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Time-Out 4: Boot Camp by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Scott Stevens once again finds himself shrunken and in the hands of his sister Maggie, who brings her tiny sibling along for a week of soccer camp. When her teammates discover the miniature teen, he'll find himself in problems even deeper than giant shoes.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14746 Read Count: 125886
[Report This] Published: November 29 2012 Updated: December 09 2012
Reviewer: neorodent Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Alone in the Dark

You have 12 reviews and five stars and you think this story isn't well liked??  How could it be anymore liked?  Is there a sixth star hiding somewhere?  

I love the power reversal in this story and the fact that you utilize exposition but don't let it get in the way of the plot.  Heck I logged on just to rate this thing and I almost never log on.  What does that tell you?

 

Moreover, I love that someone has finally done an in-shoe sports related story.  This is a personal favorite of mine and so help me, jack, if you quit on us now I will never forgive you  :-P



Author's Response:

thanks for logging on for the review; i'm glad you've enjoyed it thus far! the in-shoe sports concept is a fun one for me too, although the way things are going it may need to be delayed until a different story since i'm trying to wrap this one soon.  i intend to bring that concept back later on in the series though since it is a favorite of mine as well.

My Enslavement to my Ex-Girlfriend, the Witch by mrcool Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

My Ex Girlfriend shrinks me down and turns me into her helpless slave to serve her stinky, grimy feet.  Lot of off foot action, humiliation, slavery, domination, dirty feet, stinky feet, toejam. Can be very cruel at times.


Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Object, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3297 Read Count: 32104
[Report This] Published: December 18 2012 Updated: December 18 2012
Reviewer: neorodent Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (My New Life)

Awesome, Amazing.  Finally, someone else who has the same take on the fetish that I do and can WRITE!!!  In the name of all that is perverted, please continue this tale.

Download/Guide by kyary Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A short story. You find yourself mysteriously tiny in the messy bedroom of a young shut-in girl, as she tries her best to turn you into the perfect worshipper. 


Categories: Humiliation, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3434 Read Count: 12456
[Report This] Published: January 07 2013 Updated: January 07 2013
Reviewer: neorodent Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow.  Please, please keep going with this.  GTS stories that do not focus on some static boring 'cheerleader' type character are rare as hell.  As are those who cater to people like us who enjoy that 'gross shit'.  ;-P  



Author's Response:

I might do something with the same character again. I wrote it as just a one-off but honestly this type of giantess hits too many of my buttons to not use again.  I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review.

The Greatest Plans by tokubetsu Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

A young Japanese genius falls foul of his own ingenuity when his shrinking device renders him a few millimeters tall and at the mercy of his unaware siblings. Will he get their attention? Will he be restored to his original size? Will he ever publish his paper? Read and find out.

I was reminded that I hadn't fixed this, so I sorted it out. The full version is back!


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16320 Read Count: 158882
[Report This] Published: August 07 2013 Updated: December 29 2022
Reviewer: neorodent Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Setting Up and Starting Out

Best macrophilia story I have read in ages.  Unaware is so hot and few authors have the patience to stay with it or the creativity to develop it into sensual yet believable interactions.  I especially like the details of survival you incorporate.  Too often the author simply forgets about the needs of water and food.  I would have liked it even more if he was eventually forced to consume toejam and other wastes from his sisters to survie, but hey one can't expect every story to cater to one's particular perversions  :-P.

 

Thanks for your work.  Here's hoping you continue this and other stories on this site and your talent rubs off on others.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your feedback (and for your rating, my first!). I'm really happy to hear you've enjoyed the story. There may be some elements of having to consume bodily substances or such in an ending, but if not (trying to maintain some surprise, hehe) there'll definitely be some in a future story. It'd be good to be able to tick off a lot of people's likes, or as many as possible without making the story sound schizophrenic and directionless.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to write! I'll continue to try hard.

Erica's House by realRS Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

When every member of her family is shrunk to doll size 16 year old Erica becomes head of the house. 

Will the Rockwell family adapt to the once shy Erica being in charge?  Will Erica let the power go to her head?  


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28671 Read Count: 97598
[Report This] Published: January 16 2014 Updated: September 29 2016
Reviewer: neorodent Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection

Original concept, believable characters, plot which flows out of believable interactions between believable characters, writing in the form of detailed paragraphs rather than two sentence blurbs and endless dialogue, eroticism woven into the substance of the story rather than slathered on like icing on a week old cake.

 

Yeah, this guy knows what he's doing. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, very kind of you.  

Sadie by scrymgeour Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Alan, a recent college graduate, returns to his alma mater the next fall as a tutor for a friend of his named Sadie, who shrinks and enslaves him. 

