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Jo's Mouth by Lord Aj Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

A young man gets far more up close and personal with his co-worker than he ever imagined, and experiences more of the human mouth than he ever wanted to.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Nose, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72843 Read Count: 215274
[Report This] Published: January 31 2017 Updated: May 04 2023
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Jo's Allergies

Man, this guy passed up the opportunity of a lifetime!  I know I'd love to be Jo's toothpick/brush.  I'd get to have her morning breath all to myself every day ^_^  Just got to bargin for safety and bam, eternal paradice.

Minor ideas, maybe give some comparasons so we have a more exact idea what things are like.  Does her breath at this point remind him of the dumpster out back since she ate at work?  Has the tongue softened up at all?  Also maybe now that they are alone he could speak up a bit, talk to his hostess.  Seems Jo is doing all the talking anymore.  We know this guy's thoughts but Jo doesn't at all.    



Author's Response: Heheh. You're hilarious, my dear fellow. You think Jo would give him a choice. ;P No, I certainly wouldn't pass it up either, but maybe not permanently-more like for a week at a time, like a holiday. All that about too much of a good thing, y'know? As for comparisons and detailing, I have to say, comparing things to halitosis is a hard task. Generally, I find it to be a unique odour, not like other malodours out there; but I'll certainly try to get in some more comparisons, where I can. Wouldn't want to lose my penchant for detail! As for conversation, I have been holding off on it, mostly because I really don't know how it'd go- and I think Jo enjoys her dominance over her prisoner. Still, I'll try and work it in there, if I can. Anything to give the story more variety than it already has! :)

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Jo's Gum

Glad to see you're back!  Also thrilled to see you took some of my ideas :)  Jo really is a mean girl huh?  It might be interesting working together with her if he survives this.  I'm guessing the mouth puns would never stop xD.  Dream stomach fake-out was an interesting maybe preview ;).  Lots of opportunity for fun coming up.  Club means dancing, dirnking, and maybe even romance?  If Jo is closing the cafe herself, maybe she could take some of the alone time to check in with her captive, a progress review.  

Lastly, you should consider posting your stuff (or at least have an account for back-up) on another sight like giantesscity.com or writing.com.  Would hate to see someone with your talent give up just because of a technical problem <3



Author's Response: Always back for more when it comes to this story, my friend! I feel like, of all the erotica I've written in the past (most if not all of which is long gone), this is my magnum opus. It's really coming together nicely. I wouldn't say Jo was inherently mean, but the dominance she has over our little protagonist brings out this new side in her, and she's certainly enjoying it. Her love of bad puns stems from my own, so don't expect it to stop any time soon! ;D Will definitely fake you up on that review-type chapter; I feel like I can easily transition to it from this one, and I have a good idea of how to do it, too. As for posting my work elsewhere, after this scare I'll certainly look into it, but I feel like nowhere's quite as good as here. We'll see. Until then, I hope to God this place starts open for as long as possible- for all our sakes. :)

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Jo's Teeth

Agreed on those end notes.  Mouths are rarely clean, occationally white/straight, and often smelly in the real world yet few stories touch on that.  Feet, butts, and more get smell descriptions but mouths often go ignored.  All the more reason to cherish this story :)

Blah blah excellent blah blah great detail I've said it before.  Looking forward to when her natural halitosis begins to take charge again.  Really looking forward to some kind of debrief/ honest review by our hero if he gets the chance.  With the way he is getting used to the digusting parts, I love the idea of him wanting to come back again if the risk of death was no longer a factor ;)



Author's Response: Right? I seriously don't get why the ideas of odour and feet/butt going together are so commonplace, and yet the mouth never gets the same treatment. Us odour/mouth play fetishists seem to be in a bit of a niche minority; it's part of the reason I wrote this story in the first place, because I'd never quite seen something like it on here before. JDO came close with Tongue Ring, but alas, it never was continued. So I figured, what the heck? Let's put my own story out there- and thus far I'm really happy with the results and feedback. As for a debrief or review, I'm not entirely sure how I'd do that- perhaps give his opinions to Jo herself? I do really like the idea, so feel free to elsborate on it; I'd certainly consider fitting it into one of the closing chapters. As for risk of death, don't put all your chips on the table just yet... in Jo's mouth, that's ALWAYS a risk. ;)

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Jo's Dental Hygiene

RIP Jo's Morning Breath

2017-2017

But seriously excellent as always.  Looking forward to the further tortures over the next 23.75 hours.  



Author's Response: I can assure you, my good Mr. Pie, that there will be plenty of tortures over the next twenty three hours; Jo wouldn't have it any other way. As for her now eliminated halitosis, don't consider it dead and buried just yet,,, trust me, we are not nearly done with odour just yet, ;) Excellent to hear you're still enjoying the story!

