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The Great Shrink: An Earth Islands Story by ittybittyman Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A story about all countries on earth being shrunk to solve the problems of global warming, hunger, over population, etc. 

Several teams of women remain at normal height to monitor the world. 

 

This was written by ShrunkU and he asked me to post it for him. 

He is also looking for people to offer suggestions or help him write future chapters. 

His discord is @shrunku


Categories: New World Order, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3825 Read Count: 4112
[Report This] Published: November 28 2020 Updated: November 28 2020
Reviewer: Bletch Signed
Date: November 28 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Let's hope the next world economic forum will be called, the Great Shrink

An Innocent Man by Pluto Pendragon Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 84]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the future, a controversial form of the death penalty involves shrinking convicts down to one-inch tall, and having them tortured and killed by executioners known as Chevaliers. One Chevalier finds herself in a difficult situation when a shrunken convict claims to be innocent, and she must decide whether to risk everything and help him escape, or crush him underfoot.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58984 Read Count: 112306
[Report This] Published: December 14 2020 Updated: January 09 2021
Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Plea

From Brian I felt the same anxiety I had on the 15 minutes long oral examinations back in school. I know it must have been terrible for him. I can't even imagine what Cathy does to the unlucky prisoners who happen to get in her way on full sessions, or to those poor souls she secretly keeps home;

she seemed rushy, the poor girl couldn't give the things she wanted to do the right amount of time, I was sensing how she was burning inside of eagerness.

 

I expected the part in wich he couldn't get an erection! It was laughable to see Cathy blush while her twins were hanging out at the man neutral expression, although I hoped he actually had a shy boner and Allie would have realized with disappointment he was lying about his asexuality.

Who knows, maybe he was just too scared to get one; but in any cases, the way he reacted to all the insults about him being a child murderer gives me more and more suspicions. He didn't tell us the whole story.

 

Anyway, I hope Brian is doing fine the next chapter, though i'm already seeing him rolling back and forward in a corner after experimenting a tad of Cathy's torment LOL, cheers!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! It definitely would have been extremely scary to be in Brian's situation during the session. I'm glad that anxiety came through for you.

Cathy definitely wanted to do more! You're right, it's hard to think about what she does when there are no restrictions.

I'm glad you enjoyed Brian's lack of a "response" to Cathy! I also thought it would be funny. As for Brian's response to the insults, it's definitely suspicious. I'll go into it next time! I hope you enjoy what happens next.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Plea

I'm not sure if that's what the last reviewer wanted to say, but now I'm thinking: it would be great to see an ex-chevalier getting the shrinking penalty!

Not that I'd endorse such barbarism, (I do u.u), but the mere thought of this role reversal is thrilling me.

I'm not asking you to ruin this story, but maybe it can be of ispiration for future ones :P



Author's Response:

That would certainly be a way for Chevaliers to gain sympathy for the convicts! Something like that probably won't happen in this story, but there's a lot of potential for stuff like that in future stories. Honestly, if somebody else wanted to write a story in this "Shrink Penalty" universe, I would be totally fine with it.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Plea

I was disappointed when I read that this story couldn't last more than 20 chapters! But this means I will enjoy your other stories in the future.

This chapter makes me think even more that Brian is more than what he says about himself. He seems so smart and so good at acting that he could either be a clever psycho or a spy. But I'll take that those are just my speculation and not the writer intentions. He's a good boy I guess :P

Cathy seems instead very naif. She still believes in friendship, and I wasn't surprised when she revealed she had "toys at home" too. Her naivety and cruelty makes her look like those evil cats in the child toons. I find her sexy, but I'm defenetely on Allie's side.

As for Allie, she's in the position where she could be blackmailed by Cathy if only she wanted too, so she shouldn't undervalue her and should let their friendship die very very slowly. I'm wondering what will happen in those 10 minutes session.

If Allie is going to stop Cathy's joy by being too soft with little Brian, so that she doesn't call for more couple playings in the future, or if she's going to comply. And I'm also wondering what kind of torture the mischievious kitty Cathy has in mind.

 

Anyway, here I'll link the drawing. I pictured the SPAR room to be cold, with a dark shadow and a black corner. My Allie doesn't wear a ponytail, and I probably shouldn't have dressed her with an "electric blue", but I'm not disappointed with the overall outcome. I hope you enjoy too.

Also, the man that should be Brian is tied to a small tiny chair. Something that was not shown in your story. As for the title, initially I thought "They call me Justice" but it cringed me a bit, so I kept your story name instead XD, and I linked your story to the drawing description.

