Reviews For Olives and Thorns
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Reviewer: Silverhawk13223 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2025 2:25 PM Title: Ch 2. Rude Awakening

I mean I get where he’s coming from but at the same time he’s one of those stupid people that does stuff without thinking. Once he got outside, hows he gonna protect himself from the number of things that wouldn’t hesitate to eat him? Or the fact that any friends on family likely stays miles away and at that size it would take him a couple days just to get anywhere without dying.



Author's Response:

Olly's thrown into a desperate situation with no real options, so yeah, that leads to him taking big risks. His choices are stay in the terrarium and die under the heat lamp, or escape from Rose's apartment and hope for the best. Is it the most well thought out plan? Obviously not, but if he had a better option, he would've taken it lol.

Reviewer: TheNumber2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2025 2:37 PM Title: Ch 1. Death Is Only the Beginning

"What could go wrong with pushing my victim on some train tracks like a villain in a 19th century Western movie!"

Really enjoy the story so far. Brash, muscular giant and nerdy tiny is a great dynamic. Especially when the giant is trying (and often failing) to handle them with care. Great world-building and intriguing cliffhanger with Lyra!



Author's Response:

Haha! Thank you! I'm glad to hear you're liking it. I have plenty more of that dynamic in store, and hopefully Lyra's misadventures will prove enjoyable as well.

Reviewer: CHULBULLw1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 20 2025 1:12 PM Title: Ch 1. Death Is Only the Beginning

Wow, story progressing at a very good pace. 

now Olly will have a company I guess. 

Moreover, that 'Rose putting Olly in her mouth' was the best scene so far. I hope you will add more such scenes in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, Olly ain't getting away from Rose anytime soon. I like mouthplay too, so there will surely be more. Not in the next chapter though, but more eventually.

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