Penname: asdfsdfasdf [Contact] Real name: N/A
Member Since: January 21 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I decided to make an account so I could review some stories. I have read a lot of great stories here but I shied away from reviewing.

 Takes me forever to write but you never know. I may decide to take out the pen one day. Till then, thanks for visiting.


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Reviews by asdfsdfasdf
Summary: Tori takes her new slave down to the beach to test his training. Pete comes to realize the hardships and rewards of serving a goddess one on one.
Categories: Humiliation, Body Exploration, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4989 Read Count: 27142
[Report This] Published: June 18 2010 Updated: June 23 2010
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed
Date: June 23 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nicely written. I was kind of hoping he would get shrunk smaller than her nipple.. but it would have ruined the flow of the story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I should have shrunken him more you are right! maybe next time

Summary:

A misanthropic scientist's invention changes the world, his son narrates the story.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8647 Read Count: 28368
[Report This] Published: June 20 2010 Updated: June 20 2010
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed
Date: June 20 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Listening to John Walter

Interesting development, not sure what happens next. I skimmed a lot of it though, so I'm not too sure on the characters besides Holly, Amber, Doc, his son. Was an enjoyable read and I can't wait for your next update.

Summary:

A boy watches a shooting star and makes a wish.   He has a friend that is on vacation in Florida and today was her birthday so he wished to teleport to where ever the birthday cake was at.  Where will he end up teleporting to?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2250 Read Count: 33970
[Report This] Published: June 22 2010 Updated: June 22 2010
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 23 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Final Chapter

I have to admit, that was a pretty twist. I thought it was all over on chapter 3. Didn't realize she would wish on the star too. Short and sweet.

All of a Sudden by Vord Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Short story: A college student is in desperate need to get his girlfriend's attention, after shrinking down in her room. While also avoiding being stepped by her.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1059 Read Count: 16902
[Report This] Published: August 16 2010 Updated: August 16 2010
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed
Date: August 16 2010 Title: Chapter 1: All of a Sudden

Nice short story. Glad to see you writing again.

Author's Response: Yeah, I've kind of been lazy on writing, but now I'm back and I'll see that I'll write some more stories later withing the month or so.

Summary: (Soul Calibur Fanfic) Soul Edge's thirst for souls is getting to be too much for Tira to handle on her own, so she does some forceful recruiting, trying to find the best partner for the job.
Categories: Sci Fi / Fantasy, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10381 Read Count: 6891
[Report This] Published: August 21 2010 Updated: August 21 2010
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 23 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice story. I played only about 5 hours of Soul Calibur and Tira was the only character I practiced on. Using video game characters makes it easier to describe them. Certainly had to look up all of them on google, heh.

I've enjoyed many of your stories; they're well written for short stories. I should go back and review a few. I am pretty lazy though.

Great to see new ones pop up in the most recent every day from your DA acct.

Summary: A young girl explains why her life sucks.
Categories: Feet, Young Adult 20-29, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2388 Read Count: 9423
[Report This] Published: August 23 2010 Updated: August 23 2010
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed
Date: August 23 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Family Business

Not bad. I didn't make the connection she was actually talking to someone. Now I'm an insole... noooo!

Though, not a lot of GTS content. A sequel sounds possible and could be interesting.

Author's Response: That's the kind of reaction I was hoping for, and I do want a sequel but I don't have any solid ideas yet D:

Cleaning duty by dr_joe Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Mel is stuck with cleaning up after class, but Lux decides to keep her company and things heat up...


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Growing Woman, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1775 Read Count: 13163
[Report This] Published: September 09 2010 Updated: September 09 2010
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story! Nice way to end it too. I bet she's really needing that shower now.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I really wasn't sure about the ending =^_^=

Summary: A lonely girl discovers true love when she befriends a lost fairy.
Categories: Adventure, Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15996 Read Count: 74358
[Report This] Published: September 22 2010 Updated: November 03 2010
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed
Date: October 09 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great story so far! Not sure what to expect and the flow of the story is good.

Oh man, a cliff hanger. Sounds like something awful is going to happen. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Hoping we get to see fairy world sometime :D

Author's Response: Thanks, great review! I'll try and write chapter 4 as fast as I can, but I'm afraid it'll still be a long wait, :)

Making friends by dr_joe Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Meeting someone in a club and taking them home is a usual setting. Something about those flashing lights and bopping beats makes people do weird things.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Lesbians, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19690 Read Count: 86620
[Report This] Published: October 24 2010 Updated: October 17 2012
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed
Date: October 24 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice story; I think it is worth continuing. Not sure where you can go from here though. That makes it interesting.

I like how the Rachel's thoughts were being described. Also, fairies are fun. I didn't catch a too much of a description of either girl such as hair color, breast size, clothing detail. I may have missed it though.

