Penname: Last_one_33 [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: September 14 2018
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Found this site a month ago, lots of good stories, not sure on all the ratings, not sure I will have anything to post anytime soon.


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Summary:

Two students are stranded on a different planet where everything seems quite earthly, except it is totally small. This is a classic crush and vore story in a dark-fantasy setting with an overarching storyline.

With some 900 pages by now, I think we might as well call this one a book.

All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Insertion, Mouth Play, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 988803 Read Count: 558775
[Report This] Published: May 12 2014 Updated: July 09 2023
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: December 05 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Only read the last chapter and recent reviews.  Seems all the gaintess does is kill, maim, murder and destory with a vague poltical objective that can be discarded (according to the reviews).

Considering the number of humans she eats she is well on her way to the human verision of Mad Cow Disease (the higher the animal the worse it is for it to eat their own kind, don't tell that to Vore enthusists...).  Couldn't she eat like wheat or cows or horse.  Better yet use her size and strength to help build a society that can provide her all of those things with out her oh crushing a village every couple minutes and eating a baby every hour or so.

I will see what the next chapter hold, but I am not optimist and as long as your chapters are well time is time...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the critique, that's a good idea. Won't make their evil souls gentle, though, I fear.

Summary:

The positively beautiful sisters of Omega Pi are a selective sorority who possess a very curious secret, that being, they sustain their otherworldly looks by stealing the lives and life energy of unsuspecting young men.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 128 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146327 Read Count: 911148
[Report This] Published: September 21 2016 Updated: September 10 2020
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2019 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Wonder if this is a 'ghost busters' key and lock situation...

The Key and chosen one (maybe for the males?) is Oliver

the Lock and 'chosen one' (likely females) is?

From her concern for life and chosing Oliver (as well as reviling everything to him) the goddess is as others have stated likely good and concerned for all her children.  Likely why the three couples 'enjoyed' themselves so well.

If Larissa isn't the chosen one will she be paired off with the latest 'sacrifice'?

And who is the lock (if it's a person), my money is on Harmony, she is pure, innocent and cares for those outside of herself and the 'sisters'.

Thanks!



Author's Response:

Hopefully I will answer all your questions in the next handful of chapters! Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2018 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Not usussally a fan of un-gentle domination, though most of the girls seem more careless then cruel.  Basically once a guy is shrunk well it's done, if they can get some pleasure out of them and not kill them ehhh.  The sad thing is they are in the main doing it to their own brothers and sons.  Bothers who likely stepped in when a bully went after their sister, or drove them somewhere or helped with their chores/homework.  Sons who ran to mom to comfort her when she cried, who 'help' with her house work, who were nurtured in her womb.  I guess the 'devoted' basically tell their daughters enjoy jimmy while he's under 18, cause he's going to be 'age cream' for your 'real' siblings your sority sisters and if he's lucky (or unluckly) a set toy and pet for the rest of his natural life (this is assuming they aren't crushed, or straved).

Saw in another review the iffy possiblity of devine intervention, unless she's like luficer and pure evil, I would presume a mother goddess like the one they preport to follow would be pissed at their abuse of her power and what they have done to half of her 'children' it would be like Christ coming back at the most insane part of the 1st Crusade when his followers were killing everyone(Christians and Jews as well as Muslims) not just thier 'foes" would make the clearing of the money changers look like a picnic.

All that said AWESOME Story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Last_one_33. It does seem these girls are superficial and vain with little regard for the sanctity of life. Still undecided whether or not to bring the goddess to life or if i do, how might she guage the actions of her 'followers'? might be fun :)

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2019 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Somehow Sam and Stan I believe will show how Omega Pi and Husband are supose to do things after the goddess's engry has affected each other.  Sam and Stan will likely make Caddy and Deacon look like amuetars.  Like the concept forwarded by ulgy one that the stones and powers are being missused at best.  I think what Sam and Stan are going to be 'enjoying' would be a natural product of the 'healing' ritual, the male though small is with his wife/mate/lover and as a 'reward' he enjoys 'treats' at a scale no male outside of the goddess's chosen can enjoy.  The wife/mate/lover learns to appericate him even better and they bond closer together.  When the healing is done the male is restored.

