A story of two beautiful giantesses from a magical world called Felarya, who find their way into various time peroids of our world. This story contains links to illistrations made by TheWiking2000.
This story is amazing. It reads well, it has a narrative that adds to the sexiness of the story. The characters are interesting and so is the action.
I'm glad you enjoy it. More shall be added as soon as I find the time to write it. Thank you for your review and rating.
Amanda felt like going for a stroll through the city, which is very unfortunate for the city. She has her way with the city in the only way a sex-needy giantess can. If you know my style of writing, you should be pleased!
This was a commission for chapdav from Giantess City! Please rate and comment!
Tom tried to break up with his girlfriend Emily, but things go terribly wrong
This looks like it's going to be a fun story. You have a good balance of action with a little bit of narrative progession. Keep it up!
A trip that no one will forget
I liek the story elements a lot. You ran with a good idea. I think you still need to work on two elements of your narrative though. The first is your description of events. You write in a very point by point approach with little explanation of feeling. This is ertoic writing, the feeling and the sensations are what you're trying to ocnvey. The second aspect is paragraphing and progression. Huge blocks of text are hard to read, plain and simple.
This is done in the style of an advice column. It's taken from my website (http://ask-microkink-labs.tumblr.com) wherein Maxine Microkinkster, science goddess and part-time giantess, is asked questions by curious researchers and eager little volunteers who wish to be her tiny test subjects!
The anonymous questions cannot be sourced, but they were asked by other people.
This is such a cool narrative device. Keep up the good work!
A fun little one-shot about an unappreciated middle aged woman who finally gets an opportunity to get what she deserves.
Not a bad story but the name Dolores is kind of a turn-off for me. It conjures up a mental image of a granny.
A Fragment of Haile Theory.
Haile definitely isn't your average girl; nor is her head down to earth. But she is certainly not afraid to get dirty, doesn't know a thing about cooking, prefers raw food, and hates fish. Long walks on the beach and a stroll through the big city are two of her favourite past-times.
Fantastic work as always. Glad to see you writing a story about giantesses over tiny men.
Thanks! I do my best! I hope that I have improved over the past decade!