her ass in a while is great. Perfect story detail!
To bad the girls allowed Mike to escape their plans. Perhaps he'll have forgotten his phone earpiece and come back and the girls will capture then shrink and take him too? Keep the story focused on the main character, just have Mike stuffed away by one of the girls and pretty much forgotten.
Nice touch not giving the main character a name. People often do that when writing first person naratives which makes it strang to imagine the point of view from someone with a different name than your own.
Can't wait for the next chapter; but please do have it spell-checked or proofread.
A man brings a gift to a woman he thinks he loves. It is not well received.
This is a tale of cruelty.
Very Nice! It's a shame that Antistia only grabbed one tiny with her one foot rather than one tiny in each, leaving only one to scamper off.
I do have to ask, since these women(?) poccess some magic, do they end up killing their tinies, or did part of the shrinking spell make them durable and nonparishable? Perhaps Antistia controls them so completely she brings them back to life. Imagine the tiny in her shoe crushed to a dead, bloody, mushy pulp with her every step, only to immediately reform completely healthy and alive again once she lifts her foot up (though he'd probably be stuck more to the bottom of her foot than flopping around loosly beneath in her slipper).
I myself, I'm just speaking for myself, always liked the long, drawn out subjugation to a giantess that not being able to die forces upon tinies. Imagine if Antistia ate a few tinies along with her diner, only she doesn't allow them to die as they pass through her. (Either people are going "EWE!" or "YAA!" after reading that)
Being chained to Turia's boot is pretty hot. It would be neat if when Liam is finally released from her foot that he'd see tinies laced in place within each boot against the tongue inside (perhaps not noticable prior due to only the faintest slither of the flesh of their backs peering out between the eyelet flaps and beneath the laces). Heck, since their knee highs the entire length beneath laces could be lined with helpless tinies.
It would be funny if Antistia and Turia do nasty things occasionally to the tinies in the cages. Maybe spitting at the ones dieing of thirst, flicking an unfortunate onlooker in the head with their giantess fingers, spinning a cage around really fast, putting a cover over a cage and burbing inside of it, sneezing a bunch of snot in one full of desperately starving and dehydrated tinies. And so forth, you get the idea.
Keep up the great work.
You're off to a really great start. You're story line has so many potential avenues, such as all those little cages hanging from the ceiling no bigger than for a rat or hamster. Perhaps Liam didn't notice when he walked in, his gaze being cast down for the most part, that the cages were all full of tinies, some packed with several. (Just a thought).
If I could make one criticism, loose the word "would" when describing actions. It makes the entire story seem like he's fantasizing rather than it's happening now or in the past.
Can't wait till the next chapter. Great work!
Thank you for your review kind sir! It is greatly appreciated and I love your idea. That's a wonderful image and just the sort of atmosphere and theme I'd like for Antistia and her lot to have.
Your criticism is noted and appreciated as well. The story is intended to be in the past tense and 'would' can be a handy word to use in certain instances but I have taken your advice into account as I write chapter two and I think you will find it is used significantly less. Hopefully this allows for the story to be more immersive for you and other readers.
Thank you again! Chapter two will be posted either later this afternoon or early tomorrow I hope.
I thought I read somewhere you had finished this story some time ago, and are simply posting the chapters over time; but it has current world events in it?????
GO ROSE! GO ROSE! GO ROSE!
Hopefully Carly breaks out and Leah shrinks her defending Jamesy, then holds a mock trial and condemns Carly to be locked up in a tiny birdcage hid in her bedroom.
Next time James has a dream I'm gonna bitch slap him awake. UUGH! Just when I thought Ms. Rose was going to tuck James between her butt cheeks the little twit woke up.
I truly appreciate your story Necromanswer; but if James isn't shrunk down and hidden away somewhere on Ms. Rose's body or turned into Leah's bikini bottom in the next chapter I'm somehow going to highjack this story and shrink him down or transform on my own. {Smile and Laughing}
This was a really hot chapter by the way. Most excellent {till he woke up}.
It would be nice if the next morning, still wearing the same shoes she had on the afternoon before, James gives Rose a hug and doesn't quite reach her upper thighs as he did the night before. Later when Rose marks his height they notice it's lower than last year and now Teresa is 10 inches taller than James rather than only 6 inches. And what would cause such a loss in height after getting off on Leah???
Just a thought; but still..... Especially if Rose decides to play detective-researcher and figures out James attraction to and fantisizing about her and Leah affect his height loss, maybe even make him pliable right after getting off to the point of being folded into a bikinie bottom. {yes, I still like that idea you had}
What ever you do, have him shrink NOW with his face in Rose's crotch. She should notice too, perhaps with her hand on the back of his head holding him in place Rose can feel his head shrink in her hand and his body come off the ground.
It 's would be nice if Rose told James she would adopt him, especially if he keeps getting smaller, like a tiny baby boy or as a little living doll for her to "play" with and take care of.
That kinda came out of no where. Well at least James "might" be back with Leah. An inch tall, perhaps down to half-inch tall is pretty cool for Leah to find him at, and hopefully no growing back in size {unless Leah can change James' size at her will} nor accidentally getting stepped on by Leah.
Hopefully a long, joy filled life in her panty and constanty getting sat on like he asked Leah to do in his dream once; or perhaps she might accidentally eat James but he doesn't get digested or hurt like that girl Stacy, and she doesn't realize till she feels him squirming around inside her bowels and poops him out.
Be nice to find out Rose has been swallowing hundreds of guys over the years, if she ever comes back into the story.
I thought James was an inch tall already? Age regression? Does Jacob exist anymore? Now would be a nice time to go elastic and form inside her sports bra.
Why did James hide when Leah was picking up the soap, he finally had her complete attention?
Always exhale on your weight lift when working out, inhale as you release the weight. {snickering he he he}