Then it got warped, instead of healing, the sisters 'healed' their aging, instead of bonding the two closer they used the men in their lives like expendable dildos and instead of restoring them they stole thier lives...  Just some thoughts

Excellant Chapter, Thank you! and to repeat the general tenor of the comment we would like more!



Author's Response:

I hope in my most recent update I have been able to hilight how it could be with the way Stan and Sam have interacted. You bring up a great point in questioning whether or not the sisters have stayed true to the original will of the goddess or have they gone astray, and if so, how will the goddess respond.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05 2019 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Hoping Thomasin gives Cam the ride of his life and that Cam give her and her 'jungle cat' the stroking she so richly deserves.  Doubt it will be the lovefeast Sam and Stan had, but I am guessing Thomasin has more control then most even under these circumstances, espeacilly since she hinted she maybe a bit into Cam (paraphrasing here but something like needing someone to gently bring him back into women after what her 'sisters' did to him and that she was volenteering for that 'job')

Would like it if the goddess brought 'sweet juicy justice' to her 'flock'.  Find it kind of messed up she would reward those who drain the life (and take the life) of her sons and really don't offer anything up to her.  I mean even if she is 'evil' the Omega Pi's are at best Christmas/Easter suplicants, most are in it for long lives, beauty and power and could care less about the 'goddess'.  Wouldn't she rather have devoted servants and couldn't they bring the males along rather then being throw away?

If she's neutral, the goddess would be concerned about blance and how her 'daughters' are messing with it, and even a mother who is indifferent to the world would have at least a son or two who she favors how does the goddess square the flagrant use of power without so much as a thank you with the loss of her sons?

If she is 'good' it's more or less over for Omega Pi, decades if not centerius of abusing her male children would overwhelm hope of reform (which is why she would be 'good' giving her 'daughters' every chance to make amends before being wrathful while trying to console the souls of her 'sons' that their sisters will get things right and pointing to folks like Sam, Agatha, Cerys and Thomasin as proof).  However there will be a straw that break her back of paintence and those most guility would not want to be in front of her judgement.  If she is personally restructing her followers it will be bad for most of the sisters, though not as bad a pissed off 'evil' goddess, The 'good' would listen to folks like Harmony and Oliver and could be presauded to hold of judgement on the lesser offenders (but with enough of a threat that they would likely not test it, and she would likely be on the 'high' level of intervention if they start to play games again.)

Just my random thoughts, can't wait for another chapter.  Thank you.

Inversion by littless Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 158]
Summary:

Sam's life undergoes some BIG changes when he gets back together with his high school sweetheart.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breast Enlargement, Couples, Gentle, Growing Woman, Incest, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 102 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 518393 Read Count: 693407
[Report This] Published: May 16 2017 Updated: April 29 2019
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed
Date: September 28 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Hey man sorry, hope life returns to normal soon

as for the story.

If Sam wants to be sure he can be safe with Julie when she's anger, just keep putting little Sam where he doesn't belong!  Julie is getting there, I thinks she's starting to figure out who cares for her and who's just likes her cause she is big.  I think Sam is getting there as well, but he needs to 'knock' some sense into little Sam and appericate what he has.

Julie at some level knows Sam is likely one of the best things in her life and for her to find a partner at her size, and have it last past the reveal of little Julie is frankly next to impossible.  Sam is likely the only 'good' (he would be great if he could just keep it in Julie and not spread himself around so much 'helping') male that wouldn't take a HUGE investment of time, effort and even money on a small chance that they would be intrested in her rather then a lower risk partner.  Sam if Julie can control her anger aint going to get much better either.

