Penname: shall328 [Contact] Real name: Shawn
Member Since: June 12 2010
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Email: shall328@yahoo.com


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Micro Inc. by Senital2011 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

When shrinking tenchology revolutionizes the world... Lives are forever changed to fufill the desires of others. Follow the tales of Keyla Renolds as she's rented out to random people.


Categories: Unaware, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22702 Read Count: 71672
[Report This] Published: April 30 2014 Updated: January 24 2017
Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: September 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Definitely love what you're doing. I wouldn't worry about stage fright, the story is doing great.

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Date: August 17 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, this is a  great story. Not sure how I missed it being posted, but I saw when the second chapter was added. I love the whole concept of the serum and the suit, very cool idea. I am curious about Jasper's appearance and size,  you told us what Keyla looked like, but not Jasper. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!

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Date: October 05 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In with the new.

Welcome back, I was really missing this story. You've been doing an excellent job so far, no doubt about it. I really like where you're going with the story, you've definitely got me hooked. Personally, I wouldn't really want to see Keyla die, she's a great character.

Little Do You Know . . . by Silent-One Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Being taken from your home and made into an "attendant" for the notoriously difficult Carrier girls (at least, the three younger ones- big sis Candace is out) sounded like it wouldn't be a fun job to begin with. Then, of course, things go south from there. At least things can't get worse, right?

A pick-your-path story. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6583 Read Count: 81989
[Report This] Published: September 03 2014 Updated: November 27 2014
Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: September 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Hello.

This seems like a pretty cool concept. I'm interested to see where you take it from here. I'll definitely be keeping tabs on this story.



Author's Response:

Why, thank you. 

Quick question: which path are you starting on?

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: September 04 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Hello.

Definitely Cassandra, I love busty redheads and nerdy girls. Perfect girl for me. Caroline would be my second choice.

The Guild Assignment by faintsmile Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Claire has not gone by her own name in a long time. Instead, she is Seth, a member of the mercenary guild of Braum. She has some unusual magical gifts, including the ability to change her size. She is assigned to protect Autumn LeBlanc, born to a noble family, but when she finds out that Autumn has magic of her own, she is not sure what will become of the 'babysitting assignment'.


Categories: Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Muscle, Sci Fi / Fantasy
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8179 Read Count: 17699
[Report This] Published: November 03 2014 Updated: November 10 2014
Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: November 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This seems like a very interesting idea. Its a great introduction to the world and the main character, and her gift. I'm very interested to see where you take things from here.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

I have tons of plans for my characters! It shall quite the adventure :]

The Fairies of Fairy Tail by Franchise Writer Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

When Lucy takes on a job with her team to stop a Dark Guild headed towards Magnolia things take on a turn for the worst when she's hit with some kind of strange magic.

Lucky for her Gemini know's what to do about it!

 

Anime Story - Fairy Tail

If you don't like anime this story is not for you.

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 176759 Read Count: 146507
[Report This] Published: December 02 2014 Updated: June 24 2016
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Lost Magic part 4

That was an awesome ending to this arc. The castle fight was epic, and written perfectly. I could easily see that playing out on the show. The Celestial World chase for the keys was also done great, a very funny series of events. You really nailed all of the different spirits personalities and reactions. And of course, the sex scene was just as good as I'm used to seeing from you. Plus, Michelle showing up is a perfect cliffhanger to end on. There was just so much quality story, I see why the chapter is so long. You've done an amazing job so far, and I'll be looking forward to the continuation when you are ready to come back to it. Until then, I'll enjoy your upcoming stories.

P.S. I'm not so sure about this times challenge. The castle sounds vaguely like  Cagliostro Castle, but I can't place the creature.



Author's Response:

Thank you Shall, its a pleasure to read your review and i thank you for taking the time to do so ^,^

As for the Challange it is not Cagliostro Castle sadly. The other thing i mentioned it being called was a School by the Dark Mage, i hope that helps :P Same goes from the creature, it comes from the universe i took the castle from.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Seeing Red

Loved the chapter, it might be my favorite yet. I really enjoyed the dominant Erza, making Mira lick her feet. I think the best part of this whole story, is the way you're balancing sex, humor, and romance. Great job. Also, glad to hear the new Hobbit movie is good, I can't wait to see it this weekend.