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: February 12 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Jo's Lips

Oh man it is ON!  If his eyes were watering with her jaws still open... man I can't wait ^_^  To say I'm looking forward to a micro's detailed description of an unhygenic mouth is an understatement to be sure.  Gingivitis here we come!



Author's Response: Oh, it is on like Donkey Kong. I'll give you fair warning, there is a toothbrush in both Jo's and thus our tiny protagonist's future... but not before he gets to experience the true inner stench and experience of her filthy mouth, so get hyped for that. Oh, and don't worry about her mouth getting clean; even if she does brush her teeth, her mouth certainly isn't immediately going to be utopia; that's just no fun. What I have planned will make her mouth even worse than before by the end of this... so stay tuned. ;)

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Jo's Tongue

Another set of winning chapters!  I don't want to dominate your review page more than I already am so I'll probably just write one ever few chapters.  Detail and grossness are still A+.  Didn't consider that the tongue would be rough but actually yeah, with all the abuse she puts her mouth through I guess it would be rough.  Maybe the underside is softer ^_^  Personally hoping our little guy survives, thought a detour to the stomach would be loads of fun too!  Will message more ideas until you tell me to shut up ;)



Author's Response: Thanks as always, Mr. Pie! Don't feel bad about leaving too many reviews on the story; if anything, I really appreciate the feedback and it's really nice to know I already have some dedicated fans out there. Plus, the more ideas I get, the more diverse the story can be, and that's always a good thing. :D Like I mentioned in Chapter 4's notes, I can now confirm despite my secrecy that there will be a trip to Jo's stomach for our poor little protagonist; and I'm sure he'll both love and hate every minute though. Whether he survives, though...well, that'd be telling, wouldn't it? ;)

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Jo's Breath

10 and a cum from me.  Love the detail and pacing.  I'm guessing this is not going to be a short story?



Author's Response: Excellent to hear you're so invested! As to your question, no, this is gonna be a long one- not sure exactly how long, but easily above ten chapters, maybe even breaking twenty, depending. I can imagine that a whole long story solely focusing on mouth play may drive off some people, but hey, for people like us in the mouthplay-odour niche it's a fun ride, right?

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: February 02 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Jo's Intentions

She's aware of him, his fetish, and she's annoyed by it?  Wow, what a twist!  Seriously I don't think I've seen this type of entrapment premise before.  Kudos.  I hope that staying in her mouth for the day includes surviving the night while she sleeps XP  Hang in there bugman!  Survive and maybe she will let you stay in there XD



Author's Response: Yeah, I suppose it's pretty unique in that she knows about his fetish, or even that it's mentioned. I tend to find that's a bit more uncommon round here. As for surviving the night, I honestly hadn't considered that... but it's certainly on the cards now. Ooh, I can feel the ideas coming to me as I write this... As for staying in there.... I think our little guy nay have had his fill for mouths for life after this. But who knows? Nothing's set in stone yet..... ;)

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: January 31 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Jo

This story has EXCELLENT potential.  We have a good deal of details about this mouth and we haven't even gotten close to it yet.  That [Odor] tag has me excited too, not enough stories portray things like bad breath.  A coffee drinker and a smoker AND it's first thing in the morning?  Really looking forward to what that maw is like on the inside.  Your description of the breakfast bar makes it sound like you are super tiny, hope he get's to suffer in the mouth for a bit before getting swallowed.  Will probably review again on some other chapter ;)



Author's Response:

Glad to know you like the story! I think you'll be most pleased with what I have planned out for this story; the odor tag wasn't added for no reason. I totally agree with you, when it comes to mouth play I think that not enough stories portray the full reality of what being in a mouth would actually be like, in all its facets. With this story, I hope to explore said facets in full; each chapter is gonna be a different scenario of my little protagonist either interacting with or dealing with trials within Jo's mouth. Not to spoil you, but Chapter 3 might be breath related... you'll have to wait and see. ;)

As for swallowing, well, as Jo put it so eloquently herself... we'll cross that bridge when we come to it.

Thanks for reviewing! -Aj

Quickly Eaten by supernova Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A short, to-the-point first-person soft vore tale.


Categories: Giantess, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1043 Read Count: 7460
[Report This] Published: February 11 2017 Updated: February 11 2017
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 11 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Glad to see you writing again!!  Short but contains all the juicy details and your trademark style.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, this is one I found from a while ago and I thought it was good enough to post! I have a few half-written stories waiting to be finished, I'm just waiting for the ideas to come.

Cut Short by Lord Aj Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

What seemed to be the perfect start to a wonderful adventure is tragically cut short by an unfortunate series of events.