Now each has issues, Julie seems to be trying to contend with hers, while Sam attempts to deal with his (he did try to resist Zoe, he gave in, but he did fight through half of it).  They need a catalyst to help them get over their issues and help them bond even tighter this time.

Zoe could be the catalyst, she seems to like them both, she has had a couple of 'helping' sessions with both players, she would draw fire from Sam from his "helping' session and though Sam isn't afraid to go toe to toe with Julie for anyone else, if it's for him, I think he losses some fire and Julie knows it.  Zoe, Zoe speaks her mind and if you don't like it F-U.  So if Julie begins to go to far, Zoe's going to call her out, if Sam looks to long Zoe's going to do the same.  Zoe even if she's the smallest maybe the boss at the end...

Think Sam and Julie are the best for the other, they could use help though and they may have to add Zoe to their relationship.  Thank you for the Chapter and again hope your family member gets well soon.



Author's Response:

Julie definitely knows that Sam is one of, if not the best thing, in her life. Sam kind of knows she's the best thing in his life but is afraid to admit it. But how do they make it work given their size differences? That the question. Hopefully, Sam's come up with an answer in the latest chapter of their lives.

Interesting take on Zoe. I think Zoe knows what's going on and will do what she can to make sure things go right. But she's wise enough to be content and sit back to let those things happen. And, being a lesbian, why does she like Sam so much? We'll find out why later.

Thanks for the well wishes and thanks for the reviews.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Hey, another chapter!  Thank you!  Basics of keeping Sam and Julie together, and am grateful you can keep up with the Harem, though two are going to AZ soon...

Hope life is treating you better and THANK YOU for continueing this awesome story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words. I always meant to continue, it's just that sometimes things happen that takes us away from what we like doing. Writing takes time and all my time was being spent taking care of family matters. Hopefully, things will return to something more like normal after the holidays.

There are some surprises coming but the chapters I have ready to go are not really ready -- they need a rewrite. Another chapter coming soon though. I promise.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed
Date: September 21 2018 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 - And Now for Something Completely Different

Nah, see you got two requests as it is, don't need a chapter being a listing rather a narritive.  Thanks though.



Author's Response:

I figured I'd list all of you. But whatever. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed
Date: September 19 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Of course we are pulling for them, we have 2/3 the story having each help the other.  As for Sam taking her back, first should he forgive her.  It's a separate question, considering who his entire family  and some friends gave him hell(mother switching him, then complete disrespect for being small, father supporting mother until recently, sister screwing him over until juile, he and her well... Jill's actions causing two deaths, his disease, and huge amounts of pain on Zoe, plus her antics before) he's forgiven a lot.  Julie one lied by omission knowing about him being infected by the Borg, could be a simple mistake, but is also a set up for Sam to be further enraged.  Two the sexual assault that's a bit beyond the switching, and on par with Jill.  Sam forgave jill, he should forgive juile.

Two take her back?  Yes if it is good for her.  She has to adjust to her new reality, she has to become something more and from her actions on that night she needs a lot of assistance.  Can she grow better with him being her crutch for everything or if he is there when she needs him and he supports her from time to time, let things breath as it were.  I think they would be better together, he needs to ensure she goes to counseling and find an outlet for her need for control.  Preferably one of the tall woman club or more. 



Author's Response:

I see we have another vote for our couple to get back together. Thanks.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed
Date: September 17 2018 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 - What now?

Julie please apply the not caring what others think to the Tall Club, Cause you really need to stop caring what they think.  Have some confidence and keep Sam, They will still toady up to you like the cliquily group they are.  This isn't high school you know Sam's good for you and they are not!

Come you two get it together and fix it!!!!



Author's Response:

Everyone is pulling for Julie and Sam. Thanks.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed
Date: September 14 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Great Story

As so many have concluded Sam and Julie relationship is the heart and soul of this story.  In order for this epic to ring true they must find a way to fix this, stay together and both of them grow ever better and more loving toward the other.  They need to stay a couple.

