Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: April 15 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Spaghetti War
Chapter 4 was fantastic. Love that Erica is starting to take more control. You make everything realistic. I like how you show things from the Giantess point of view and the little peoples point of view. I am really enjoying the ideas of this story. It works very well. I like the idea that Erica has 2 friends that will eventually help her out. The family will not like it but it has to be done. Was Erica joking when she called her father little man and moved her face in front of him? I think this is only the beginning of Erica getting her way and doing things her way. This is one of the best stories that I have ever read. Keep up the fantastic work.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I spent a lot of time trying to keep chapter 4 from just being a bunch of people whining.
When Erica made her move to intimidate her father (calling him little man, looming over him) she wasn't joking, she was more making a conscious decision to make sure that he understood that she was the boss and would accept nothing but total submission. The time has come where she has to put her family in their place, for their own good. Half power trip, half tactical decision. I assure you, as thrilling as it was she also felt super guilty.