Reviewer: Parajake32 Signed
March 04 2021
Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Simply loved the last chapter. So caring, so sweet and intimate. Can't wait to see the version of this scene when he's smaller tho ^^
But yeah, your writting is really good, specially for the pace you take to do another chapter. And the fact you take your readers considerations and wishes is just sweet.
And like someone already said here, I would Love to see a "How to Train Your Son" story. Unfortunally there is a lack of intimate and gentle ish stories like you write between family members on this community. If you ever gonna do a how to train your son, there is an SUPERB story here called "Origins of a foot fetish". I may have said on another comment. Sadly it is unfinished, but could be an really cool inspiration since it is really similar to your content here.
Well, thats it. 10/10 as Always!Author's Response:
ive thought about it but i also wanna branch out a lil bit more. other stories aside from this series and format and other subjects besides a family member. so yeah i have an idea for one but i cant say i'd be getting to it anytime soon. but thanks you for all the kind words :)