[Report This]Date: July 02 2025 2:37 PM Title: Ch 1. Death Is Only the Beginning
"What could go wrong with pushing my victim on some train tracks like a villain in a 19th century Western movie!"
Really enjoy the story so far. Brash, muscular giant and nerdy tiny is a great dynamic. Especially when the giant is trying (and often failing) to handle them with care. Great world-building and intriguing cliffhanger with Lyra!
Author's Response:
Haha! Thank you! I'm glad to hear you're liking it. I have plenty more of that dynamic in store, and hopefully Lyra's misadventures will prove enjoyable as well.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2025 1:12 PM Title: Ch 1. Death Is Only the Beginning
Wow, story progressing at a very good pace.
now Olly will have a company I guess.
Moreover, that 'Rose putting Olly in her mouth' was the best scene so far. I hope you will add more such scenes in the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, Olly ain't getting away from Rose anytime soon. I like mouthplay too, so there will surely be more. Not in the next chapter though, but more eventually.