I had another picture in mind, a colourful one, but I'm not sure if I'll do it, I'm a bit stressed this period.

https://www.deviantart.com/bletc/art/An-Innocent-Man-865836502



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I'm sorry about the length of the story, but it makes me really happy to hear that you enjoy it that much. I hope you enjoy where it goes from here! We still have a good bit left.

Yes, at this point it's probably safe to say that Brian is actually innocent. He is very smart and good at acting, but those are things that happened as a result of his wrongful conviction. With that being said, it doesn't mean that he is being completely honest and real with Allison all the time, though.

Cathy is definitely letting her desire for Brian cloud her judgment a little bit. I love the comparison to cats in old cartoons. There definitely are a few ways this session can go, so I hope you enjoy what happens!

As for your picture, I love it so much!!! You did such an awesome job, thank you so much! The details are fantastic, with the office supplies, document, name tag, and sign in the background. You definitely nailed the cold, metal, and dark vibe of the SPAR. I really like Allison's expression, and I actually really like the addition of the chair. I never imagined that somebody might want to make art based on something I wrote, so thank you again! Don't worry about doing another one if you're stressed, I definitely understand. These are stressful times, take care of yourself first. Regardless, you did an awesome job, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

-Pluto

 

Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Plea

I would rather replace the term cliffhanger with fisthanger at this point. I wanted to see Cathy's expression on a movie, she doesn't seem so dumb to believe Allison kept Brian to torment him and just say "well, you're having fun all for yourself? let's share him", she seems to be more brainwashed and to believe in the importance of SP more than Allie does, well... she enjoys it after all. And Allie just committed something illegal by hiding a criminal like Brian, didn't she?

I'm wondering if she's going to blackmail Allison. In that case, I'm puzzled. How's she going to save her reputation?

Man, tell me this story lasts 30 chapters, 20 at least. XD

 

Anyway, the 9th chapter gave me a mental picture to draw, and I already had one in mind the previous chapter (they're simple ideas tough). I will do it as soon as I find my mental energies back, I'm leaving my deviantart account here just to let you know what kind of style it would be, 'cause it's not digital

https://www.deviantart.com/bletc



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you're excited for the next chapter.

As for Cathy, I wouldn't say she is necessarily driven by a brainwashed belief in the importance of the SP. That's part of it, but she is also completely addicted to the torture-and-kill element of her job, and she tells herself whatever she wants in order to justify it.

This might be dissapointing, but we're actually ramping up towards the end of the story, here. I can't say exactly how many chapters are left for sure, but I never intended for this story to be super long. I'm not sure if I have a sprawling 20-30 chapter story in me, especially for my first one. Regardless, I hope you enjoy where it goes from here!

As for your deviantart, I absolutely love your style! You're really talented. If you decide to, I would love to see how you envision these characters. I'll be sure to check back from now on!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Bletch Signed
Date: December 24 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Plea

Don't be surprised I'm leaving many reviews,

it's because I find this story very intriguing and it is giving me a lot of conjectures :)

Maybe I'll be inspired to do some drawings out of these chapters, who knows



Author's Response:

No worries at all, I absolutely love reviews! I'm really glad that you're finding the story so interesting. Please feel free to leave more reviews! 

As for some drawings based on these chapters, I would be incredibly honored!! I never would have expected that someone might want to do that when I started writing this story. If you end up doing so, and you feel comfortable sharing it, I would love to see them!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Plea

At this point I wonder what would have happened if it was Cathy in chapter 3 instead of Allie. Would have she believed his innocence? If yes, would have she done the same?

But then, I'm not even sure if this man in really innocent. Sure, the way they treated his case is already a proof of innocense, but what if we readers (and Allie) are just being played by his evil mind?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! It's definitely interesting to think about. We know that Cathy is very sadistic towards convicts, and she was really eager to get her hands on Brian. With that in mind, I probably wouldn't have high hopes for Brian should he ever meet Cathy x_x

As for the idea that Brian has actually been lying the whole time, that sure would be an evil twist!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Plea

I've never seen an asexual character in a Giantess story,

and I've never seen LOTR been quoted as well.

Two more points making this story unique and original.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing again! Yes, I thought it would be fun to try adding a different type of character into a shrinking story. I also just wish there were more asexual characters in general. I hope you continue to enjoy this story!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Plea

Here are your 10 stars, hoping this story to last very very long :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I'm very happy you're enjoying it. I can't say exactly how many chapters this story will be, but we've still got a long ways to go.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Bletch Signed
Date: December 16 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Plea

"This was not a scream.


