Penname: bartek21 [Contact] Real name: tom
Member Since: January 19 2011
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Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2483507
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 03 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

It is the most famous story full page. This is a great it says.
you feel like you're there too
I will say one thing
Please more
I look forward to the next chapter



I'm sorry, my english is bad



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Bartek. The story is not yet complete so there will be some more. Your English is fine :)

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: February 18 2016 Title: Chapter 64: Cassidy and Tom

something I feel that the 2nd round I'll be a surprise for toma and Cassidy.
I will not be a third person incursion or injury toma



Author's Response:

Thaks for the review Bartek21, Tom seems to have a knack for getting into situations, so it should be interesting to see what happens next!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: February 23 2016 Title: Chapter 65: Cassidy Unleashed

I can only say great!
Please  more !!

Tom is alive and well in a safe place just asleep.

It is still deep inside Cassidy.

not quickly go out tom.

cassidy will be able to hear the tom and tom cassidy.




Author's Response:

Not quite done yet between Cassidy and Tom. Talk about cozy though...

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 14 2016 Title: Chapter 71: Cassidy and Tom

Please more!
Tom Cassidy and behave like lovers
 
  I am jealous of Tom !!!!!!

Tom Cassidy knows very well that no one would be able to met

This is only called deep love !!!



Author's Response:

RIGHT!Tom seems to have found paradise with Cassidy.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 14 2016 Title: Chapter 71: Cassidy and Tom

I think that it would not end quickly and knowledge of Tom Cassidy

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 19 2016 Title: Chapter 73: Serena and Lina

interesting
please more



Author's Response:

As you wish

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 02 2016 Title: Chapter 67: Disciplined

hehe Cassidy vagina is hungry?
Something he feels the vagina Cassidy toma swallow whole and alive?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review bartek21, my apologies for the late response to your review. By now, you will have seen Cassidy has fed her hungry kitty, :)

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: August 14 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

Janine + Cassidy + Tess tom = harem
not only lost TOMA deep in their interiors during yoga.
Probably there will get lost hehehe.



Author's Response:

Unless he had something tied to his foot

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: August 17 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

please more

However, the size does not matter

tom is proved to us

I can not wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

more on the way!!!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: October 04 2016 Title: Chapter 128: Monday Morning Blues

tom may shrink by sexual arousal?
And this happens in front of janine
janine hide it very deep vagina to keep him safe
  (Accidentally she pulls him into her womb and gets stuck for 2 days in it)
Then all they are looking for Tom janine asking where he is. She tells them that he does not know
where is . and in fact, Tom is very close
it would be without the price hehehe

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 10 2016 Title: Chapter 135: From Russia with Love

You surprised me nice!
I never thought that it was Tatiana will toma!

please more



Author's Response:

Excellent, I thought to catch a few people off guard

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 20 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

I think Tatiana That will not wait until tom wakes up with it in his pants.
Only will force toma very deep in the vagina
Tatiana will not let him go so easily.
Tatiana did not tell anyone That he has toma.
tom nobody will be able to find.
tom will not leave the class Miss Addison's class for the quiz.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 22 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

tom should know more Tatiana.
Tom should not come back, because she has so much to explore Tatiana
I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 26 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

Wow !!!!
Please more !!!!
he he
so I agree with TomSpeedy.
Last paragraph sounds like she is possessed. Haha!
This tom it possessed Tatiana.



Author's Response:

more coming

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 26 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

Tom was probably overdone and pull deep the unknown lands ?? 



Author's Response:

All good things must come to an end...

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: December 01 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

I will say one tom is like a bee is flying from flower to flower

a veritable king pervert



Author's Response:

The ultimate honey bee!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 14 2017 Title: Chapter 147: Hello Darkness, My Old Friend

not only is a ribbon pękła.hehe
   That no one disturbed. hehe
I wonder if it will leave there as punishment hehe
Please more



Author's Response:

Thought you might like

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 19 2017 Title: Chapter 148: Janine's Inner Demon

I'll just say WOW.

the question will be whether the second round?

I can not wait for the next chapter

Please more

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 19 2017 Title: Chapter 148: Janine's Inner Demon

TomSpeed
I agree That the body janine depends toma.
The same tom is dependent on the vagina.
the only question is Whether
   janine knows That he is addicted and will be more careful to not lose toma.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 08 2016 Title: Chapter 53: 911

I think that no one knows where tom is
 

 

please more



Author's Response:

;)