Author's Response: Actually, you didn't miss it, I kind of left those parts out on purpose as an experiment. Hope it didn't get to confusing or boring

Summary: Basically what the title says, a civilization of demon giantesses breaches the surface of earth to enslave/devour the human race! It is up to Crystal, a demon turned angel, and a few friends to stop them!
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Growing Woman, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Demon Giantess Series
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16860 Read Count: 34642
[Report This] Published: November 11 2010 Updated: November 11 2010
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed
Date: November 12 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice story! Although, I was sort of hoping Lina would grow back.

Author's Response: I am toying with that idea in the prologue that I have yet to write.

In a Giant Land by Ginbug Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Mike gets transported into a new world, filled with giant beasts, and even some giant women. Before he can even settle down into his new strange life fate whisks him away again, spiraling him into a strange and dangerous journey...
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Mouth Play, Vore, Insertion, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: In a Giant Land
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20082 Read Count: 81392
[Report This] Published: November 12 2010 Updated: November 12 2010
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed
Date: November 12 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story! Nicely detailed, adventurous story. Would love to see it through.

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it so far, the rest is up now. Sorry it took long but I was making some slight changes, mostly spelling and grammar fixes, as well as a few artistic changes (it was previously on deviant art)

Summary: Mike Alexia and Liza have some fun....warning very adult content inside.
Categories: Lesbians, Giantess, Mouth Play, Insertion, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: In a Giant Land
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2078 Read Count: 12761
[Report This] Published: November 15 2010 Updated: November 15 2010
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Forbidden Love with Liza (In a Giant Land)

Aw, I thought this was gonna be a sequel, didn't realize it was complete when I read it. Good to see some bonus content featuring Liza. Was a good read like all your stories.

A naga is a snake woman. The upper half woman, bottom half snake. Now, it would be just silly if it was the other way around...

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it and yeah this is just a little side story. Though it will be a lil' while you can expect another adventure featuring these three with a possible return of the goddess Valnara (and perhaps some other new characters) I have received a lot of feedback and requests to do so.

Nova Force by Ginbug Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

In the future, a Marine is paired with a giantess neko as an unlikely team. They travel through the universe in search of creatures in need..what was supposed to be a quiet 3 month wait for the Marine will soon turn into a conflict beyond their wildest dreams.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114268 Read Count: 371780
[Report This] Published: January 10 2011 Updated: July 29 2011
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story so far! I can't wait to see what happens as Kikata and Richard's relationship grows. I'm also curious to see how the plot plays out too. Wonder if they will make some new, interesting friends along the way. I wonder how in depth will this story get? 11 chapters in and I don't perceive an ending getting close (which is fine by me and I understand I could also be wrong.)

This story reminded me of a story I read a while ago in giantesscity. Has a giantess catgirl and even a lamia in it. Thought it might of also been written by you lol. Nice story, it is called Desert Tale by merc369, I recommend you read it up some time.

Author's Response: Hey thanks for the comment ^^ and that story sounds interesting.

Summary:

A brother finally gets the upper hand against his bratty younger sister with a bit of blackmail.  Unfortunately, a chemical mishap causes him to shrink down to a few inches tall, and his sibling is not in a forgiving mood. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30024 Read Count: 515601
[Report This] Published: May 12 2011 Updated: May 14 2011
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Sibling Rivalry

Great story! I was hoping that his little sister would see the error of her ways. And I agree, a sequel would be fantastic! Thanks for such an entertaining story.



Author's Response:

well, there's 2 votes.  i did wonder about having her character eventually do that, but with the direction I was going  it seemed to make more sense to actually get his sister deeper into her crazy state instead of backing out of it.  who knows, maybe if i do make a sequel, something like that will happen

Summary:

Kate and Cam experience the newest sensation in budget vacation travel.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Couples , Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13178 Read Count: 113011
[Report This] Published: July 27 2011 Updated: August 19 2021
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28 2011 Title: Dimension Airlines

Oh my gosh! What a cliffhanger! Great story! Dimension Airlines is a pretty neat idea and your style of writing edges the reader on.

I can't wait to see the next chapter and find out what happened to our little hero!

Summary:

Felix is a ten year old slave to an evil lord obsessed with obtaining more power. Because of this obsesstion, Lord William sends his private army to even seek out powerful creatures to control. His army has finally come across a powerful creature and captured it. Now it's Felix's task to feed the creature. The worse part about it, is that the creature is not only a giant dridder, but from Felarya.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Fantasy, Gentle, Giantess, Adventure, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: The Slave and the Felaryan
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21032 Read Count: 52220
[Report This] Published: December 30 2011 Updated: January 29 2012
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

Great story and well written! I was happy to see you added more chapters. I really enjoy these types of characters and how they build a trust for each other. 

I can't wait to see what happens next. I can't anticapate where the plot is going from here.

Summary:

I decided to let loose a fetish to my girlfriend, Alex. She agreed to try it, but now I owe her...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Toilet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10818 Read Count: 111287
[Report This] Published: January 22 2012 Updated: January 28 2012
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2012 Title: Chapter 1: So it begins.

Enjoyable story! The characters are pretty nice as well. I don't have any suggestions but keep on going with the pace you're at. Simple and entertaining.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I always like feedback :D