Eight years later, he tells his story through Charlotte MacBride, a police officer, and an old high school friend.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Holly's Library
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23422 Read Count: 69922
[Report This] Published: February 19 2014 Updated: February 22 2015
Reviewer: neorodent Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

The fucking master of dynamic character has returned.



Author's Response:

Never seen you write here. Tried cross-posting? Thanks btw. 

Life of tyson by Lolwat111 Rated: G starstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A boy is subjected to torture in a all girl school while alone and three popular girls of the high school decided to increase the torture of poor teenager by very high.

Character names-

Tyson,shrunken and enslaved teenager,main victim of the story basically.

Jessica=Main antagonist in the story.

Jennie=Friend of jessica,later in the story dies from a unexpected reason.

Jennifer=Buddie of jessica.They are best friends compared to jennie.

 

This story focuses highly on emotions and thought of the shrunken boy called tyson.

It also focuses on humiliation of the shrunken boy and cruelty of the giant girls.

It also focuses on feet mainly,100% feet.

I dont really expect reviews anymore,it would be cool to get them though,to see what kind of shape the story is in.

I write this story for my enjoyment mainly

That's it,have a good day now.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11803 Read Count: 66564
[Report This] Published: June 08 2014 Updated: April 09 2016
Reviewer: neorodent Signed half-star
Date: October 28 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Some authors work very hard to write coherent well developed stories with realistic characters and engaging plots.  I understand that everyone wants to be a nice guy and give everything 5 stars but that is fair niether to the readers or writers that contribute here.  This piece in no way deserves 5 stars.  It has no decent plot structure, nor basic paragraph structures, its characters are absurd caricatures, there is no extended description nor any attempt to set anything remotely resembling a scene and the grammar and spelling are both nonexistent.

 

The point of a rating system is not to give author's self esteem points but to objectively rate the quality of a piece of fiction. 

Marvin and Jeff. by lazyb Rated: X starstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A smart university strudent makes the best mistake of his life.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Middle Age (50+), Gentle, Giant, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6899 Read Count: 60985
[Report This] Published: October 01 2014 Updated: October 06 2015
Reviewer: neorodent Signed star
Date: October 04 2014 Title: Chapter 1: How it started.

I realize there is now a generation that learned to write via text messaging, but real cogent writing requires paragraphs.  A series of disconnected sentences can not make a convincing scene and it doesn't flow.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the response.  

Saving Nancy by Luidgi Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Nancy studies at St-Lawrence's private school for girls and right at the beginning of the school year, she managed to become the whole school's footslave, and she likes it. As a therapy, the school's principal decided that shrinking Nancy would change the game and save her from those weird and uncommon desires. 

Enough said.

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Legwear, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3397 Read Count: 77961
[Report This] Published: May 19 2015 Updated: June 13 2016
Reviewer: neorodent Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2015 Title: Chapter 1: How it is going to be solved.

Sadly since everyone on this site who reviews gives anyone who can write a semicoherent sentence 5 stars because feelings, there is no way to delineate the mass of trash and mediocrity from true representations of gifted depravity such as this.  

 

Your writing is an exemplar of how a good fetish piece should always have a psychological element which usually demands a highly dynamic character such as Nancy.  It is also an exemplar of how fetish needs to be integrated intelligently into the setting (in this case through the concept of ISS) rather than just crudely dropped in.

 

Here's hoping you continue on this work and I get to see Nancy reduced to subsisting on toe jam.  Granola crumbs are too good for the likes of her.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words. Indeed I always tend to render a dramatic atmosphere but also some character positioning. I still have to work on the fluidity of my snetences since english is my second language but I learn everyday!

 

Thanks again. You've read all I have written for now, so the rest of the story is in my head, no written yet I'll work on the next part, and also, chapter 4 isn't written. 

'DaiOnna' by midnightwriter85 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 201]
Summary:

A shrinking story told from the perspective of Billy Little. An odd character, that happens to stumble into something that will dramatically change his life forever. It's an extremely detailed depiction of his nightmarish episodes. This is just the beginnings of something so much bigger than Mr. Little. Because, before he realizes what's actually happening, the entire world has already changed into a completely different humanity.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Humiliation, Legwear, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 154994 Read Count: 652614
[Report This] Published: September 25 2016 Updated: July 24 2017
Reviewer: neorodent Signed starstar
Date: July 24 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Starts off excellent with fleshed out characters acting like people yet at some point the author's dick takes the reins and it goes down the predictable path of every woman wanting to cram their pussies full of tinies (because that's how women are obviously).  If your boner does not require suspension of disbelief, then you will enjoy this as it is well written in terms of description.  However, if you require believable characters then you are in for a disappointment as it devolves into 99% of shrink fiction (ie set in an alternate paralell universe where 99% of women are sadistic microphiles).



Author's Response:

Thanks for the props! 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.