Susie, now an international celebrity, still tries to live a normal life. Until another giantess arrives.
I am very fond of this story, I love the way it is written, the style it is presented. And the almost child-like innocence of the characters present in the story.
The author portrays emotions of the characters very effectively through the story, and has people behaving (in what I would imagine to be) a realistic manner in the situation. The interaction between the characters has led me to become very attached to several of the characters.
When i spoke of the innocence earlier, I meant it in the behaviour of individuals, some stories on the site have the subtlety of a brick, and are basically a porno story; often poorly told. But the gradual build up of the more mature actions here make the build up very satisfying. I very much look forward to Suzie taking it to the next level with her boyfriend.
Top storytelling, keep up the good work, I eagerly anticipate the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hey, it's always a pleasure to hear from new reviewers. Your review perfectly summarizes the way i wanted to write the story (realistic, etc.) The next chapter will be the last one, for now (I'm afraid I can't keep writing the same story for too long, it becomes tiring. But I will definitely continue it sometime in the future.)
A well told story, I love the way the story switches from past to present, it really gives you a small insight into the characters, as for Carrie, you've done well in making a character that is really easy to hate. I've experienced arguments and fallouts like this and I think you've really nailed them for realism. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, Critic! I've always been partial to realistic (and hopefully complex) characters, and Carrie is definitely one close to my heart. Glad you're enjoying the story!
I like where this story is going, it's well written, easily presented, and easy to read. I also like it due to the fact it features one of my favorite categories, 'Mouth Play'. Would love to see some 'Insertion' later, or even 'Butt Insertion'. Looking forward to Chapter 2.
Author's Response: new chapter~
In the future, a Marine is paired with a giantess neko as an unlikely team. They travel through the universe in search of creatures in need..what was supposed to be a quiet 3 month wait for the Marine will soon turn into a conflict beyond their wildest dreams.
This has by far been my favourite story on this site.
It's so well thought up, imaginative, I actually care for the characters, I love the fact you never upload only 1 chapter, so I have a nice long read.
I really do hope you continue this story, I'm a sucker for a happy ending.
Author's Response:
Thanks ^^ I wont give away anything, but I am really glad you are enjoying the story. It means a lot that you said that it has been your favorite one.
A mother and daughter find themselves in a uniquely beneficial situation when their snobby and selfish extended family shrinks down to a few inches tall.
Am really loving this story, I would love to see one of them swallowed whole, perhaps when the girls dont get what they want.
Or maybe Allison pleasures herself with Ashley's Boyfriend infront of her. Or maybe even use her underwear to carry them around.
i'm not much for insertion, so i hope you won't be disappointed there, but there may be more mouthplay later
Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.
Love the recent chapters, really looking forward to seeing what she has in store for him.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review
This takes place in the same Universe as Nova Force. But basically the two characters are a giantess Neko, and a human, who decide to go on a webcam site where users bid for video time...mostly to watch girls get naughty. A high paying customer makes things more interesting.
I'm a huge fan of your stories, this one was great, why is she crying though? Can't she just rescue her friend with a piece of string like Richard?
Well Kikata had training and confidence that she knew how to do it. Rella wouldn't really know anything about it. Also, se was in tears because she betrayed her friend, essentially. Also the feeling of being exploited for money. Thanks for the review!