Wondering what Julie is getting out of being a 10 Foot plus giantess, her new "friends" seem more then happy to heap woe on her.  Her domaniance (as you said feeling her oats, that she seems to do that every 10 chapters I will put aside), hieght and strength advantage are there but are they worth it?  Espeacilly considering she use them in a manner like her father when assulting Sam?  The novelity and joy if from growing if they exist have to have worn thin, perhaps she is begining to hate being an oversized freak in a world she doesn't fit into, maybe after her assult is begining to hate having those 'pluses' of domanince and power.

Would she consider having Jill find a way to infect her with Borgsford and reblance things?  She would show great commitment to Sam (espeacilly after her hiding the knowledge that he has the disease) and she would be with a group of people who love her, also she would get sex alot(considering she seems to have had a dry spell while sam was tapping everything around him), the majority of it from Sam, if the inverse table works they could slowly regrow her, make sure step by step she handling her issues rather then thinking it's normal she feels anger and a willingness to act on it with as she grows.

I would like the character to be happy and at 10 feet plus she just seems miserable, I don't think she's getting anything new or better by growing, I think she feels trapped by her size, and she has glimpses of insight that she's hurting those she cares for and love, espeacilly the one who loves her unconditionally Sam.  It might be wise for her, Zoe, or Jill to say hey this lifestyle isn't making you happy, maybe being infected with Borgsford can reblance you, let you live amongst those who love you (Partilurally Sam) and if you want to grow back the inverse table is always there, but you will have knowledge what you did wrong the first time and how to avoid.

To sum, I doubt Julie is happy being a giantess, her new "friends" I think don't care, she's just a member of the pack, her old friends when they find out about Sam will be hurt, scared and possible dislike her, if she were to willingly become one of them it would be a hell of an act of contrition coming to their level after being so high above them.  She deserves to be happy and a shrinking back down would help.

Also regardless of anything else they are a great couple (Sam and Julie), they need to stick it out and fix things.



Author's Response:

Yep, Julie and Sam are at the heart of the story. Can they find a way to fix this is one question, but first, do they want to fix this?

I don't see her new friends as heaping woe on her, rather, they see her as part of their group as superior girls who deserve the best, whether that is fine food, wine and even boys. To them, Sam just doesn't measure up and Julie can do so much better. Julie, of course, is flattered and this is probably why she listens and starts believing their rhetoric. She hasn't stopped to ask why, at least not yet.

Julie for her part is starting to become more comfortable in her new size and just starting to find out the power she possesses to influence others. She will likely grow into the leader of the girls in her new group in the future, but right now doesn't have a clue. It's funny you mention her father. He will be showing up, although not in person, for a small role later.

What if Jill or Julie become infected themselves with the disease? That would be a real interesting twist wouldn't it? Of course Sam is past the point where he can infect others; it can only be passed on during the incubation period where you don't even you know have the virus -- that is unless you get tested. Kind of like HIV, no?

Thanks, Last_one_33. You have a good understanding of the couples situation and raise some good points. Idon't want to give anything away so we'll find the answers in the coming chapters.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed
Date: October 08 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Wow, everyone seems to be onboard, though Sam is still self-sabotaging ala JD from Scrubs.  You have your Elliot Sam, her name is Julie and yes like Dr. Reed if you mess up you are going to pay, but I doubt anyone will be there for Sam like Julie.  Julie isn't perfect, she needs to understand the power she has and control it, which it seems she is trying very hard to do.  Also both don't feel they can fillful the others 'needs', but they each have a harem of supporters to aide their needs.  I believe Sam and the four girls will find a way to ensure Julie is satisfied (and beyond) and I think Julie will take the lion's share (quite litterally with Sam and another scrubs quote "mount her like a lion') of his needs and the other four can 'help' after Julie has handled 80+%.