This was not a cry.


 


This was a whisper, a soft declaration of innocence to an empty and uncaring universe."


My favourite quote from the latest chapter. He's reacting stoically, though, in the end he still cries, bcause he's human and he has feelings, no matter how strong his will is.

Reviewer: Bletch Signed
Date: December 15 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Plea

LOL

I tought the first chapter was the final one, as the self-proclaimed innocent man was squished, but it was not him!

Let's see if she has some feelings or is cold at all



Author's Response:

Yes, I wanted the first chapter to seem like it was the whole story, based on the description. But it actually was only part 1/2 of the prologue! Thank you for reading.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Bletch Signed
Date: December 24 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Plea

Aside from the interesting points read in the previous reviews, I'm also starting to wonder if it is true that chevaliers do everything in complete anonymity. I know, you've chosen the room to bee without cameras and all to justify the saving of Brian, but I'm not buying the fact that a secret government agency doesn't spy on their employees.

Maybe the person behind the hidden camera has closed one eye.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your continued reviews! That's an interesting idea about secret monitoring. It definitely isn't far-fetched. To be fair to myself though, the whole 'no cameras' thing wasn't *just* to make it easier for Allison to help Brian. The point of the Shrink Penalty is for convicts to go through terrible punishment before they are executed. Some Chevaliers probably do some pretty nasty, depraved stuff. It's reasonable to assume that a lot of people wouldn't be willing to do that stuff if they knew they were being watched. Hence, no cameras or witnesses. That doesn't mean the facility isn't watching them secretly, though! I hope you enjoy where it goes from here.

-Pluto

From the Dnieper to the Nile by I for incredible Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Khrystina Kuznetsova is in love.

The subject of her affection is none other than the Jewel of the Nile: her husband, Adeel Ibrahim Farooq Hassan Gamal. Despite growing up as an orphan on the streets of Cairo, Adeel has blossomed into the very manifestation of pulchritude: handsome, charismatic, and successful- he’s perfect! Well… almost perfect. Occasionally, he subjects her to domestic violence.

In a desperate bid to save her relationship and change the Love of her Life for the better, Khrystina resorts to using a secret tool. 


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12580 Read Count: 10268
[Report This] Published: December 19 2020 Updated: December 26 2020
Reviewer: Bletch Signed
Date: December 20 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The straw which broke the Camel's back

Hey, if you're a russian speaker can you show me some russian stories please, so that I exercise?



Author's Response: 
ill0;k4;km0;!

k1; l7;l3;l6;m3;l6; k5;l6;k4;l6;ln2; l7;l6; lm1;l9;l9;l2;l0;. 

i3;l6; l2;l6;k5;k6;k2;-l5;l0;k3;m1;k6;n, l2;l6;k5;k6;k2; n3; m1;l3;m1;m5;m6;m1; l9;k4;l6;l1; lm1;l9;l9;l2;l0;l1;, n3; k6;l6;k3;k2;k4;l3;n2; l5;kl9;l2;l6;l3;nl2;l6; lm1;l9;l9;l2;l0;m3; l0;l9;m0;l6;ll0;l1;.
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Tiny-Knapper by JT7 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

After a 16-year old girl receives 10 tinies as a Christmas present, the tinies strangely go missing, one-by-one.

This is a fetish-oriented story for those who are looking for a lot of "scenes".

Categories: Breasts, Butt, insertion, Vore, crush, unaware, slave


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39879 Read Count: 54931
[Report This] Published: December 25 2020 Updated: April 01 2021
Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Present

I love the ending lines about the heart being above any form of control

The Beaumonts by carnage Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 204]
Summary:

Natalie Beaumont hates shrinkies. Which is a huge problem for two of her children who have caught the shrinking virus. Life gets extremely difficult and scary for them as they deal with their giant mom. And it only gets more terrifying for them as their only ally, their big sister Aubreigh, is starting to see them differently as well.


Categories: Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163349 Read Count: 229295
[Report This] Published: January 03 2021 Updated: April 02 2023
Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Mom's Life Lesson

I prefer Aubreigh character over Natalie, I love it when good girls become evil under good intentions. :)



Author's Response:

Haha, well she might be right up your alley then.

Self Absorbed by VivettaVenray Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

A woman's meditation practice leads her to realize she is one with the universe, so she makes the universe one with her.

This somewhat experimental story is very heavy on absorption and body-horror, but also features plenty of giga/tera scale content and some powers. Content warnings inside. Comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome!

DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24815 Read Count: 27833
[Report This] Published: January 24 2021 Updated: January 24 2021
Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Training

This is so...

