Penname: exiguus [Contact] Real name: Alex
Member Since: December 21 2010
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A Little Blackmail by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

A brother finally gets the upper hand against his bratty younger sister with a bit of blackmail.  Unfortunately, a chemical mishap causes him to shrink down to a few inches tall, and his sibling is not in a forgiving mood. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30024 Read Count: 515308
[Report This] Published: May 12 2011 Updated: May 14 2011
Reviewer: exiguus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Bowl of Brother for Breakfast

Very well written.  I really enjoyed it.  To be honest, I skipped over a lot of the exposition and jumped straight to the action, but what I read was extremely well written.  Fantastic job.



Author's Response:

hey, it's the beauty of having chapter skips; you can have the story or just go for the meat

A Little Blackmail 3: Life of a Toy by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary:

A shrunken brother has been the property of his sister Carly for the past 5 years, but finally discovers what might ultimately save him from the cruel enslavement of his giant sibling.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96870 Read Count: 692391
[Report This] Published: August 24 2011 Updated: March 31 2012
Reviewer: exiguus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Best Christmas Present Ever

Love it.  This is the best story I've read in a long time.



Author's Response:

thanks!

A Little Blackmail 4: Big Sister Diaries by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 89]
Summary:

The sadistic tales of Carly Arton as she abuses and toys with her shrunken brother Jack.

Set between A Little Blackmail 2: Carly's Pet Brother and A Little Blackmail 3: Life of a Toy.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40786 Read Count: 268260
[Report This] Published: December 17 2011 Updated: May 30 2015
Reviewer: exiguus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Death of a Brother

This was a very good chapter.  Carly is delightfully evil, and I do think there are people capable of doing this type of thing in the world, if given the chance.

 



Author's Response:

thanks for the review! despite how the story can be unrealistic, i try to retain that Carly sees her actions as justified and not truly evil to reflect some kind of lifelike sibling relationship as much as possible

Birthday Surprise by Jacksmith Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

A teenage boy is preparing for his mother’s birthday when he inexplicably shrinks down to half an inch tall, and must find a way to get her attention before this becomes the last birthday they’ll ever spend together.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11367 Read Count: 159910
[Report This] Published: April 10 2012 Updated: May 05 2012
Reviewer: exiguus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Long Way Up

Yay!  I'm hoping he gets kneaded up and totally lost between his mom's toes.

Reviewer: exiguus Signed
Date: April 21 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Death March

I love it.  You have done a fantastic job with the description of the mother.  

(On a side note, I think you meant 'horizontal' instead of 'vertical' in par. 9.)



Author's Response:

ah, good catch. thanks

Reviewer: exiguus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Happy Birthday, Mom

You are a fantastic writer, and you have truly captured a scenario that I previously had only witnessed in my imagination.  I love how you focus on more than just providing the scenario.  You provide excellent character development and let us into the mind of the protagonist in a way that makes the story stand above others of its type. 

And I'm glad you decided to go with the ending you did.



Author's Response:

thanks! i'm glad you liked the ending, i realize it wasn't particularly original, but my goal here was just to play it safe and see how it went since i'm not used to writing this genre.

The Insole Girl by exiguus Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 100]
Summary:

A girl finds herself under her mother and friend's feet constantly, in a world where people wear other people in their shoes.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17619 Read Count: 211265
[Report This] Published: April 16 2012 Updated: May 16 2014
Reviewer: exiguus Signed
Date: June 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe

Just wanted to post to say that it *will* be a while before the next chapter is posted.  I will eventually update again.  If you would like me shoot you an email when I update (if you don't check the site regularly), email me at exiguus1@gmail.com and I will be sure to send you an email when the next chapter is posted.

Shrunk Before The Show by Luidgi Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Jen is shrunk at a figure skating camp full of evil girls who turn her into their tiny foot slave. This story focuses on foot/shoe fetish and is not suitable for every reader. Make sure you read knowingly. Comments and Reviews are always welcome.

 

Enough said.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Body Exploration, Breasts, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Legwear, Odor, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20343 Read Count: 23190
[Report This] Published: May 13 2018 Updated: September 03 2018
Reviewer: exiguus Signed
Date: June 08 2018 Title: Shrunk Before The Show

Hi, I just thought I'd say this is probably the only story I'm following right now. I've been checking for updates regularly, but sorry for not leaving a review before now. I'm really looking forward to see what the girls have in store for her after she gets really small. I'm hoping for some smothering and smashing. :)

Reviewer: exiguus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08 2018 Title: Chapter 1: My first day at the camp

Forgot to rate, sorry!



Author's Response:

!!

you!

The real you! Thanks for taking time to read my story. You can't imagine how many times I've read yours. I am honored really, you are a great source of inspiration for me. I have many ideas for what to come next in this story!

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.