[Report This]Date: April 01 2021 12:59 PM Title: Part 3
Incredibly detailed thought process of being under feet, I love it!
Date: February 15 2021 12:05 AM Title: Part 3
Another great chapter F00tprint, and a surprise one at that as I was resigned to a wait for the end of the month. Such a detailed account though that really conjures up the hopelessness of the shrunken mans situation, and I love the hidden aspect of it all as well. As the client is a submissive though, I half expected the dominatrix to use the fate of her little shoe prisoner as a means to torment the new guy. You know, kind of like a 'I have a man imprisoned in my shoe right now, and if you don't behave, you'll go in the other one' scenario.
"Oh, you don't believe me? Then take a look, worm"... ;-)
Thrilling...
Author's Response:
LOL! I hadn't thought of that! But heh, also, for a reason.
I've never been a fan of the quick-shrink-gadget. Raygun, pull trigger, guy shrinks. In my love of realism (if a less-than-a-foot-sized-person CAN be realistic, as you so aptly pointed out!), I look at the technology as something that has to be administered under special circumstances and with monitored care. A few weeks in a womb tank, for instance, keeping the subject sustained and protected while the tech rewrites their genetic code for the new size. This is what happened to our victim. Which, I had plans to describe to some small degree further on in the story. I was planning to have one of the clients get curious, and start asking question when our hero was revealed. But heh, since you got curious, I thought I'd explain it here. ;)
Glad you're still enjoying the story! Stay tuned! There's more coming!
On the note of this installment, I got another snow day, and decided to use it to do some writing. And it's still winter, so you never know!
Cheers! :D
Date: February 08 2021 1:16 PM Title: Part 2
The idea is good, but most importantly you've done a GREAT job with the details (the harness, the descriptions etc); luckily closetslave1 and vegetaboy made thoughtful critiques so I can get away simply saying that I love this story ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, el_rooto! I am very glad you are liking it! And even more gladdened that you took the time to express it!
Reviews are the meat and bread for us writers!
Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: February 08 2021 1:23 AM Title: Part 2
I absolutely love this second chapter with the inshoe stuff! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Haha! Glad you're enjoying it! There's more coming, so stay tuned! :D