Giantess World :: Pedroca045

Snop by Wimpering Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]

Summary:

Kyle is just about to start his new job at the greatest cleaning product manufacturer in the country. In spite of his childhood friend (and lifelong crush)'s insistence though, he refuses to break the NDA to tell her about their secret ingredient. When Kyle's first day starts to get a bit weird, he discovers that his childhood friend may be more involved with the company than either of them realized.

A very short Nose/Unaware story

Categories: Unaware, Body Exploration, Gentle, Nose
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1711 Read Count: 4699

[Report This] Published: August 29 2019 Updated: August 29 2019

Reviewer: Pedroca045 Signed
Date: April 20 2022 Title: Chapter 1: A New Opportunity and a New perspective

Nice story! Would like to see a continuation someday... 👍

Antopia:The Greatest Story Never Told 🐜 by LittleBigPlanet Rated: R

[Reviews - 49]

Summary:

A seemingly ordinary teenage boy is shrunken and kidnapped by the ant colony that lives in his own backyard. He soon discovers that the ants face a deadly threat he never expected-his own sweet little sister!

He soon discovers an advanced technological insect world no human has ever witnessed before and realises that ants and humans may have more in common than he thought. However, there are darker forces at play and he soon discovers that his backyard ant colony is just one piece of the puzzle of a more significant chain of events. In order to discover the truth, he will have to venture out into the brave new giant world, bug-sized and face threats that he would have never cared about at normal size, including his family and friends.

How are the ants so advanced at a civilisation and cultural level? Where are they originally from? And are there sinister schemes at play?

Ma15+: Contains frequent strong coarse language, complex, mature and political themes, graphic descriptions of violence, blood and gore, adult sexual references (not involving underage characters), pop culture references,

I have actually had the ideas and concept for the story for a long time since I was 12 years old, but only now am I actually writing it 😅

Don't be shy to leave a review! 😊 I always respond to all reviews eventually.....

Categories: Legwear, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Animal, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Violent, Insertion, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92497 Read Count: 41165

[Report This] Published: July 30 2022 Updated: November 18 2023

Reviewer: Pedroca045 Signed

Date: September 30 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Beginning-4 Years Later

I read the whole story several times yesterday and I can say I'm loving it so far!

In this chapter, we got to see a bit of both Max and Lucy's school lives. They both dream of popularity, but in different ways: Max wants to perform a song in front of the whole school, but has trouble coming up with lyrics (I wonder if this will be important later wink wink 😉). As for Lucy... I'll get to her later.

Anyway, we also see both kids being bored in class and not having a good relationship with their teachers. This really exemplifies what you'll say later in the story, about younger siblings emulating their older siblings' behavior, even if unintentionally. As an older brother myself, it made me wonder if I was a good role model to my sister...

Which brings me neatly to my next point: the characters are extremely relatable! I've been on Max and Lucy's shoes in different moments of my life, so it's really interesting for me to look at this story from both sides: as the older brother and the kid who didn't want to grow up.

Jumping ahead to talk about their mom: she doesn't seem like a bad parent to me, just really focused on her job. At first I thought their parents had divorced or their father died, which would explain why Rebecca has to work a lot, but I'm glad this isn't the case. Still, Lucy's clearly been affected by this even if she doesn't want to admit it.

Now we get to Footstool: I love this dog! His interactions with Lucy were very cute, and it's nice to see her actually caring about a smaller creature.😅

As for Lucy's room, there's something there that caught my attention. You mentioned she has a huge painting of the Disney castle, so I was wondering: did she paint it herself? My headcanon is that Lucy has a secret talent, but hides it from others because she's afraid they'll find it "too childish". Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but I think this would give more dimension to her.

Anyway, that's all I have to say for this chapter. I'll definitely be adding more reviews to this story, so I'll talk about other stuff later. Great chapter! Great story! Look forward to what the future holds for this characters.👍

Author's Response:
Thanks for the in-depth review! Here's what I have to say.
Both Max and Lucy are essentially growing up and that's the main message I wanted to convey in this chapter when I gave an insight into their school lives.
As someone who grew up with 3 siblings, I can safely say siblings imitate each other a lot, especially younger ones 😅
Rebecca (the mother) has essentially transformed into the work-alcoholic mother who wants that extra cash so that was the main portrayal I wanted to show here.
Footstool will become interesting later on in the story. I am not sure if you are into giant animal content but yeah Footstool is going to be seen as somewhat of a threat as well. I decided to include a dog that Lucy loves because I didn't want her to become completely one-dimensional...
Lucy Disney's obsession is yeah by the age she is (11) has become childish to most of her peers. As for her secret talent well I guess we will have to wait and see...
Let me know what you think of her best friend's character when you get up to chapter 3, I won't spoil anything if you haven't read it 😅

Reviewer: Pedroca045 Signed

Date: September 30 2023 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: A case of Mistaken Identity, a cigarette, a family of aphids and a violent beating

And now we get to the shrinking. I gotta say, you did a pretty nice job describing the "new world" Max has been transported to. I got the sense that I was shrunk with him.

As for the ants, they seem a bit too bloodthirsty for my liking. I understand that Lucy has caused so much pain and suffering to them, but some of the stuff they talked about doing to her... it gets on my "big brother" nerves.

Man, I feel sorry for Thorax. General Sting makes General Mandible from Antz look like a saint! It wasn't his fault that he shot the wrong kid. Like he said: his head looked like a girl from the back (that part was hilarious to me)!

As I've always said, smoking is bad for health. Not just to yours, but to any family of aphids that might just be trapped in a cigarette. Seriously though, that was a nice showcase of how small actions to humans can lead to disastrous consequences to bugs.

I can see now where Lucy gets her hatred of bugs. However, unlike her daughter, it seems that Rebecca mostly crushes them without knowledge. Still, my thoughts and prayers go to the families of these poor aphids... 😔

Back to Max, the ants once again have no chill! Good thing Princess Penelope was there to save him. So far, she's the only level-headed ant in this colony.

I don't have much else to say about this chapter. Next one though, things are going to get interesting...

Author's Response:
I did a lot of describing the new world since I wanted to emphasise how small Max has become.
As to why I made the ants so violent, I decided to make their behaviour as realistic as possible since from their perspective Lucy is a mass murdering genocidal monster who has killed hundreds of them and sees Max as her accomplice which is where they draw a lot of their anger from.
General Sting is what we say all bark and no bite (most of the time....). He is a very serious man who takes his responsibilities very seriously which is why he shouts at others but he is not actually evil deep down inside unlike General Mandible from Antz.
I decided to make Rebecca a heavy smoker to make her a stressed-out addict
Yeah, poor aphids what can I say.... You can essentially think of this story as a darker more intense version of Ant Bully, Antz and all the other bug movies that you saw as a kid
I think you love Princess Penelope's character later on in the story 😍
Thanks again for reviewing!