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Why there is no text? Can you fix it plz?
I loved the first time time I read this story. I hoped to read it again : (
This will be a slow shrinking story about an older brother that worked at a very respectable vacination laboratory. However not everything is as it seems, after a lab accident it is reveald that the Corperation was using sub par safety measures to keep contamination to a minimal.
David is exposed to an unknown virus due to the fact that the building's air filtration system was nonexistant.
This story will follow things from his point of view as he slowly watches the world grow around him.
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I know it's been a while, but if you're still here, would you consider continue this? Loved the premise! The characters are so well written, and the relationship between bro and sis are just adorable!
Hope to see more of this in the future 🙏
After discovering shrinking pills online, Logan uses them to grow closer to his 13-year-old, adopted sister.
Will you continue this? I think you should! Story is nice so far. Would love to see where this goes! Characters are not one dimentional like most stories of this kind. Very good work. Hope to see more soon!
Oh plz continue this story! Your writting is very good! If you can, I think it woulkd be nice if you update this story : )
I know it's been a while, but I simply love the premise of this story! If you're still there, would you consider finishing it?? I'd love to see more of this
Wow! Such great start! Hope to see more soon. Keep going : )
This is a story about a sister and her little brother, as she tries to be as much of a parental figure as she can, as she goes through her own struggles.
I like the premice too! Seens very unique. Definitly you should go on. Hope to see more soon! : )
Would love to see this continue!! Do you plan in doing so?? Loved the first chapters
After a recent development disorder leaves him much shorter than he used to be, Reese has become academically demotivated, and worries he won't receive his diploma in his final few weeks of high school. But his sister, a recent college graduate who's twice as tall as him, moves back home. Her arrival sparks a change in Reese's attitude to start treating his family - and particularly his amazon of a sister - a lot nicer than anyone would reasonably expect. Eventually his sister realizes she might be able to save him from failing his senior year, and Reese does his best to more than thank her in return.
There was some kind of spam attack on the website which is why it says I have over a thousand reviews. The moderators deleted the fakes but I guess the site still says I have a bunch. The real number is like 250ish or something.
Pretty great chapter as always Jess! And I'm glad you're getting so many commisions. Your writting is my favorite right now on this entire "fandon". You really deserve it! If the currency from where I Iive were not so undervalued in relation to the dollar I would be making a lot of comissions aswell 🤣😭😭.
But anyway, congrats for the sucess! d84;
thank you!
Marcus Tilden, a single father since his daughter's birth, gets laid off from his job one day after shrinking to less than a foot tall. Depressed about his sudden height loss and doubly miserable after becoming unemployed, he feels hopeless about finding a new career and being able to continue providing for him and his daughter. But after the two of them start spending more time together, he starts to develop a kind of job in itself just by serving his daughter and doing his best to keep her happy.
Simply loved the last chapter. So caring, so sweet and intimate. Can't wait to see the version of this scene when he's smaller tho ^^
But yeah, your writting is really good, specially for the pace you take to do another chapter. And the fact you take your readers considerations and wishes is just sweet.
And like someone already said here, I would Love to see a "How to Train Your Son" story. Unfortunally there is a lack of intimate and gentle ish stories like you write between family members on this community. If you ever gonna do a how to train your son, there is an SUPERB story here called "Origins of a foot fetish". I may have said on another comment. Sadly it is unfinished, but could be an really cool inspiration since it is really similar to your content here.
Well, thats it. 10/10 as Always!
ive thought about it but i also wanna branch out a lil bit more. other stories aside from this series and format and other subjects besides a family member. so yeah i have an idea for one but i cant say i'd be getting to it anytime soon. but thanks you for all the kind words :)
Just lovely. Really liked the braid the hair part. Anxious to see what happens next!
thank you! glad you are enjoying it
Omg, simply loved the start. Loved the slow burn you seen to be going for. Though their relationship will chance, I hope she will stay kinda gentle with him. Not my thing when the bigger character goes sexually insane and start acting with violence out of the nowhere! Hope you keep exploring their relationship in interesting ways like you did here. Also, can we expect some foot interaction down the path?
Of course, anyway you go Ill keep reading it! Thanks for this and another incredible stories, friend! 🥰💙
Yes! That's exactly how I feel about a lot of stories too, I like stories that are a lot softer (idk how else to describe it), like they're not completely gentle and G-rated, but they're not psycopathic from day 1. There's gonna be foot interaction a few chapters down the line but imo there's a lot more foot focus in my other story
Loved the last chapter!! Since she is already washed up and clean, maybe she would return the favor from her dad and massage him just like he did to her? This includes some massage with her feet of course 🙃🙃. It would be nice to see her doing this, speacially because he conforted her too. He seens to like her smell now that she took a shower. So maybe is in character to him liking the Idea.
