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Tom's Story by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 801]
Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2534357
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 08 2016 Title: Chapter 53: 911

I think that no one knows where tom is
 

 

please more



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 19 2016 Title: Chapter 73: Serena and Lina

interesting
please more



Author's Response:

As you wish

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 05 2016 Title: Chapter 79: Truly Hot for Teacher

please more!
this is great!

Tom Good job!
Cassidy let him keep as long as possible inside.
I'm curious how it looked from the perspective of Tom's of this event (orgasm Cassidy).
if the tom is very deep inside Cassidy?

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 14 2016 Title: Chapter 71: Cassidy and Tom

I think that it would not end quickly and knowledge of Tom Cassidy

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 13 2016 Title: Chapter 82: Student/Teacher Conference

more please!
amazing story!
Only there ..... he does not lose tom he he !!
the tom will be an adult it can successfully work as a gynecologist ?!




Author's Response:

We are still a ways from ending this tale I fear...

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 14 2016 Title: Chapter 71: Cassidy and Tom

Please more!
Tom Cassidy and behave like lovers
 
  I am jealous of Tom !!!!!!

Tom Cassidy knows very well that no one would be able to met

This is only called deep love !!!



Author's Response:

RIGHT!Tom seems to have found paradise with Cassidy.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 02 2016 Title: Chapter 67: Disciplined

hehe Cassidy vagina is hungry?
Something he feels the vagina Cassidy toma swallow whole and alive?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review bartek21, my apologies for the late response to your review. By now, you will have seen Cassidy has fed her hungry kitty, :)

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 01 2016 Title: Chapter 67: Disciplined

More please!

Author's Response:

As long as people keep reading it, there will be more

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: February 23 2016 Title: Chapter 65: Cassidy Unleashed

I can only say great!
Please  more !!

Tom is alive and well in a safe place just asleep.

It is still deep inside Cassidy.

not quickly go out tom.

cassidy will be able to hear the tom and tom cassidy.




Author's Response:

Not quite done yet between Cassidy and Tom. Talk about cozy though...

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 06 2016 Title: Chapter 79: Truly Hot for Teacher

She may forget where is the tom, or do not have time to pull it out?
She may wish to keep him inside yourself (a safe place)?

 

Reportedly say the small size ... it is bad? hehe

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: May 10 2016 Title: Chapter 90: What Did You Do Over Lunch Hour?

great chapter!
More please!
I'm curious to see how it looks from the point of view of toma
as long as there is tom
or Katie will be able to hear the tom
  the tom will be heard katie



Author's Response:

Thanks I will keep them coming!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: July 12 2016 Title: Chapter 106: Four's a Crowd

please more

it seems everyone is tempting Tess says Tom is capable of

the question whether tess will be able to protect (hide) toma front line.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: October 04 2016 Title: Chapter 128: Monday Morning Blues

tom may shrink by sexual arousal?
And this happens in front of janine
janine hide it very deep vagina to keep him safe
  (Accidentally she pulls him into her womb and gets stuck for 2 days in it)
Then all they are looking for Tom janine asking where he is. She tells them that he does not know
where is . and in fact, Tom is very close
it would be without the price hehehe

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 03 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

It is the most famous story full page. This is a great it says.
you feel like you're there too
I will say one thing
Please more
I look forward to the next chapter



I'm sorry, my english is bad



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Bartek. The story is not yet complete so there will be some more. Your English is fine :)

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 10 2016 Title: Chapter 135: From Russia with Love

You surprised me nice!
I never thought that it was Tatiana will toma!

please more



Author's Response:

Excellent, I thought to catch a few people off guard

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 26 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

Tom was probably overdone and pull deep the unknown lands ?? 



Author's Response:

All good things must come to an end...

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 19 2017 Title: Chapter 148: Janine's Inner Demon

I'll just say WOW.

the question will be whether the second round?

I can not wait for the next chapter

Please more

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 19 2017 Title: Chapter 148: Janine's Inner Demon

TomSpeed
I agree That the body janine depends toma.
The same tom is dependent on the vagina.
the only question is Whether
   janine knows That he is addicted and will be more careful to not lose toma.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 14 2017 Title: Chapter 147: Hello Darkness, My Old Friend

not only is a ribbon pękła.hehe
   That no one disturbed. hehe
I wonder if it will leave there as punishment hehe
Please more



Author's Response:

Thought you might like

The "Ins and Outs" of the Disneyverse by iambeowulf Rated: X starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A first-Person POV story! A young man finds himself mysteriously shrunk and sent Quantum Leap-style through various Disney worlds. On his journey to get back home, he’ll encounter various giant-sized (to him) female Disney characters from movies like Frozen, Brave, Tangled, Aladdin, Alice in Wonderland, Snow White, Cinderella and more! However, his task won’t be easy, as in order to get back home, he’ll have to get each girl’s attention, even if it’s from the inside...


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Fantasy, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Nose, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 390 Read Count: 10712
[Report This] Published: October 31 2015 Updated: October 31 2015
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 01 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue- Getting Your Bearings

interesting !! please more !!



Author's Response:

More's coming, don't worry!

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