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Omega: Inheritance by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

A young woman, prosecuted for a crime she didn’t commit, is placed in the hands of her titanic best friend to learn a few lessons she didn’t earn but most certainly will never forget.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44494 Read Count: 127678
[Report This] Published: July 12 2014 Updated: October 24 2014
Reviewer: MikeQ24 Signed
Date: September 04 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Disorientation

I can't say anything that hasn't already been said. My views mirror everyone else's. What Bridget did was horrible, and there's barely any justification for it. As long as Omegas can't control the Fire, not a single Alpha will be safe. And Alex...my heart just breaks every time I see her suffering. 

I have several questions I'm hoping you can answer:

1. Will there ever be an Omega origin story where we see how the Omegas came to be, life before them, the Fire, Kayla Everett, all of it? I think seeing that will start clearing up all the questions we all have.

2. Will there be a direct sequel where we see what happens to Alex after all the torture? Yes, I'm calling it torture because it was!

3. I have an idea for a sequel that I wanted to ask you about, but every time I try to send you the message, it doesn't come through. How do I talk to you about it?



Author's Response:

I know I answered this review a long time ago and the site seems to have erased it, so I'll just put it in here again in case anyone else is curious.

1. Ackbar does have a historical canon of the Omega origins, though it's not clear if it'll ever be its own story or not. A backstory does exist, however.

2. I would like to do a sequel someday, yes.

3. The site's messenger isn't great. My email is jacksmith5996@gmail.com

Omega: Touch by Jacksmith Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

A college student discovers her three-inch-tall best friend is in trouble and decides to take matters into her own hands.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Couples , Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8746 Read Count: 43281
[Report This] Published: June 02 2015 Updated: June 26 2015
Reviewer: MikeQ24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Way

"You can relax.  She’s the goodie-two-shoes,” the Alpha said, feigning trying to keep Bridget from hearing, and only giggled as the Omega’s thumb gave her a playful jab in the shoulder before proceeding to tickle the smaller girl’s stomach without mercy.  “Except to me.  She’s a freaking huge jerk to me.”

“Nonsense.  I’m a perfect angel,” Bridget snickered dryly.

And this went from being fun and enjoyable to being harsher in hindsight. Still a good story, though.

Just out of curiosity, did you get my PM? I wasn't sure if it actually went through or not.

 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the story. I haven't had any new messages come in recently, though.

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