Date: April 07 2019 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 7 - A Pledge
Really like the situation that you've created here. The suspense (and the fear) constantly building at just the right pace. You're writing seems familar... a bit like one of my favorite authors. Thomthumb. I could easily visualize the sight of Vicky's enormous feet. Although, I'm not into that, I still found it quite interesting - given the circumstances - the domination factor worked very well.
I don't want to see her kill him. However, the constant teasing is something that drives the suspense. She could, (Vicky) continue the thrilling bits to the point of madness... which I think that she has in mind, reguardless of what he says or does in response to this gentle torture, she's loving every minute of it... the way she bound him to her desk top. The helplessness he suffers at her control is so fascinating.
I would like to see her force him to put lotion all over her entire body while she lies naked on the floor - completely ignoring him - and maybe, occasionally threaten to squash him.
Keep it up- I like where this is going!