Penname: Last_one_33 [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: September 14 2018
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Found this site a month ago, lots of good stories, not sure on all the ratings, not sure I will have anything to post anytime soon.


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Inversion by littless Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 158]
Summary:

Sam's life undergoes some BIG changes when he gets back together with his high school sweetheart.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breast Enlargement, Couples, Gentle, Growing Woman, Incest, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 102 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 518393 Read Count: 695090
[Report This] Published: May 16 2017 Updated: April 29 2019
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed
Date: September 14 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Great Story

As so many have concluded Sam and Julie relationship is the heart and soul of this story.  In order for this epic to ring true they must find a way to fix this, stay together and both of them grow ever better and more loving toward the other.  They need to stay a couple.

Wondering what Julie is getting out of being a 10 Foot plus giantess, her new "friends" seem more then happy to heap woe on her.  Her domaniance (as you said feeling her oats, that she seems to do that every 10 chapters I will put aside), hieght and strength advantage are there but are they worth it?  Espeacilly considering she use them in a manner like her father when assulting Sam?  The novelity and joy if from growing if they exist have to have worn thin, perhaps she is begining to hate being an oversized freak in a world she doesn't fit into, maybe after her assult is begining to hate having those 'pluses' of domanince and power.

Would she consider having Jill find a way to infect her with Borgsford and reblance things?  She would show great commitment to Sam (espeacilly after her hiding the knowledge that he has the disease) and she would be with a group of people who love her, also she would get sex alot(considering she seems to have had a dry spell while sam was tapping everything around him), the majority of it from Sam, if the inverse table works they could slowly regrow her, make sure step by step she handling her issues rather then thinking it's normal she feels anger and a willingness to act on it with as she grows.

I would like the character to be happy and at 10 feet plus she just seems miserable, I don't think she's getting anything new or better by growing, I think she feels trapped by her size, and she has glimpses of insight that she's hurting those she cares for and love, espeacilly the one who loves her unconditionally Sam.  It might be wise for her, Zoe, or Jill to say hey this lifestyle isn't making you happy, maybe being infected with Borgsford can reblance you, let you live amongst those who love you (Partilurally Sam) and if you want to grow back the inverse table is always there, but you will have knowledge what you did wrong the first time and how to avoid.

To sum, I doubt Julie is happy being a giantess, her new "friends" I think don't care, she's just a member of the pack, her old friends when they find out about Sam will be hurt, scared and possible dislike her, if she were to willingly become one of them it would be a hell of an act of contrition coming to their level after being so high above them.  She deserves to be happy and a shrinking back down would help.

Also regardless of anything else they are a great couple (Sam and Julie), they need to stick it out and fix things.



Author's Response:

Yep, Julie and Sam are at the heart of the story. Can they find a way to fix this is one question, but first, do they want to fix this?

I don't see her new friends as heaping woe on her, rather, they see her as part of their group as superior girls who deserve the best, whether that is fine food, wine and even boys. To them, Sam just doesn't measure up and Julie can do so much better. Julie, of course, is flattered and this is probably why she listens and starts believing their rhetoric. She hasn't stopped to ask why, at least not yet.

Julie for her part is starting to become more comfortable in her new size and just starting to find out the power she possesses to influence others. She will likely grow into the leader of the girls in her new group in the future, but right now doesn't have a clue. It's funny you mention her father. He will be showing up, although not in person, for a small role later.

What if Jill or Julie become infected themselves with the disease? That would be a real interesting twist wouldn't it? Of course Sam is past the point where he can infect others; it can only be passed on during the incubation period where you don't even you know have the virus -- that is unless you get tested. Kind of like HIV, no?

Thanks, Last_one_33. You have a good understanding of the couples situation and raise some good points. Idon't want to give anything away so we'll find the answers in the coming chapters.

Summary:

Nathan is going off to college soon, leaving behind his closest friends and neighbors, the Small triplets. But they let him know that they're going to the same school as well, and he's staying with them! However, after some time he begins to wonder what their true intentions really are...

