A boy wakes up in an unknown location in a little room and finds himself face to face with a futanari girl, who quickly shrinks him and then has her way with him. Heavy deferance to musk and crushing. Please enjoy!
As simple as it is, this was perhaps one of the most enjoyable reads I've had on the site, at least way back when I found it.
This is a story of a young man who after humiliating the new girl, gets "sucked in" to a frightneing new world.
There are some issues I have with the story- though it has some interesting ideas it falls quite short.
What bothered me more so than anything, was how quickly Pavel excepted his fate, and started to enjoy it in fact. It seems a little more than ridiculous to be honest. Generally when you punish someone they aren't supposed to enjoy it, but that's the direction it's going. She wants her little inhabitant to be happy in her strange strange worlds and I mean- even if everything smells pretty and tastes pleasent- It's still a world of shit, and then a world of feet- and fungus. It's degrading in many many ways and he just gives up and accepts it, and he starts to roll with it and just acts like a toddler a good chunk of the time. There's not a lot of actual porn porn here, more so a toss about of fetishes and not too much done with them other than throwing them at Pavel's face.
It isn't terrible, it's just not very realistic, and you could say it's not meant to be- and it really isn't because this is a story about a magical girl that has shrunken down somebody and convinced them they're a toddler that lives in various world illusions within and on her body. What isn't real, and what bothers me the most- as I mentioned earlier- is Pavel's outlook on things, his general thinking process is just baffeling to me.
There is also the futanari tag which doesn't apply to anything, at least not yet.
Not my cup of tea, but it's your story.
A quick story about a family living with a fast moving dynamic causing a shift in power.
The suspense, it hurts
A vignette (or series of vignettes) about two alien roommates, one a 2.5m intersex (futanari/dickgirl/herm) individual and the other a 2cm male. They explore possible feelings of love and the struggles of both intimiacy and day to day survival together, yet apart.
It's going to be hard to top that chapter.
I'm glad you feel it was that good! I hope this new one tops it for you!
A humble and devoted servant fulfills the desires of his beautiful, adorable, playful and enormous princess the best he can.
I continue to patiently wait.
The story of what happens when a woman's shrunken wife demands that she get a girlfriend.
I really do have a love / hate relationship with this particular story. I do still come back to read it over sometimes, and I don't think I could honestly say that it's a bad story.
The very last chapter I can say does feel 'forced' to say the least. In a lot of ways. Even with the idea of how the world works in mind, it's really hard to imagine a mother getting over the shrinking and eating of her daughter quite as quickly as she did, and the way the law was explained after her retrieval of the tiny, seemed rather nonsensical. It seemed like the only real purpose of this chapter was to soon feed just how terrible the world was to tinys, but that had already been explained well enough beforehand.
The transition from all of that to the wedding felt somewhat jarring, and that was partially because with all of the buildup in the chapter, I was expecting either Erin or Gwen to shrink during the wedding ceremony. Then Gwen would be forced to standup for her ideals and a moment of real interesting character interaction could have happened instead of what feels like a makeshift happy ending. Alternatively Erin would be right back in her previous situation and she would be left to consider what Gwen would have done or wanted, and perhaps followed through.
The way the rest of the story was structured felt mostly fine, and it's still an enjoyable read, but the epilogue, honestly doesn't feel like it necessarily wraps things up.
I wanted to try something a little differant. As No Nut November begins tomorrow I wanted to do a little growth story tie in. I will be attempting to update this story with new chapters daily. It's really a bit a of challange as I've never been very good at this kind of thing. The chapters will be roughly 500-1000 words, though I retain the right to vary in either direction.
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Normally I wouldn't comment on these. But I definitely don't agree with raising his size after having read along with it up to this point. Personally, I would like to the shrinking happen almost indefinitely as I find there to be far more interesting interactions that can happen the smaller a character gets. However, while I would like to see him continue to shrink, I would rather him stay as written rather than suddenly get larger again. Normally I'd draw the line at around 1-2 inches in size for micro. But since they're also amazonian ladys. I wouldn't mind ending around half a foot in size by the end of the story.
And while my enjoyment comes from seeing the male character shrink and be compared or otherwise used in things of a more sexual nature, it's still you're story. I'll just suck it up and be sad with the changes, should they come about.
The exception to the change I suppose would be seeing as a lower review mentions with your commentary. That limit being broken. If the girls get much bigger, there's no real reason for him to get much smaller.
It's hard being a young boy in a society that has changed dramatically after the advent of the strange SF virus. Things will never be the same again...
I would be lying if I said I didn't want to see the sequel to this story. I know you said it was likely to be a one shot toward the top, but I can hope.
Author's Response:
Well, the extra three chapters certainly prove that this isn't a one shot. I don't know...something just kept me going. Maybe there will be a few more chapters in the future who knows.