Author's Response:

Thank you, its good to read your reviews as always Shall, and I hope you enjoy your movie ^.^

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Drinking's more fun with friend's

Thst was awesome, you did a great job. Thanks for taking my suggestions and making them into this great chapter. You really nailed how Cana would probably act in that situation.



Author's Response:

Thanks i appreciate your review and im glad you liked it ^,^

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Some Cat's like water

Another great chapter, good job. I really liked the shower scene, I love when the shrunken person is used to wash the giant person's body. I'm pretty confident that I know the mystery woman, but I don't have a particular request. I'm just enjoying what you're writing. If you'd still like me to guess however, I can. I agree with KentaRyu, I wouldn't mind seeing Mavis eventually. Maybe after some of the others brought up so far, like Erza, Mirajane, Juvia, and Levy.



Author's Response:

by all means try guessing. If there's not anyone you specificly want i can just continue with what i had planned next. Besides im eager to see if you know >:P

Thanks for the review ^.^

 

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: December 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

I might not have got it, but I really like the show, so it came pretty easy. I wouldn't mind seeing Cana involved, she's a great character. Something involving feet or her butt maybe?



Author's Response:

Can do, i hope the upcoming chapter is to your liking. it should be posted tonight or early tomorrow. Once again congratz figuring it our first, i'll just have to make that challange harder next time :P

Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: December 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Great Minds think alike

I tried emailing my guess to you, but I don't think it went through. I am pretty confident on the first 6, but not the leader. Her description wasn't as helpful for me, though I think that was probably the point. You definitely stumped me with her. Anyways, here is my guess.

Lieselotte Sherlock - Trinity Seven

Zorin Blitz - Hellsing

Priscilla - Claymore

Diva - Blood+

Alphard Alshua - Canaan

Kaori Miyazono - Your Lie in April

And the leader:

Arachne Gorgon - Soul Eater (Yeah I Know That's Not Right)



Author's Response:

Lawl XD somebody else jusy guessed Arachne also, they really do look alike it seems.

Currently both you and Devoool are tied in guesses, but nether can seem to get the leader, maybe i made her to fague >.>

In all honesty if nether of you get her by the end of today im going to just decided on what to do next, i planned on getting another chapter finished before new years but it seems this last one is harder then the rest.

Great guess though on Kaori, i honestly didn't expect many people to get her.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31 2014 Title: Chapter 8: A Special Kind Of Team Part 1

You continue to knock it out of the park. The gentle/innocent Wendy was written perfectly. I definitely appreciate that you're still focusing on the one-on-one scenes, as well as the group scenes.

I didn't know that I had been one of the winners of the contest. I didn't guess the leader correctly, so I assumed that meant I was out. I didn't receive an email, and I don't know if mine went through to you. Just tell me what you need, and I'll be sure to let you know. My email is in my bio.



Author's Response:

Alright i sent you an email, i actuelly did try emailing you from the site so i deeply apologize if it didn't go through last time.

Am glad you enjoyed this chapter and im happy to know you guys enjoy the 1 to 1 scenes as much as the group scenes :)

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02 2015 Title: Chapter 9: A Special Kind of Team Part 2

Another fine addition to this great story. Thank you for fulfilling my request, you completely nailed Cana. A nice nod to the incident on Tenrou Island as well, that's probably exactly what she was feeling afterward. I was also glad to see that she was more assertive, when it came to the sexual side of things. I'll email you my guess on the character, I'm ready to make up for last time.



Author's Response:

Its rreally no problem i wasn't blaming you xD Take your time figuring out what you'd like you got the guess right.

Im glad you liked my chapter, i was kind of worried i wouldnt write it as well because Cana isn't one of my favorite characters but im glad to know it was good :)

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Lost Magic Part 1

Nice to see you back again. I really enjoyed this chapter, a lot of interesting stuff happening. It really gets me excited to see what you have planned. I also loved Lucy waking up in Cana's ass, that scene was very well done.

P.S. I like the term bluenette. If you came up with that, good job.



