Reviewer: Gigatennisstar Signed
Date: July 19 2017
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I have to make this quick but I really really wanted to leave a review for you because this is one of my favorite stories coming out of Giantessworld right now. I'm more invested in the actual story than just the giantess stuff which for me is pretty rare. The character interactions are nuanced moments you have are beautiful. You really have a way of writing small character moments well as while I really want to see Beverely eat as many people as possible I still mourn every victim (like poor Kate from Chapter 17 who was revealed this chapter to have been devoured :'( rest in peace, in Beverly's bowels). That being said I truly am rooting for most of the characters, good and bad. I want Cecilia to be liked by Samuel Smith, I want Tiffany to be kind hearted, I want Abraham to admit his feelings to Lia, I want Mildred and Anika to get home safe, I want Zeke to keep loving Beverly, but I also want Beverly to wreck house. I really want Thomas and Tiffany to never fight and stay friends. I am more invested in these characters as actual people then for a majority of people in regular series I watch, and yu have actual conflicts in between making everything not pitch perfect, like Sophie not being upstanding by tiny standards or Tiffany getting jealous.
Your chapters are also really long, which is great because it's so much more to read, so much more content I have to look forward to. I can't wait for the next chapter to drop!
And one last plus, this world. If this story ever comes to a close I would definetly want to see the stories of more Rampagers. The world you've set up is rich and lively with different interactions between the giantess and tinies, between different cities attracting different company, different kinds of giantess that invade for different reasons, there are so many possibilities! You've done a good job of presenting them very well rounded with the different kinds of giantesses and as such it makes me really want to see more from within this universe.
Final thoughts, this chapter was light on giantess, well, Beverly style giantess rampaging which I usually come around these stories for. As such it says a lot that I didn't zoom through to look for any rampaging but read through the entire story, and have been since the beginning chapters. Not only that but have been completely invested with each character and their struggle, even the one off side characters. You've done really well and I hope to see this continue soon!
Author's Response: Woah! Thank you, Gigastennistar! :D Imagine the look on my face when I saw your review!
I'm honored you like the story so much that you'd say it's one of your favorites! Yeah, I try to keep things interesting by showing as much conflict as possible oh and Beverly rampages are pretty sexy aren't, they? ;) There's a lot of things now I guess to look foward to and that was clever of you to point out what you want to see. Hopefully, you won't be disappointed lol
I might do a few shorts about this word like you said but I'm not sure yet. :\ Again, you honor me with your generous compliments. Thank you dearly for your words! :,)