Another suggestion that I have is, if this happens, it would be really cool to see him enjoing a little bit. He's always so tense and all, maybe this massage would make him open up a bit more, just like Jessie REALLY opened up when he was doing her massage
Just an suggestion anyway! 😊 thanks again for this amazing work
her massaging him is a good idea! i think someone suggested that at one point but idk why i never went thru with it. theres not really enough time for me to add it to this version tho since there's only one "day" left and its halfway written and fully mapped out, but i can add it for v2!
thanks for the review :)
And the king/queen returns! And the last chapter was... intense! What a blast! I particulary love when you give little hints (at least I think they are) forshadowing Marcus further shrink on version 2, like when Jessie says shes not an giant next to him, or on another one when she says he was not THAT small to tackle her, etc. Not sure if it is on purpose but I Love it and caaaaan't wait for him to get smaller next to her!
Now for this chap, intense like I said. Though liking her feet was something we see on almost every story, for me that felt more fullfiling because we had a build up for it. Marcus from chapter one would never do this IMO, but accomponyng this story since the begining, it felt pretty natural. Also would like to say that generally I don't like multiple giantesses on these stories. BUT Jessies friends all have such distinct personalites and interactions with Marcus and with each other and for once I enjoyed a story like this with other giantesses. Your character development is top notch. And I'm a big fan since the first chapter. Can't wait to see how this version of the story ends S2
thank you for the very thorough review. yeah that kind of foreshadowy type of writing is definitely intentional. and i know what you mean about multiple giants sometimes blending in so yeah making sure they had distinct personalities was definitely important for me, and hopefully i'll be able to build on the personalities of some of the side characters like harper and camila next version.
What an adventure this has been. I'm glad I found this story so early and could follow it through as you write. This final chapter was really lovely! Can't believe its finished (for now). BUT Im even more excited for the version 2!! Thanks for this great reading, specially on these dificult times we're living!
lol weirdly heartwarming at the end there but you're welcome!
Yeah you know, I think even tho this is a kinky story on a kinky site there is Always space for support and confort. Covid is there claiming countless lives, many social and economic issues... so its nice to have such a cozy and inviting story, even if it is fetish related. I even think it adds to the overall enjoiment lol. Hopefully it wasn't too weird what I said kkkkkkkk. But as always very nice work 💚
no i totally get what you mean, i always like the chapters i write sometimes that make me smile and i know some people need something to help them "get away"
Ohhhh can't believe its already being written! What a Nice surprise! You're on fire! I thought it would be an hiatus between those versions, and you're even talking about a third! So excited! Really liked the start, can't wait to things to get more interesting and see Jessies more maternal side kick in ^^
yeah its off to a good start, thanks for the review!
Little late for the review but I must say how much Im loving this version. Love how different it is from The first one, but at The same time it feels very familiar. I thought this version would be just a little different from The first but this a whole New adventure! The scene where Jess put her foot on The pedal where Marcus was, Was simply very creative and fun! I enjoyed the scene where Marcus tries to give a massage to Jessie too! Would love to see her doing this to him as well! Specially with her feet. Please consider this suggestion from this long time fan and reader of this story 😇🥺
But anyway, thank you for making such a well written and LONG story for free. Hope all is well for you and I can't wait for the next chapters .
Merry christmas and a happy new year as well:3
LMAO at asking me to consider your suggestion because you're a longtime fan. but laughing in a "yes that seems totally fair" way. i'll make sure to work that in there :) it'll take a lot of chapters because of what happens in the story the next few days, i'll just say they're not at home very often til the weekend. so it'll be a few months which i know is a while to wait. but dont worry cuz if its feet you're into then there's some pretty major foot stuff happening in the next few story days.
thanks for the review!
I miss this storyso much! Been here since the beginning of version 1. Dou you plan continuing this?
i miss it too!
Wow, that is really Nice of you. Can't wait to see this next story then! Hope the daughter has more or less the same personality and relation with her dad as this version tho. But that is great news, thanks in advance! Looking forward to see the conclusion for this one too. Your stories are one of the best on this site imo.
Cheers
thank you so much for the kind words! and yes she will be mostly the same... a bit more daring and mischievous i guess but i definitely want her to keep her like giddy joyful attitude about things and ultimately want the best for her dad. she might have some small "outbursts" but she'll never be fully cruel