Yes it's a story, so of course Sam and Julie are going to face difficulties, the AZ trip likely the most difficult one foreshadowed.  Sam's going to hate himself if he infected those women and Julie's going to be a mess trying to talking him down and console him.  At the end they will get there (small scale-trip, large scale-relationship) and make the most of each up while keeping the downs managable.  Good chapter hope RL lets you continue to write and that your situation improves.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

Interesting analogy to scrubs. Unfortunately, I don't watch TV. Yes, they both have their supporters, but mostly their friends are mutual. Well, except for the sunflower club. I don't think the club would welcome someone like Sam at all. Their mutual friends will ensure that everyone is "satisfied". It's just that there's all this other baggage floating around. You'll see.

The thing about infecting others is in the back of his mind now. Do you think it will fester and really bother him later? We'll see.

Thanks for all the comments. I really enjoy hearing from everyone.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07 2019 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81 - Humility

Ouch poor Sam, Julie is desperately in love with you and that time it made her EVIL.  Hoping with time and effort they can start to rebuild, as Julie's love is not likely to deminish or change, and Sam is smart and wants to fix things Julie has a lot of potential and maybe too much love for him, he just needs to guide it and repair things as they can, at this point you have to say the relationship is at it's nadir, if Julie can stay as brave and honest it wil hurt but I think it can be salvaged their relationship.

As the author says it's a widing road, hope these can meet and walk again hand in hand.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

That's the whole thing right there, isn't it? Can they get back together and make it work? Do they really love each other? Stay tuned.

Thanks for the coments Last_one.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Sam is remarkable, other then not being able to 'keep it in his pants' he is a very good person.

Worried about Julie, doubt she's ever felt like this before, I am guessing Sam's first instinct is to go to her and tell her he's fine and its ok (after a couple of days).  Most poeple are their own worst critics, I think right now that is espcially true of Julie, every kindness from Sam right now may be more acid on the wound (I don't deserve him, I am a monster, He needs to stay away from me for his own good...).  Sam does have to be Sam so as K suggest a message that he's ok and he hopes she feels better and he is there for her and would like to talk if she would may cause lots of tears but also give her hope.  A small living plant of a non-romantic nature that he knows she likes with a note like the message would burn as well but would also reinforce he cares for her without being overbaring.

Right now Julie needs to determine iif she can be good for Sam (which I believe she is).  If she's grown like I think she has in spirt and emotionally every time she sees, talks and makes love with Sam from here on out there will be that bit of pain to remind her of what she did, and the wonderful man she did it to.  In time (maybe a short amount) the joy will outwiegh the pain, but it will never go away, cause I believe at some level she will never forgive herself for it and over time Sam is smart enough to know it and though he forgives her he will have to stop saying or it will become picking at an old wound..

Good Chapter, saying 'hi' hoping time and life are treating you well!



Author's Response:

As far as Sam keeping it in his pants, I'd like to see how you do if you were on the same meds. I decided to give it a name: pentadequinolone or pdq. It's because of this that all the girls, and Sam, are so, let's say, amorous. I mean, would people really be that horny in real life? Or could the shrinking alone make them all that over sexed?

Julie has known the situation all along and knew that someday she'd have to confront the truth and tell Sam. That day has come and she feels terrible about the whole thing. I think Sam can forgive her, but can she forgive herself? We'll find out soon, I hope. I made some changes to the way I wanted this story to go and I'm still struggling with this. I hope it turns out better than what I had originally planned.

Thanks for the feedback. I'll get some chapters up soon, I promise.

There's some things I need to take care of in the aftermath of what has happened in my life, but we're moving on. It's still busy. I don't know how I find the time to write. I do this mostly late at night.

Like I said, the story will throw some more twists at you and I hope you like it. There are a couple of other stories I'm working on when I get writers block for this one. So please be patient. Sorry to make everyone wait between chapters, but more is coming.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed
Date: March 09 2019 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85 - We meet again

Been a while since I reviewed a chapter, like Bigdawg been a bit aprehensive about the course of the story.  I to have been for Julie and Sam and am still hoping they get a good ending if not a perfect one.