Author's Response:

Thanks i was worried since i've never wrote a scene like that before but im happy you enjoyed it.

As for the Bluenette part, im really not sure if its mine alone since me and my friends have always called people with Blue hair bluenettes

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Lost Magic Part 2

Another great chapter, good job. I really enjoyed everything with Mavis again. The feet, pits, and butt action was done  nicely. I also enjoy that she seemed to be getting a bit rougher with Lucy, I hope there is more of that to come. Still not sure what the three artifacts are going to be used for, but I'm even more intrigued after this chapter.

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear it, and im glad your intregued :D All will be revealed soon enough >:P

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Lost Magic Part 3

Just as I was about to go to sleep, I see that you had updated the story. I decided to read it right away, and it was definitely worth it. Lots of fun stuff going on this chapter. Awesome fight scenes with Erza, a great sex scene with Lucy, Gemini, and Wendy, and the heartfelt conversations with Mira and Makarov. Just a ton of great things to love about this story. I really liked the way Wendy was affected by the magic, it was an excellent way to do it. And I love that you brought in Laxus into the fight, he is one of my favorite characters.

P.S. Was that Elsie from The World God Only Knows, and Akari from Karneval?



Author's Response:

LMFAO xD YES, YES THEY WHERE. I was hoping somebody would notice :P should have expected you to.

 

If your a fan of Laxus like i am then your going to enjoy the next chapter even more, i have a great fight planned for him and Erza just you wait >:P

I'm glad your enjoying my story and as always its a pleasure to read your review Shall ^,^

 

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Welcome to the Family

Wow, now that was a heck of a chapter. You hit all the right points, emotional scenes, steamy sex scenes, plenty of laughs, and even a short action scene at the end. It was definitely worth the wait. I didn't remember a lot about Michelle after you brought her in last chapter, so I went back and watched the episodes she was in. It seems like you got the character down pretty well. As for the previous challenge, you definitely got me. It never occurred to me to look at WoW. After going back and looking up the monster and castle, it was pretty spot on. I'll try to redeem myself this time though. Here are my guesses:

Ms. New Year's Eve/Ms. Doublefinger/Paula - One Piece

Jan Valentine - Hellsing

Adalbert Von Grantz - Kyou Kara Maoh



Author's Response:

OH COME ON! REALLY?!

Adalbert was supposed to be the tough one and you get it in one shot >.>

I fail at charactor guesses ;-;

 

"Sigh" Alright a deals a deal, i'll start working on next chapter today and try to post it sonner then before.

I'm glad you liked the chapter Shall, your reviews are one of the reasons i love to write ^.^

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hey, it's been awhile since you've added, welcome back. I gotta say, I missed this story. I really enjoyed seeing Levy shrunk, and Lucy normal sized. It was a nice change from Lucy usually being tiny, though I do prefer her being the tiny one. I'm looking forward to seeing who you bring in next, I know there a few more female members of Fairy Tail. 



Author's Response:

Shall328 :D

Glad your still a fan of my work, that really makes me smile knowng you still enjoy my story after so long ^,^

I'll try to update when I can but like I said no promises :( working hard to keep active but finding the time is becoming harder and harder.

I wouldn't get used to Lucy being in charge. Levy is a special case, but don't worry, now she has a cute little friend to join her at that size from now on.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Family Reunion

Thank you, this story just helped me get over the bad day I've had. I just love reading your stuff, it always seems to brighten me up. I really enjoyed all the mixing and matching with the girls, it made for some great scenes. The Erza and Mira interaction was a nice touch, and the Wendy and Michelle pairing was awesome. The way they match each other, thanks to how you have set the terms of their sexual performance, made for great scene. I can't wait to read more, and see who you bring in next.



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear you say that Shall, thats what i aspire for with my work. I love to know my stories brighten other's days when their down :)

I wanted to go all out on the bed scene mostly because i need to take a short break from this story for a few weeks, (yes i mean weeks this time) i plan on updating soon. I just have 2 commissions i need to do first, those take presidense. I'll update as soon as i can with chapter 16.

Glad to have you as a fan after all this time :)

 

 

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