Categories: Vore, Gentle, Mouth Play, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3851 Read Count: 7486
[Report This] Published: April 27 2017 Updated: April 27 2017
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A short, sweet subversion.  Lovely little story with great detail.  Let's hope she learned her lesson for the next micro she finds XD  Thrilled to see you back :)

 

Idea: if you wanted to continue this too, what if each chapter was a "what-if" for these two messing up and getting him killed in different ways?  Say in chap 2, she didn't swallow him and spits him out for fear of such.  Then carries him some other way, only to trip and squish him?!  Just a sudden idea for a cute comedy of errors ;p



Author's Response: Dear god, I almost forgot to respond to the reviews on here! Glad to hear you liked it, it was a bit rushed in my opinion but hey, live and learn. As for continuing it, I can certainly see your point, but I feel like it'd take away from the message I was giving it. Perhaps I'll do a story like that in future! :D

The Morning After by Lord Aj Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A man wakes up from his hangover, surprised to find the events of last night have left him in a curious place.


Categories: Unaware, Mouth Play, Odor, Vore, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2696 Read Count: 9244
[Report This] Published: May 04 2017 Updated: May 04 2017
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw, I like the happy ending.  Doesn't happen enough in stories that go for realism.  The reason why is obvious sure but I still enjoy it :)  Teasing giantess who care deep down are always fun too.  Continue to love your stuff bra <3



Author's Response: Glad to hear you enjoyed it, my friend; and glad to see someone who appreciates a happy ending! Seems like there might be another reason realism tends to go hand in hand with death...but hey, not everything has to be doom and gloom, right? As for Kellie, I'm also a fan of that sort of giantess; I often feel it's not done often, and when it is it's often not done well. Pixis nails that sort of thing with some of his stories, but Pixis is a writing legend on here all round; much better than my humble self, anywho! Glad to hear my regular fans are enjoying my shorter work! I'll continue trying not to disappoint. :)

Lisa by The Intimidator Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Brad had a normal life until one day an accident shrunk him he made a decision get the help of his friend Lisa. His choices will change his life

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Brad’s Saga
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15875 Read Count: 83524
[Report This] Published: September 14 2017 Updated: January 31 2018
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: September 15 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Shrunk

Titled "Lisa" and has a main character named Brad but it isn't about "Lisa: the Painful RPG"  

Confused and slightly disapointed 



Author's Response: ilikepie sorry for the disappointment in the story please feel free to give me advice I am always willing to listen to any advice given to me.

Permanent Isolation by Lord Aj Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

A long-suffering teacher decides to make detention a chance for revenge against one arrogant student and his gang of loyal cronies.


Categories: Crush, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21646 Read Count: 49087
[Report This] Published: October 24 2017 Updated: September 11 2019
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: October 27 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Dethroning A King

Wooo!  Glad to see you back after dissapearing.  A lot of things different right off the bat.  Multiple prey, chubby pred, the option for more than just mouth play (even if it is my favorite lol), and a tiny that actually deserves it >:3

 

Looking forward to what you have in mind~



Author's Response: Glad to see you're still around also! This story has been in concept for a while, and I've got plans for it mostly laid out. Nothing complex, about as complex as the plot for Jo's Mouth was, but a fair few elements different to it, as you've noted. It's a nice enough blend of old and new that I can work with. I hope you enjoy it as much as you have my other stuff; I'd like to think I haven't lost my touch in only a few months. ;P

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: November 03 2017 Title: Chapter 2: No Sense Running

KEEP DESCRIBING THINGS!  If people don't want description they will read 90% of the smut out there already ;p



Author's Response:

You make an excellent point! Well, it's the way I tend to write naturally anyway, so if it's still popular then win win for me. The new chapter follows the same levels of description anyway, so I'm sure you won't be disappointed! :)

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: December 13 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Hard to Swallow

Glad you're back my friend.  Still as solid as ever. <3



Author's Response: Thank you as always, my friend- glad to hear it! The breaks I take between writing these is getting longer thanks to life keeping me busy, motivation issues, and a battle with my own superhigh standards that makes every chapter longer and longer as I go. I've done in six chapters what I thought I'd do in three, and the story itself was originally only envisaged as a one chapter thing, believe it or not. Hopefully it makes for good quality reading, though, even if it is less regular. I wouldn't have it any other way. :)

Mark’s Prison by Imprisoned Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Mark, a 17-yo male student, was captured by Jen, a sadistic 22-yo student he met the day before the beginning of this story. Now, small enough to easily fit inside her body, he must find a way to leave his captor’s embracing confines, or he’s fated to a life deep inside her.

In Chapter 10, Jen decides Mark's fate.

>Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Odor, Scat, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15674 Read Count: 126649
[Report This] Published: July 24 2018 Updated: February 06 2019
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: August 08 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Your Destiny - Part 1/2: Stepping outside

Fun story!  Love entrapment stuff, especially when they have great detail.  Any thoughts on doing a mouth or stomach entrapment?  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and suggestion!

Maybe someday I'll do mouth/stomach stuff, but for now I'll consentrate on... butts. It's what I have difficulty finding on the internet. Usually it's just feet, feet, feet, vore, feet, feet, etc. I just had to write some ass-stuff, ya know?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.