Jill and Sam shot, well likely for Jill not as bad, you stated that Billy was about 2 and a half feet tall meaning he wieghs around 25 to 30 lbs, having shot a .45, a 9mm, several rifles and other pistols I can tell you that someone over twice his hieght and at least six times his mass has rounds move when firing in haste even with a two handed grip.  Considering the pistol is only just over 1% of my mass and the rounds when firing hastely move around 8 inches consider how much they would move if it was 10% of your mass with the recoil and having Sam immeadity rush you.  The first thing that would happen to Jill is she would fall and for Billy the rounds would rise, One hit on Jill no probelm, two hits maybe 50/50 three or more apporaching nill.  Then there is the weapon he could carry anything heavier then a 9mm would be out, he could get one accurate shot and maybe break his arm (or arms) with the recoil.  Even more likely a .22 pistol, lighter, easier to carry and easier to perchuse as it's a target pistol, but for Billy more then enough to handle Sam and his shrunken body.

Jill had medicial care well within the Golden Hour which should bode well for her, she was able to speak indicating she was breathing and likely her heart was intact, and considering her size bleeding out isn't very likely.

Sam on the other hand being half Jill's hieght and maybe 1/5 her wieght should be in a fair bit of danger, espeacilly if the bullet is lodged near the femural arterity (which with the amount of blood saterating his pants is highly likely).  That he passes out on the way to surgery is likely not a good thing.

As for the review response mentioning blame, kind of hard to blame someone whose been shot so my bet is either Billy, members of Sam's Harem or the police for not protecting Sam and getting Jill involved.

Thanks.



Author's Response:

Without giving anything away, you'll find out in the next chapter that it was a .380. Not the most lethal round, but like a .22, even it can kill. It just depends on what it hits. Remember that Jill was bending over and Billy could have gotten a few shots into her before Sam or Jill could have deflected it enough.

The point here is what Julie feels about the whole situation. 

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23 2019 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92 - Turn around Monday

Good Chapter,

Julie is slowly moving, Sam needs to let her move (others have said it as well...), Like that Sam is trying to devolp her beyond her physical self and that she's willing to take the chance (she's a little scared, but she bends).  It is fairly clear that she still has warm and strong feels for Sam, they cut in both directions.  She would love to return to him, but the same feelings that want that return are terrorfied she will hurt him again.  Until she can trust herself with his physical and emotional well-being they are 'stuck' in the friend-zone.

Zoe is getting aggresive, would like to know more about Sam's phermones, could a cure be hiden in them???  Something is making the girls grow when they should shrink will it be potent enough to make Julie get to 10 feet :-).  Look forward to your next chapter, thanks.



Author's Response:

Julie is certainly slowly moving slowly. <--- That's not a typo.

Sam is working on her in all sorts of different ways. The two just have to get back together; they both want this. Something's wrong if they don't. But what could go wrong?

And don't worry, Sam's pheromones make a return. Just maybe not like you think.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

OUCH that chapter hurt Julie, come on Julie don't keep talking down about yourself and how you are wrong for Sam.  Sam you need to stay calm, realize she's hurting and even though you are trying to help you need to be there for her more then anything else.

Needless to say I wasn't fond of this chapter, hope for happier ones for Sam, Julie and the rest...



Author's Response:

This one was on Sam. Julie was making excuses but Sam lost his temper.

This latest is really only half the chapter, I split it. I'm still struggling to get the next part up to where I want it. This one is pretty delicate but I hope to have it up soon. I did several stabs at it and I hope it turns out ok. In retrospect, maybe I should have kept it as one whole chapter, but you all will see soon.

Thanks for the comments.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

I think contray to Bettie Sam and Julie are 'doing it right... :-)'

Like that Julie is being a bit more possesive or Sam, even if it was half-in-jest.