Soon Nathan, and the world, will find out.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Mouth Play, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, BBW, Butt, Feet, Futanari, Gentle, Growing Woman, Incest, Lesbians, Maternal, Odor, Slow Size Change, Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Watersports, Vore, Unaware, Sci-Fi, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 195544 Read Count: 330707
[Report This] Published: July 08 2017 Updated: July 04 2022
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Small Sisters

Again great Chapter, again more Slyvia! though some Diane might be nice, and Yuki being even larger wouldn't hurt either!  Looking forward to more.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Small Sisters

loving the last chapter, if you want some view on where the story could go, Sylvia should be the dominate sister, she should grow much larger the other two.  It should go to her head a bit, but her natural responible nature and gentle character prevent her from hurting anyone, intimadating the hell out of someone... well she's ok with that.  She should grow her dolls and experence the joys have having nate and yuki mate in her 'mating' tube (basically mating with her as well).  I like the concept of her growing off her own milk as well (other reviewer).  Maybe as she get larger and stronger her milk has other properties that allow her to be the resonpible and gentle one, those that drink it are more 'inclined' to follow her lead and she produces ever greater amounts, since it is so 'good' for everyone she shares with reseriovros, lake basically any source of fresh water (and drinking water).  Just my two cents, thank you anc keep it up!

Summary:

Disappearences of ships, people, and other strange things happen on a remote mysterious Island. A 20-year-old college sophomore visits the Island for an internship at a facility... Powerful forces put her at the forefront of life-changing events and some events that could even change our world forever.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Destruction, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 82447 Read Count: 167483
[Report This] Published: July 23 2017 Updated: April 26 2022
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed
Date: October 16 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants

going through the story a couple of questions come to mind:

How are did their daughters grow so large?  With Helga did she and her husband/mate/lover with or without help of the labs on the island conieve her two daughters after the process and then at least every female from Helga on down is going to be a giantess? or did she put them through the process as well? What about Sam, she's only been under the process for a year, did her daughters go through it as well?  Does having a close kin (mother/sister/even father/brother?) go through the process spill over to their relations?  It would make sense that girls who are still growing would grow faster then the 'already completed growing' Sam.  Seems a bit wrong to be subjecting children without choice to what is still an experimentail process...  Though it would be harder to raise them being 70 foot tall and their 3 feet tall/long, maybe safer to have them roughly the mom's size?

Just a couple of questions, like the story, hope it won't be another two months before the next update.  Thank you for your work, thought and effort you put in.

 



Author's Response:

@Last_one_33. Thank you for your review.
I don't mind those questions at all, I like them. Don't worry, I like the detailed logistics about all your questions. I have all the answers to your questions detailed over the course of the story. These pieces of explanation of how things work I have already written and have to check in which chapter to reveal something.

I want to answer your question why subjecting children without choice to an experimental process. But I can't, I would spoil to much. The growth procedure is much more complex and or a reason.

 

 

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 07 - Twin Peaks

Great Chapter, can't wait to see what Helga and Wendy do next.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouraging words, Last_one_33.

Thank you and other reviewers up to this point for showing interest in this story.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants

Great Story man, can't wait for Chapter 10!



Author's Response:

@Last_one_33.

I hope I can finish in the weekend. The first part of it is done and could be its own chapter, but I want to make it much longer.

Endless by Curse Crazy Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A creepy college student uncovers a book of curses, and the depths of her wild personality come to life. By conducting a ritual to shrink people, she is able to hold in her hands the target of her obsessed affections, along with other victims that cross her hexed path.

(If you enjoy the story, consider supporting me on Patreon~ https://www.patreon.com/cursecrazy

Or, just treat me to a coffee~ https://ko-fi.com/cursecrazy )


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Humiliation, Lesbians, Slow Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168220 Read Count: 252009
[Report This] Published: June 25 2018 Updated: May 02 2019
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstar
Date: December 11 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Seen enough cop shows to know where this is going Ardrainls 'choice' will be basically kill some innocents or lots of innocents (maybe with even more vore... great...). 

You write well, but depending on the next couple chapters I think I am going to put up the lemon juice and salt.  Perhaps if Ardrain would pick up the lemon, salt and razor Mel could be moved from always present hurt everyone around me (though some justification of insane parents, still not enough) and expect my crush to love me. 

The plot armor or armored plot, the inability of Ardrian to make the obivous threat that would stop Mel butt cold, Ardrain telling she hurts another person she hurts herself, she kilss another person her crush kills herself leaving Mels already hollow life a complete VOID, at this point she knows she doomed and for her to continue to 'play' with Mel is only going to get innocents hurt and kill.

