Reviewer: Glaazius Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2025 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Homeward Bound

Excellent story written in first person.

Cant wait to see where it goes.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2025 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 15: Belt

Interesting so far! Can I ask, how depressing is it going to get? Claire’s reveal surprised me, and his family seems to be turning pretty fast too. Are they going to lighten up or is this more of a “bad-end” story? Did Claire’s husband really fear everything, or did he just refuse to debase himself to her?

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :)

Whether or not the story has a ‘bad-end’ will depend on whether the main character learns to embrace his new size and accept that he is no longer equal to the rest of the family. The way he’s treated by the giants varies from character to character, and I’m looking forward to writing and sharing how his relationship with the family changes.

Regarding Claire’s husband, I suppose the answer is both. Hopefully the main character heeds her advice.

P.S. I saw your advice about the italics and I take it on board, but I’ve come too far to go back now haha

Reviewer: SuperDuperSecret101 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2024 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 8: Protector

The slow burn 'natural' feeling in a size stories feels so rare at times to come across, but its always been my favourite.

I'm really enjoying the characters and setting here especially as a fellow person from England's north (well, assuming you are!)

Looking forward to see the future on this story.

Author's Response:

Great to see another Northerner on here and I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. Thanks for reading :) 

Reviewer: MXP20 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2024 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up

Pretty good start and nice cast of characters for what seems like a long-form story. I can see Ashleigh becoming a problem in the future and Bexi becoming protective. Sarah sounds like a caring mother, and Josh is a real bro. All the other characters are questionable to me.

I'm really curious what the MCs final size is gonna be and what his adventures are gonna be like. Again, something gives me a bad feeling about Ashleigh, lol.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :). I won't spoil the main character's final size, but you're right to have a bad feeling about Ashleigh haha.

Reviewer: Ryebread9600 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2024 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up

Please continue!

Author's Response:

I fully intend to. Thanks for reading :)