[Report This]Date: September 28 2024 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 5: Getting some fresh air
I would like to say that I am a huge of this story so far! I love the relationship between Bri and Claire, a very gentle, but super playful and teasing giantess constantly testing the limits of her huffy little pet. I really enjoyed the foot rub scene and can't wait for the next chapter!
At the end of chapter one, you said you were open to ideas and I have a couple to share. First, what if Claire upgrades the boring old box to a deluxe hamster cage. It has plastic climbing tubes, a running wheel, water funnel, and even a cute little wooden house with bedding and privacy. Its a much better alternative to the current one, and so much more humiliating for Bri, once again making it seem like spending the night with Claire is the better option.
Second, I like to image that once the month is up, and Brianna is grown back to normal, she falls to her knees in joy. This is the greatest moment of her life, getting her life back and being free of the torment. But the officers see how well Claire did, so they give her the honorary role of being Brianna's parole officer. Not only does she get to tease her more, Claire also acts as a constant reminder of what will happen if Brianna gets in trouble again.
I hope you like these ideas and I can't wait for the story to continue!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the praise
With Claire's character, I doubt it would be fun for her to offer her tiny friend any privacy. As for the bed... she's afraid if she makes her cage too comfy, Bri will stop sleeping in her hand. You mentioned a wheel, and it just seems like something someone like Mae might just have. Who knows, it might just be her gift to Bri to celebrate their new friendship. Not sure about any other upgrades. Claire is just a student and having some drinkable water around that doesn't seem to be ending no matter how much Bri drinks might seem like enough in her opinion.
Oh! I also have some ideas for their reunion. It will spoil too much if I tell it directly but in the world with shrinking technology in use, police should not be the only ones who can access it, although it's strictly regulated and you would need to give your consent on getting shrunk.