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Home Sick by Krunk33 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Ben Grant is a normal high school senior, excited to finally graduate and move out of the house.  That is, until, he catches a life-threatening disease, one that's fast acting and not-yet cured. There is a treatment available, which shrinks the patient until the disease is expelled, and is Ben's only chance.  After undergoing it, he is then forced to adapt to the growing world around him, as well as his overbearing mother.

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Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Butt, Maternal, Odor, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3030 Read Count: 8140
[Report This] Published: August 09 2022 Updated: December 06 2023
Reviewer: Parajake32 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14 2024 Title: Chapter 1: The Ride Home

Gonna re-do my review since the first time I was just happy the story was back and aí didn't gave it justice.


But I was really happy to see this story receiving proper continuation. Even when it was just the first chapter you could tell it was gonna be something interesting.

And the second chapter didn't disappoint. Loved the description of the hug the mom was giving to Ben and his feelings about it. The intimidation process was my favorite part. Even the nurse who appears to be very cute looks intimidating from Ben's pov. The way you described Linda approaching, her heels clapping as she walked to Ben was really nice to see. Maybe these walking claps will slowly begin to sound more like tuds or boom sounds as Ben slowly shrinks? Would love to see that and some foot interactions. Maybe he becoming more submissive towards his giant mom as he dwindles too!

Also I would like to suggest a way for the reader to know Linda's but specially Steve's size as he shrinks, just to keep easier to visualize their size differences.

But that is it! Really glad to see this back! Tell me you intend to continue this? 🥺🥺.  I can't wait to see where it goes!

Reviewer: Parajake32 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 29 2024 Title: Chapter 2: Extended Stay

Was going to ask how small is the protagonist going to be by the end, and if there is some foot interactions down the line!


Reaaaaaally praying we get to another chapter soon! Even at just 2 chapters long, this story is one of my favorites here!

Summary:

     After Tim mistakenly drinks a mysterious, secret potion his mother brought back from a research trip to the Amazon, he winds up shrinking to a mere 1-inch tall; now, while his mother frantically works to formulate a cure for her tiny son, Tim is stuck at home in the care of his aunt, who starts taking advantage of her nephew’s “little” condition.


1/29/2024 — Based on the feedback I’ve received, I’ve decided to go ahead and write an epilogue to this story. I’m not sure exactly when it will be finished and posted, but I’ll be working on it as well as a few other small projects as I prepare to write my next novel. I just wanted to thank everyone for all their support and honest feedback. This story was just supposed to be practice for my novels, but it’s certainly taken on a life of its own.


Hooray for 175K reads! 🥳


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: A Series Of Scenarios
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 151215 Read Count: 191728
[Report This] Published: February 06 2023 Updated: January 23 2024
Reviewer: Parajake32 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 25 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Sunday

Been accompanying this story for a while now, and I must praise how well written it is!!

Still, I know the aunt is the main star of the show, BUT I would be really happy to see more interactions with the mom! Since she is gentle and caring with her son, well, there could be some gentle and caring scenes! Some foot massage perhaps, or the two playing on a pool or something. Maybe she remembering how good it was when he was a small kid, and being more maternal to him. Not a popular preference on this fetish I know, but it would be nice and give her some spotlight, and in character with the mom I think.

But thanks for this lovely story! I will keep an eye out for new chapters!



Author's Response:

Well, first off, thanks for the encouragement and for taking the time to leave a review.

So, it’s true, this story is more about the interactions between Tim and Julia—basically the “domineering family member” trope—to practice my writing for my upcoming novel “Little, Big Brother”. While the whole “maternal giantess” trope is not something that really appeals to me, I have discovered that my tendencies to hyper-focus on tropes that only I find erotic might be things that don’t appeal to, or even turn off other readers. For example, my stories tend to always have feet interactions, and there are plenty of readers that just aren’t into feet, so they don’t read any of my works, even when some of my larger works have plenty of chapters without feet interactions.

That being said, for me, I think I like exploring the “maternal giantess” trope in this story in a different light, not necessarily in a sexual sense, but in the loving, yet semi-absent minded sense. Basically, treating the tiny person with love and caring when they are aware of a tiny person’s presence, but then becoming the unaware giantess when the tiny person becomes too small, and they don’t realize the dangers they put the tiny person in just going about their daily routines, kind of like the whole washing machine scene.

I am planning an upcoming chapter that will focus more on the mom rather than the aunt, but that will be more of what I described above. However, your suggestion has certainly given me something to think about, and as a result, I think I’m really going to focus on playing up the kind, loving giantess aspect of the mother and aunt characters in my “Little, Big Brother” story.

Summary:

For most of his life growing up, Bobby has been dependent on his stepmother, Vivian, a buxom Latina woman with a caring & motherly personality & a fiery temper when things don't go her way. After Bobby's father mysteriously disappeared, Bobby becomes depressed & more reliant on his stepmom. Vivian is tired of her stepson's pessimistic attitude. She is at her wit's end. But when Bobby catches the Shrinking Virus, everything changes. How will Bobby adjust to his life as a doll-sized boy? Will Vivian continue to care for her tiny stepson? Or will she use the new power dynamic to teach her son a valuable life lesson?


WARNING: Sexually explicit content intended for adults. All characters are written to be 18 years or older.


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Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Maternal, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4292 Read Count: 18717
[Report This] Published: April 14 2024 Updated: May 11 2024
Reviewer: Parajake32 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story looks like up my alley! Specially if it keeps the maternal relationship between the chapters. Love when the giantess is mostly gentle, maternal and a bit angry every now and then. It would be nice to have longer chapters too if possible. Really liked the writing so far. Looking up for the next chapters!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the characters so far! I am still working out how to organize specific scenes into chapters. So, thank you for the feedback. As of right now, most chapters will be at least longer than 700 words. Thanks again!