Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2024 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 3: The first day

Ooo... this is going to be good. 

Awesome work so far! Great premise and great execution! I have very high hopes for this one! 

I'm really hoping that this story ends with Brianna begging to stay as Claire's little foot girl~ 

I love the strategy that Claire is taking with Brianna, and I love that she told her exactly what she's doing, as that might lull her into a false sense of security thinking that now it won't work on her... when it still definitely will ;) 

That being said, I do hope that Claire gives the stick as well as the carrot, giving some appropriately foot-related punishments when Bri gets just a little too feisty. Maybe Claire's conditioning will work so well that while she's being punished, she feels bad for letting Claire down </3 

This last part is just me rambling, so don't think of it as me demanding anything! That being said, I'm also hoping that the bond between Claire and Brianna stays platonic, so that when Bri gradually starts breaking, the only affection she feels towards Claire is the same that a puppy might feel towards its owner <3 

Once she's broken, maybe she'll still keep just a little bit of her feisty spirit so that she's still fun and cute for her owner. For example, if/when Bri confesses that she wants to stay with Claire, maybe Claire could tease her that she loves her feet, which makes Bri all flustered and insist that she only likes being Claire's little friend/helper, and serving/being at/playing with her feet simply... "feels right". 

Anyways, that's enough for this review! Sorry it's so long lol 

Keep up the great work!! :) 

Author's Response:

I was actually considering towards the worldbuilding in general. If just every human, more so official's daughter wanted to make a slave out of you just for minor crime... That would be a little distopian for my taste.

Hence, I'm trying to go in a slightly different direction here: something more leaning of teasing between friends. Claire actually wants a tiny friend rather than a broken slave. There's something different about holding so much power over an equal to just breaking down a slave(It's just my opinion)

For Brianna, the plan is to remain rebellious and feisty, whilst growing more and more accepting inside, gradually lowering the resistance. She might not wish to be shrunken foot slave, but will still want to return to Claire as a friend, and maybe even accepting of shrinking procedure since her friend likes it so much.