[Report This]Date: October 25 2024 6:33 PM Title: 1. A Small Problem in the Interrogation Room
Would love to see more of this story!
[Report This]Date: September 30 2024 5:33 PM Title: 1. A Small Problem in the Interrogation Room
This story is absolutely fantastic. It’s so rare that really great gentle/teasing stories get posted on here. I waited to do my review until I fully caught up on all 6 chapters and the side story, I couldn’t stop reading it. Cant wait for more of this one. I really love how much claire likes toying with bri and how much bri is trying to stay defiant. I hope there are more games, teasing, and general messing with bri in the future. Maybe claire gets some new clothes for bri to wear the rest of the month and makes bri do a reluctant fashion show to decide what she likes, I think something like that could be right in line with how you have been expressing their companionship. Really awesome stuff
[Report This]Date: September 28 2024 11:23 AM Title: 1. A Small Problem in the Interrogation Room
Really liking the story so far! I like how it's taking a good bit of time for Bri to warm up to Claire at all, it's not something that should be instant or too soon but she's showing just a few cracks and I look forward to seeing how she'll be at the end of it.
Great job, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thankies! I'm doing my best!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2024 11:37 PM Title: 1. A Small Problem in the Interrogation Room
My kid of police procedural...
[Report This]Date: September 25 2024 12:18 PM Title: 1. A Small Problem in the Interrogation Room
Great so far, hope you continue. Would be great to see Brianna forced to attend school between Claire's toes. Or sat on while Claire does homework.
Author's Response:
Am going for the more gentle approach where Brianna is slowly being 'tamed' over the month and maybe there will be an epilogue where she wants to visit Claire to catch up and her mother insists she shrinks beforehand as she doesn't trust her near her daughter(And she reluctantly agrees).
Or maybe, after some time of freedom, she misses the experience and breaks some minor rules to meet Clarie again. So I'm going with a gentle approach for now, all things that can be described as pleasant, But we'll see. If Brianna misbehaves or gets bored at home, it may be a fitting place for her to end up in.