We'll see what devolps, though the storyline seems more like flaggeting oneself at this point...



Author's Response:

Wherever your expectations may be, it's my hope you enjoy the story as it continues! Chapter sixteen is up, so perhaps you will see more of what angle I'm going for. Thank you for the read and the review~

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: January 12 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

Yeah still on course of what I expect, hopefully Adrian will guide Mel's choices to 'empower' her potion toward those that are truly evil and deserving of being shrunk (if not worse), rather then Mel just shrinking random poeple, also if Mel's able to 'muate' the potion to remove the curse Adrian needs to ensure that part of her 'freedom' is that the 'innocents' (espeacilly the five random people Mel shrank at the motel as well as the remaining captuves) are restored.

 

Thank you.

Camilla by little mikey Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Society is changing rapidly, and Mark Lawrence has fallen behind the times.  Looks like someone will need to catch him up … but who??

 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Humiliation, Incest, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47101 Read Count: 61928
[Report This] Published: August 20 2018 Updated: February 10 2019
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed
Date: October 08 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What's with the voliance in chapters 3 and 4.  Yeah I get defending yourself against and aggressor (3), but three women just letting Lynn do that to Phil for what 45 minutes and over what her daughter being a touch distressed that daddy raised his voice at her darling.  I mean how would males react today if one of their "side" did that at the least police would of been called.  You know injuries were inflected or Phil would of been at the send off.

Hoping Camilla listens to her conscience, she knows what Lynn did was wrong, to blithley state "that's the way things are' isn't how decent people regardless of thier power should act.  Maybe she calms down and realizes she overreacted with her dad (wanting to hurt him and enjoying the prospect), and that maybe her, Carly and Hannah should check on Phil.  Maybe confront Lynn on it, perhaps start thinking how they would like if the shoe was on the other foot (Camilla keeps stating it's for the 'men's' benefit would like her to place herself in Phil and her father's shoes before accepting things as they are and maybe try adjusting things so that even if the world is female dominant Males would get some protection-and not like the MOB 'protection' they are currently getting and more then pet awards for learning how to cook from ground start! (college level effort but men are 'simple')Would like for Phil to be her canary in the coal mine and know if he is being abused then it is wrong for her to do it.

80-90% of men through out history have been decent, hard working and kind to their suposes, it's the 1 to 2% that ruin it for the rest.  It seems that at least 25% of women in your world (perhaps 90%) just want to play wack a male for petty reasons.

Finally after 'disciplining' Phil for 45 minutes for one sentence out of line what does Lynn think Mia's going to do to him and others even though she disobeyed her as well maybe Camilla could bring that up.  As with other reviewers we'll see were this goes...

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed half-star
Date: October 29 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Domestic abuse for venting, not doing chores and leaving house cause it's dangerous, well it's safer then in the house, rather take my chances on the street at this point.  The story there isn't really one, it's just a bunch of ways to hurt males cause they are males.  If the guys weren't decent enough maybe you could strech it into making sense, but they are all good guys, Mark is mouthy but doesnt hurt a soul.  At this point I feel the need to be medicated since it's just trying for burtality.

As  Ecstacy states it's the same old plot refreshed abit, kind of sad and pathttic cause Camilla might of been a decent character, now she's just a goose-stepper who brutilizes men.

chapter six will be the last I will read, if it's just about beating men, or a half assed appolgie then beat men I have better thing to do with my time.

Summary:

Titans are on average 24 times bigger than humans and look exactly the same. The Titan Empire is vast, spanning 1/5 of the Milkey Way Galaxy. A warp capable species. Earth is seen as a reserve and Earth humans don't know of the existence of Titans or other Alien life. Humans(abducted or bread) in the Empire are seen as pets.

Enjoy this exciting adventure.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3452 Read Count: 8674
[Report This] Published: October 22 2018 Updated: December 20 2018
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Humans, Pets ?!

Intresting read, Good view on Wendy, she's a bit programed to be 'human are pets' but with character devolpment I think she'll get there.  Please continue this story.  Thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review, Last_one_33. Wendy's view on humans will be an interesting one over the course of her adventure. My first chapter is sort of a proloque and the second chapter too.

I have already written chapter 2 and parts of 3 and 4. They are interesting too read and understand, but it is to condense. I have to make them longer.