Spiritual! Wow. You had a wonderful idea and you've made it real, I love it. This makes me feel like I want to reconnect to the wholeseness of the universe

I actually thought she would end up creating life on her body and become a female version of the Flat Earth, a Flat Reality, (I'm not saying she's flat, though, I don't want to offend the sole Goddess) but I get she finds her pleasure in being herself. And that's completely fine



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words!

For the ending, I wanted something a bit ironic. A lot of talk about meditation mentions the self being an illusion and all that, so I figured Yun kind of absorbing the universe was a fun twist. Not a twist in that it might have been hard to see coming: more so trying to twist the themes of meditation a bit.

Anyways happy you enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

Property of Lily by Yougts, johnsmith10992, Vexed Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

A night of  promised shrunken fun with a friend quickly takes a turn for the worse. Our unfortunate protagonist is about to become the sex toy of someone quite familiar to him.

Co-written by Johnsmith10992

Taken over by Vexed chapter 10 and on

Join the discord: https://discord.gg/Kav8XwAwN4 


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 82132 Read Count: 194794
[Report This] Published: January 28 2021 Updated: August 26 2021
Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The trickery

Man, it must be heart-aching for the poor little fella, to be seen by Hazel in his current status!



Author's Response:

OH hey! Can't wait for you next update either haha. Yes, it certainly will be, but we have a LONG windy road ahead. -jsm109

Business as Usual by F00tprint Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

When a man finds a professional dominatrix who will deliver up his deepest darkest fantasy - to be trampled underfoot without mercy, without end and without reprieve - what will it be like for him?

Nightmare?  Wildest fantasy come true?  A true nirvanna?  Or a hell in the truest sense of the word?

While for her, might it be just business as usual?

A brutal little tale about just such an experience.  A man who has gotten himself shrunken by a new and fabulous nanotechnology, from one of the world's top technology firms, with protection from a crushing death to go along with it, but leaving him able to feel all of the pain, the anguish, the unstoppability of her crushing weight.

A story of bitter regrets, of surrendering, of exhultation to the experience.  Journey with him through all of these, and a dominatrix who gives it to him exactly how he wanted it.

If you're a fan of size-difference-trampling, this will be a yarn for you.  Live it through his experience, experience it vicariously.  If you live for the fantasy of being squashed, especially without mercy, then this tale will be one you'll probably love.


Categories: Entrapment, Feet, Footwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13664 Read Count: 15140
[Report This] Published: February 05 2021 Updated: February 14 2021
Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

I love this story. I'm not much into "footwear" but the whole relationship between him "whining" and the prodomme "just doing her business" is making me grow interested about the nature of the following chapters.

The Forbidden Isles by Mad Pete Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Come on in, hop a seat, settle in for a treat. I’ve a tale for ye, oh aye, t’wer a ‘orrible story indeed. Scare the flesh roight off yer wee pecker it will. Wot’s that now? Fancy yeself a brave lass do ye? Then ye ‘aven’t ‘erd no tale like this, ‘aven’t had yer lib’ral sensibilities proper ruffled now ‘ave ye lass? C’mere yeh sad puss, let ol’ Mad Pete wet yer ears, and wet yer tongue. Grab a dram, first one’s on me.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing Woman, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2229 Read Count: 2243
[Report This] Published: February 22 2021 Updated: February 22 2021
Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not being an english speaker, the seaman style of the introduction discouraged me at first, but I've read the chapter and was worth it. It's fun! I hope the muscle tag will not be the main focus here, but that's just my personal taste :)



Author's Response:

Oh I just tossed that muscle tag in there just to be safe. They don't all start hulking out

An Innocent Man 2 by Pluto Pendragon Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 71]
Summary:

The story of Allison Starr and Brian Bentley continues. Allison is no longer a Chevalier, and she is in a relationship with Brian. Now, with an uncertain future ahead of them, they must decide how to proceed if they want to clear Brian's name. Luckily, some help arrives in the form of Allison's college mentor.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Couples, Gentle, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84712 Read Count: 73734
[Report This] Published: February 23 2021 Updated: April 18 2021
Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Looking Forward

I'm so happy this story will have a second part! Be not afraid to publish, I will read it even if you would have decided to avoid any sexual content at all, for the sole purpose of the story :D



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad to see more reviews from you, and I'm really happy that you are enjoying the story beyond the sexual content. There definitely will be some, but hopefully it will come across as natural to the story, as opposed to including it just for the sake of including it. I hope you enjoy where we go from here!

-Pluto

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.