Reviewer: moonlitreaders Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2026 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon

Reviewer: Petite Soeur Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2021 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

I feel like I would've enjoyed this if there was a backstory somewhere that explained a lot of unanswered questions regarding Moriko and the reasoning behind her collection of shrunken friends and so on. But being that it's a commission of an original character, I guess the commissioner didn't offer much for you to work with other than gamer and feet play. If it weren't for the attached illustrations, I would've had a completely different mental image of Moriko in my head based on your description of her.

Author's Response:

This wasn't a commission. I just like the character and the person who made them is pretty cool. I just didn't want to bog the story down with a bunch of backstory.

I thought I was pretty accurate on how Moriko looked based on her design. But again, since the images are there, I didn't want to spend a lot of time going over every physical detail of her in written form.

It's just supposed to be about a slice of a day with the character.

Either way, thanks for the review!