Summary:

The Flare, a massive solar eruption that hit America's West Coast, caused the death of a million women. Not everyone affected by the Flare developed terminal cancer, though. Four women woke up, after three very painful months, turned into something else. Over eight feet in height and possessing supernatural strength, Jennifer, Susan, Nathalie and Nicole will have to learn to live their lives in their new condition.

The Phoenix Initiative is the military project that takes care of them, studies their possibilities but also tries to replicate the process in the background. It has been going on for over a year... when one of the girls decides that she has had enough of being treated like a lab rat. 


Categories: Sci-Fi, Giantess, Destruction, Muscle
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37085 Read Count: 22743
[Report This] Published: November 04 2018 Updated: December 02 2018
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Well Nicole did an awesome job against the Tongs, tell me why she didn't stay with the government (keep your friends close your enemies closer...).  She could of been do that to AQ, and other terrorists and having just as much if not more FUN.  Other then as you state the government doing a mass caustiely event to kill her their isn't a whole lot they could do.  If she was a hot a lawyer as you say, she should of played the game, gone into politics and became first president then empress (her strength, beauty and ablities it would of been so much simpler).  Now the Government has a reason to two track(PR and really trying to find out how to kill them) it rather then PR with low-end/low-key research on how to kill them.

Just a couple observations, good story, thank you!



Author's Response:

Well, as I will explain in further chapters, Nicole suspected that the government was working to get increased control of her, which is the reason she left. She knew she would be used as a tool, but also that they would keep researching on her, which is what she wanted to avoid. She actually has a plan on how to prevail, but it required getting out of the control of the FRU. 

I'm glad that you like the story. I hope that you will continue enjoying it!

Summary:

Things in my life became weird rapidly. The funny thing is, they were always weird, but they weren't. Or, at least, I didn't question if they were. Or did this just start happening? I'm going to have to go through a hell of a lot to figure it out, and at the center of it all is one woman who holds my entire world literally in her hand. Whereas I'm usually unnoticed by most everyone else, she now has all of her playful attention aimed right at me. What does that mean is in store for me, and will I live?

Whatever happens, I intend to do my job.

My name is John Loya, and I'm a story teller. Whether it kills me or not, I intend for this story to be told.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Feet, Butt, Gentle, Growing Woman, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 73124 Read Count: 165436
[Report This] Published: November 15 2018 Updated: March 09 2020
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Like the interactions, if Jenny is going to try to hook Monica and John up, it might help if Monica is 'in' on Jenny's idenity.  No one would believe her if she 'told', and she may understand things better.

Think most of the reviews are right Jenny likes John a lot, but Jenny is trying to be a good friend first and let john have his shot.  If Monica is of a simular character as Jenny... where do two good girls who want to help (Jenny) or what's best (Monica) for John do when the other woman is trying to hook them up with the guy?

please more... :-)

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Please continue, love Jenny's way of thinking, or maybe movement on John's Flank, please write more!  Thank you!

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

I will keep it SIMPLE-AWESOME STORY!!!  More playful, gentle goddess Jenny!!!

Beth by SkullNoise Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

A fantasy village and a modern metropolis collide when a hunter discovers a secret society living in the woods.

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Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Growing Woman, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6758 Read Count: 13547
[Report This] Published: November 16 2018 Updated: November 21 2018
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 21 2018 Title: Chapter 1: A City in the Woods

Make Grace more power and Dominate.

More gentle interactions with Grace with the Tinies and Beth with Tinies

Have a mutually benefically alliance beteewn Grace and 'New York"!

Great story, would prefer naughty over mean in displining the Tinies, and even then less or more.

Monopolizing by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

A boy plays strip-Monopoly with his friend, but while she loses clothes, he'll lose something else instead.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3468 Read Count: 32064
[Report This] Published: November 18 2018 Updated: December 15 2018
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Story so far, how they both "WIN!" in the end.



Author's Response:

Everybody wins in a game like this

Summary:

Actions that can't be changed are taken and all sides must adjust


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Gentle, Giant, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 70017 Read Count: 58212
[Report This] Published: November 25 2018 Updated: September 22 2019
Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Setting the stage

Mechs against Giant Insects and giants involved!  Let's see what devolps.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

decent backstory and interactions, how much longer to the WAR!

Thanks

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Setting the stage

Great story so far, guess surpises for the insectoids and Titans in how Bulldog fights.