Reviewer: gaddlik Signed
Date: December 05 2022
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
To be honest, one of the first times I’ve been very disappointed by a story.
This was the best new story and the one I had been looking forward to the most in so long.
After Ada believed her mom, I thought we’d see more.
After they had to pretend in front of the mom, I thought we’d see more.
After the soldiers were picked up by the other family, I thought we’d see more.
The way it was gearing up it felt like the rescue mission would fail with them stolen or dead, and you’d made yourself a lot of opportunities for easy content on “down weeks”.
But then, suddenly it ended without any warning.
I hope you reconsider an alternate ending and continue with this one, because it really was the best while it was going.
Author's Response: Well, sorry to have disappointed you. Again, I refer you to my answer to the previous review: I have real trouble writing good smut scenes and I find myself repeating the same stuff over and over again. This is exhausting. If you watch carefully there is a pattern to my stories: The tension builds up, expectations are risen, everything is beautifully described but when it's time to reach the peak with a sex scene...then boom nothing happens, everything is left suspended. Don't know how to deal with that...
By the way, if you want good giantess futa/dominant content I refer you to Mr Z's work on writing.com. As for this story, I don't see it having an alternate ending.
Thank you for the honest feedback.