So what will it be like when it's just Zoe, Gail and Sam with Julie 'visiting'?

Liked that it's was a tad less heavy then recent chapters, hoping Sam and Julie can re-spark the earlier 'fun' of their relationship while growing and maturing enough to know what their partner needs from them and ensuring they don't hurt that partner (KEY for Julie!)

Thank you!  Great Chapter, all that was missing was the discribtion of the 'giantess sex' '-)!!!



Author's Response:

What does Bettina know? Huh? BTW, I wouldn't you let her here you call her Bettie; you wouldn't want to incur her wrath.

As you'll soon see, it Julie's possessiveness that ... well, just wait.

And what makes you think that Julie's just visiting?

If you like that the heavy stuff is over and the fun beginning again then I have a few more chapters for you, my friend. As far as giantess sex, the last chapter was a bit long and when I worked it in it just didn't seem to fit with the chapter. I'm still learning to write this kind of stuff and hope I get better.

Thanks Last_one_33!

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Loved the chapter until I got to the end notes...

Please let Julie's possiviness have a ratiional and good solution, like maybe her getting on her knees and asking Sam to marry her.  I mean she was at least tolerating Cindy and him being alone.

It seems like it's always they start then a twist then hell breaks loose, can we end like it began with them enjoying life and 'growing' (this time together).

Thank you.



Author's Response:

You anticpated it, but got it wrong. It was Sam, not Julie. Julie is a gem, she just doesn't know it. Sam sees it though and that keeps him going.

Maybe there's been too many twists in this story. I've been working on other stories though I don't know if I'll publish them. It will have to wait until this one is finished for sure. The twists in the others are integral to their story, so no apologies there. I think you'll enjoy the next chapter coming up.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

I like the playful, confident, sexy and dominate Julie.  I think she has a contact high every time she thinks about Sam, Top Secret clearence, well-paid, smart, problem solver, has a great heart and is willing to do things for even those that hurt him (like her) all that and he fits into her hand :-).  Thats part of the high as well to know this man of so many gifts is hers and if she was of a mind to he could be hers alone (no one is going to challange a 8' tall supergirl like her), that she has all this power on Sam in size and attraction, she might not need Zoe and Sam for anything else, not that having Zoe in a simalir situation doesn't make her motor rev higher.

Physically Julie will be careful, but she is still young, I don't think she gets all the mental aspects of her power.  Even being gentle playing with Sam and Zoe like they are dolls maybe cute as hell for Julie, but maybe a tad controling for Sam, and I think Julie knows it's a bit controling (experimentation), but I don't think she's to the point where she considers her every action, so for a while she's going to make 'uncomfortable' mistakes.  Sam's a grown man he knows it will be ok and he did ask for experimentation.  Though I did like Sam being trapped under Julie's panties, from her laughter Julie did as well, embrassing but fun Sam can handle...

Everyone is still growing but Sam, considering all he's been through and all he has he can deal with it though and as he stated he's never had more instreting and fun times, now the author is going to put some problems in his way, but we all need character develop.

Great Chapter, hope things are moving in the right direction at home.  Keep Julie and Sam together, together they can handle anything!



Author's Response:

I like how you put that, "contact high" that she gets. But I think all the girls do: Sam is confident, handsome, and can be a good provider. If only he were bigger. Yes, Julie is still getting used to being so much bigger and especially so much bigger than Sam. But she is starting to settle in as her new role as the stronger and dominant one. Sam is not the only one who's not growing though. The story has a few more twists to it and it will bring some turmoil to their relationship. Let's hope Julie and Sam stay together.

Speaking of turmoil, the person who was very close to me and has been in and out of the hospital the past few months has died. I'm still dealing with this and the aftermath so I may not get the next chapter up for a little bit. It is written, as is the next three chapters after this, but they of course need TLC. I don't know when I'll get back to posting but I will continue the story.

Thanks, for the kind words, Last_one_33, and also thanks to EVERYONE for supporting me here.