I’m honestly not a fan of transformation like at all (which is why my favorite chapter of this story is when Ashely shrinks the woman at the store to dislodge what was blocking up his intestines so he could use the bathroom), but your expert writing and build up makes it hard not to read your stories when you post them lol. Loved this chapter tho (shrunken women are def my favorite so that helped). Really hoping Ash and Toby find a way to get Chloe as well

Another fantastic chapter! Even chapters like this where not much action happens, the way you craft the story and visually paint the scene with your words is something to marvel at. So excited to see Scarlet’s end. I’m voting barefoot crush or swallowed alive but I’m sure you already have all that planned out. Can’t wait for the next one!!

Author's Response:

As always, thank you so much for the review~ Admittedly this was a less exciting chapter in the story, but a necessary junction and (hopefully) a nice little spot to rest before things pick back up. Hope you enjoy the next chapter!

I saw you had posted a new chapter last night but I was too sick out of my mind to read it until now lol. But man, I’m really wanting to see a spin off with Paige after this story is over! I love her mean streak and would love to see how her story would go if you do choose to go that route. Excited to see how this one goes first tho!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the read and the review~ Your excitement is always encouraging.

Man I legit never click on anything faster than when you post a new chapter! I have it set for it to send me a notification each time you post a new one. I so can’t wait for each and every new chapter! I’m so intrigued on where this story is going!! The torture of Bradz was honestly one of my favorite parts of this story (second only to Candy being swallowed)! Hope the next chapter isn’t as long as a wait as this one but even if it is, I’m sure it’ll be just as perfect as this one!!

Author's Response:

So much energy in this review, I love it! Thank you for such encouraging words. This chapter was a little late, heh. It was a little on the longer side, and I was debating for awhile just how to divide up these final few chapters. I didn't want it to run on for so long, but I really couldn't feel any better alternatives. I was also sick for a couple days, which didn't help. At all. But I'm glad you enjoyed it enough that one of the scenes could be heralded as a favorite! I didn't expect that from this chapter, of all chapters, to be honest... Well, as always, thanks for the review! (And if you live in the states, then... sorry for these 1 am notifications! My schedule is pretty funny in that regard...)

Oh man now I’m super freaking excited to see what Melanie has planned in the next chapter! I know most of my reviews can get kinda repetitive but I feel the need to add some positivity to these negative reviews to show you that there’s a lot of us who are in love with what you’re doing to the story. I mean sure I agree Melanie is protected by some plot armor but really, you could make that case with practically all fictional stories. It’d be difficult (near impossible) to create a story (especially one about a girl who shrinks and kidnaps women) without even just a little plot armor, so I don’t understand all the vast negativity about it in this story. Keep it up and can’t wait to read more, especially if there’s more vore/crush ;)

Author's Response:

Indeed, I do feel a little bit of plot armor is sort of expected and, to a degree, mandated to make the narrative flow the way it's intended. A crazy giantess's fun being stopped by something too mundane, it doesn't make for an exciting tale. Ha, but I do see the critiques of my plot and appreciate them. They certainly don't deter me.

Seriously man, keep it up. This is for real next level writing on this site. It’s so freaking terrible reading all these other reviews on this story. It’s one thing to give constructive criticism or voicing an opinion, but it’s another to say blatant exaggerations saying this is “just another vore/crush fest” (when not only has there only been 1 chapter of 13, at that point, that contained vore or crush, but the build up to it and the writing was like no other and the vore/crush wasn’t used just to be there for fetish reasons, it for sure furthered the plot by showing the path of psychopathy/power greed Melanie is furthering down) and straight up bullying you into writing an exact story that they want. Some of em legit are sounding like the girl from Misery tbh lmao. Coming from a guy who practically ONLY likes the vore/crush stuff, I have literally no complaints about the other 12 (now 13) chapters that have none of that stuff because I am just in awe at the pure skill you have at writing compelling storylines in this genre. I can’t wait to see where this story goes!

Author's Response:

Thank thank thank you~ I'm just happy to inspire reactions from people, even negative ones. It means they're invested! They care! With a story like this, I knew from the beginning I'd probably have a few negative reviews, especially as the twists and turns came up. It really only makes me eager to see how they'll respond to future chapters. Thank thank thanks again for another review!

Ok so I wanna start off by saying that I’m mostly on this site to read just the “sexy” and more fetish related parts to these stories. But my goodness, was I hooked into this hardcore. This chapter was an absolute masterpiece, no exaggeration. It honestly legit felt like a movie. It’s crazy how much detail you put into this and I could feel the intensity so much it was insane. Was hoping Melanie was going to kill off one of her toys in a rage (vore would’ve been my choice) but in all honesty, with how great and absolutely perfect this chapter was, I’m not even mad lol. So excited of the prospect that Melanie doesn’t have to do the ritual and wait a whole day to shrink her victims now. The possibilities of what she can do now are limitless (or should I say endless hahah). I don’t think I’ve ever been more excited to see the next chapter!

Author's Response:

What a nice review! Thank you for such a positive response!

Man, it’s been a bit since I’ve read a story on here where I can’t wait to read the next chapter so much!! Hope Melanie has a dark side deep within...would be interesting to see her start to take a liking to Adrian as her favorite and start realizing she doesn’t need the others and starts disposing of them, maybe even shrinking more women to torment. Either way, I loved this first chapter!

Author's Response:

You'll be surprised to hear that my plans for Melanie include her assessing herself and making ammends to those she's hurt. That happens in chapter three, and that's followed by 10k words of insightful therapry.

I meant *fair game btw lol

Sorry for the late reply, I read this the day you posted it but didn’t have time to post a review. But really there’s not much to say that I haven’t said already! This has quickly become one of my favorite giantess stories of all time and I’m sooo excited to see where it goes! Your writing with the characters, the actions, descriptions, everything is phenomenal and perfect. Can’t wait to see how she continues to play with her little toys next chapter and I’m hoping she brings in some new toys soon to play with too!

Author's Response:

Such a nice review, I couldn't ask for anything better! Love these comments, thank you so much~