[Report This]Date: December 31 2024 3:34 PM Title: Lilliputian Lakes pt. 2
Thank you for writing this! I liked the updates.
The way you write is so captivating, I just always want to know what will happen next.
It's nice to see how Tricia turned her life around, but still hasn't forgotten about her past. Maybe she can still bully people around a bit.
If... she gets out of this mess that is.
Also that mayor is lucky that Sofia and Beth don't fit through the entrance to the city.
I wish you a nice NYE and 2025.
Author's Response:
Haha. I think the entire city is lucky that Sofia and Beth didn't fit through! Would've been great to see Beth lose her mind inside the city though! She would be so happy.
Thank you for taking the time to comment and give me motivation to write more! Happy belated New Years!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2024 6:44 PM Title: Lilliputian Lakes pt. 2
I saw that the new chapters were coming in a series of 3, so I was going to wait for all three to release before reading, because cliffhangers be damned! But I then decided that I couldn't wait around anymore and so I'm now caught up and eagerly awaiting the deliverance of Mayor Dick's just desserts. But as for the chapters that we've already got, there was so much to enjoy in Tricia's journey to city hall. Obviously the flip flop landing in someone's yard, stinking up the place as well as the gondola passengers having to ride along via armpit are both really fun tropes. Quick little story beats to satiate the hunger for smut while the narrative plays out. But I absolutely love the thwarting of both a suicide attempt as well as a sexual assault. And while I totally get why she didn't, I will say that Tricia would've been well within her rights to mutilate that little fucker. But I am glad that he didn't get a fetish death either, cuz that would've been too good a fate for a scumbag like that.
Then back to Miguel and the giants. I can totally get the sense of inadequacy that must come with being in such a unique relationship. Hopefully he gets the support he needs to find peace, but in the meantime, burying his harmful thoughts deep inside of Evie's ass seems like a rational stress management technique to me. And for the brief moment that I thought he was going to join Evie on her way to deal with Sofia, I was ecstatic. I was half expecting some sort of climactic showdown only for Evie to realize mid-fight that she still had someone trapped in her asscrack lol. But safe at home with Liam is certainly for the best.
And then with Johnson's betrayal, I don't think I ever thought Sofia was going to stab Evie in the back. But I did think that Sofia was going to wind up accidentally shooting her partner in the struggle and then having to cope with the weight of that. But to drag him inside of the downsizer because she's immune... Loved that turn of events. Its so fitting to have him spend his final moments begging Evie not to eat him, struggling inside her mouth, only to sink into pure despair once he realizes that he's inside her gut. If inorganic matter was able to shrink as well, it would've been so sweet to have him have to call Evie just to continue begging her to change her mind. When the right people are suffering... it's oh so sweet.
As always, amazing work and I'm very much looking forward to what comes next!!
Author's Response:
The fact that you knew this was going to be a three-parter but you read it anyway, is a great compliment, by the way! This was supposed to be one chapter, but I couldn't stop myself from writing all those details.
That bit about Tricia's flip-flop and armpit weren't meant to be fetish-y, but I had a feeling some people might enjoy it. For me, I just love the reminder of her scale versus the downsizers. But you make a good point about it acting as story beats as the narrative unravels.
I'm happy to hear you liked Tricia intervening in all the stuff in the city. As for the SA stuff—yeah, would've been nice for Tricia to do Tricia things to him, but she's trying to change. And you're right, a fetish-y death would be too good for him. Scaring him half to death and tossing him in the trash should be enough.
Haha. Your comment about Miguel burying his stress in Evie's ass made me laugh. His showdown with Sofia won't happen until after the LL chapters. It won't be much of a showdown, but more of closure between the two. I wrote a separate chapter that dives more into Liam & Miguel's relationship. It's more of a scrap of a chapter and M/m, so I don't think anyone wants to read it. I might post it in my short story collection, who knows?
I've had some people tell me they thought Sofia was going to shrink Evie. I'm relieved you didn't think so. Her character's changed a lot and I don't think it's reasonable to believe she would shrink Evie. And yeah, I love watching Sofia use her super powers in unique ways. FUCK! That idea of Johnson calling Evie from inside her stomach is so hot! Too bad it wouldn't work. But I love the mental imagery.
Thanks for your continued support and comments! I hope you like the conclusion to this three-parter!