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Dark star by nostromo Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: An unlucky man is captured by a young woman he was flirting with. however, she's the least of his trouble...
Categories: Entrapment, Insertion, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6037 Read Count: 17681
[Report This] Published: June 03 2006 Updated: June 03 2006
Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this Story. The story contains a lot of moments with anticipation. The power submission is really strong in this story.

Author's Response: Thanks, Andy, glad you liked it!

All I Ask by Atkins Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Join preston in the adventure of a lifetime as he crushes on his best friend mandy who doesnt know he likes her, but then he shrinks one day by a potion in a coffee shop and everything changes. Mandy's roommate and lesbian lover doesn't like the idea of preston hounding in on her territory
Categories: Body Exploration, Adventure, Unaware, Humiliation, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30312 Read Count: 33015
[Report This] Published: June 28 2006 Updated: June 28 2006
Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The lack of comments here can best be explained by the hundreds of lurkers who refuse to become public in expressing interest in an unaware story.

Summary: Two friends get shrunk at their friends house and try to alert her of their presence before its too late.
Categories: Giantess, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3138 Read Count: 23045
[Report This] Published: August 27 2006 Updated: November 08 2006
Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Madisons Revenge

One of the best micro stories I read thus far. Keep going please. I've read over 100 shrinking stories, i rarely comment but this story is worth to comment on!

Missing by nostromo Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: A man shrinks to a very small size during his sleep. His wife is looking for him.
Categories: Body Exploration, Crush, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16918 Read Count: 74357
[Report This] Published: October 29 2006 Updated: December 20 2006
Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

okay however you are thinking keep going at it. I read hundreds of story and there is a shortage of stories with this type of micro plot. A+++

Author's Response: thanks andy! I\'ll keep at it for sure, no worries :-)

Neverquest by Cassadria Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Neverquest was supposed to be a game, a virtual reality world, an MMORPG where Women rule. But after a virus enters the system, the characters begin to question their own reality as it slowly changes around them...

This is the FIRST book in the Adelais series.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adventure, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 161 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271518 Read Count: 1715582
[Report This] Published: April 20 2007 Updated: May 21 2012
Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awww how cute. He watches Oprah. I could tell right away that grandpa is a widow.

And so what if the helmet is too tight. Wouldn't the virtual pain overwrite any real pain? Hmm if not then could two pains exist altogether?

Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

The adorable sweet-natured young Kendira enters the story. Aww how cute, she made a noticeable impression on Frankie, imagine that.

The world is clueing in it's bizarre facets to the reader. Neverquest is definitely something worth pondering. The plot has potential.

Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It took 3 swats to kill Cain? Wow, I thought it would only take 1 swat but I guess his muscles made him last for 1 more swat.

Better this than being a poopsmith. 

 

Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'd pick a thief class. You know how easy it would be to steal and dodge giantess players?

 

As for skill, an alchemist would have an edgy advantage because he would be sneaky at that miniaturized size.

 

Knight class is the worst class to be because of the size different.

I wish we had a screen shot of the Abbey drawn somewhere. I like supplemental images. =o)

Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What would stop them from becoming lost within? Lets see, I would hire a safety back up person to stay in the real world instructed to unplug the palyers if they were on longer than say. . . . 10 hours. Yup that would indeed work. I'm surprised even nerds didn't think of that. . .

Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Roxanne is very mysterious. I wish I knew how she looked like. I guess we'll find out soon. I wonder what type of reward Narsis wanted. . . Why was Narsis dumped by the nerd group? I shall read on!

Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ah the character introduction chapter.

Will these players ever reach level 10? Will screen shots be taken of girl's underskirts? Who is Narsis?

I hope we find out eventually.

Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Cafateria scene was jam packed with students judging each other.

Something is symbolic with Joan's red apple. . . . here.

Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

All Malkav had to do was swing his 1 damage dagger between the crab's joints and into the soft tissue skin. At his height, it would become advantageous for him to nimbly slip a swift piercing swing into it's weakpoints. It had less hp than him.

The game said "QUEST". What type of player doesn't come prepared to fight for his life during a quest.

Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What is a level 53 doing with a level 1 newbie? And how did she even get on newbie island? *uh oh* Is Siarra running a third party software?

Reviewer: andy2283 Signed
Date: October 11 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How would this story of progressed if they finished reading the end user license agreement?

Summary: A man on a secret mission is shrunk to less than 4 inches. He finds unexpected help from a woman, but his savior is having her own "romantic" agenda...
Categories: Incest, Giantess, Entrapment, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16532 Read Count: 45214
[Report This] Published: August 23 2007 Updated: February 07 2008
Reviewer: andy2283 Signed
Date: September 01 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

" Above me, loud gurgling sounds come up. Miss Spencer is digesting her breakfast. I feel the monstrous intestines and internal organs weigh upon my shoulders. Her moans are like distant thunder.  The giant world of flesh is trembling around me. The walls are pulsating with increased vigour. "

 

This was my favorite descriptive part. This is very original.



Author's Response: thank you, Andy!! I had a lot of fun writing this story, it's  great to see that shared!

Summary: Narrator gets shrunk to 1 cm and goes along for a ride while trying to get Monica's attention, a girl in his class.
Categories: Insertion, Feet, Instant Size Change, Body Exploration
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15743 Read Count: 319763
[Report This] Published: November 01 2007 Updated: March 21 2009
Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Under Her Shoe

Haha very good story. I wonder what will happen next? Will he ever find a way back to normal? Seems like the entire universe is against him. I will keep watching for future installment.

Summary: A second person story where you are the manager of a band who just landed them a contract, but before you leave them to their fame and fortune, you decide to play out a fantasy you've had for a long time
Categories: Unaware, Body Exploration, Feet, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4789 Read Count: 9225
[Report This] Published: April 19 2008 Updated: April 19 2008
Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Final Show

At the end you wrote: "As your remains were filtered into her, she got her wish, a single red blood cell bearing what remained of you through her body, and then sticking inside her heart, forever more."

 

Red blood cells has a life cycle of about 90 days so even if his remainings are inside the red blood cell, it dies and new blood cells are created.

Source: My biology book



Author's Response: True, though honestly, none of this is possible, so I say, artistic License was involved in that last line.

A Test Of Love by minuss Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Perfect marriage is disrupted when the husband is tragically shrunk to near microscopic size. Can such a relationship survive with such a drastic difference in scale? Read on to see.


Categories: Instant Size Change, Adventure, Couples , Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15344 Read Count: 253524
[Report This] Published: April 20 2008 Updated: April 20 2008
Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

One of my favorite stories because it's about the difficulties of love. I have never read a size changing story that deals with being loyal and faithful to and from the giantess.