Reviews For Familial Cruelty
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Reviewer: SilentStep Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2017 8:02 PM Title: Circumstantial Execution

This is my absolute favorite story and I read it frequently. I can't seem to find many like it. Thanks for writing this.

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2016 4:55 PM Title: Warm Wet Chaos

I really liked this story, the only compliant I have is that it's too short.



Author's Response:

Haha, glad you liked it.  I try to avoid being repetitive when I'm writing stories like this, so they tend to come out on the short side.   I have a longer series in the works, though, so look out for that in the near future.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 13 2016 11:40 AM Title: Circumstantial Execution

I'm not a fan of this kind of stories(*), but

  1. for whatever reason, I like Queensville, and
  2. imho this alternative ending came out much better than the original - bravo!

 

(*) unlike far too many of my favorite authors :(

Reviewer: richardosteel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 8:58 PM Title: Maundy Thursday

This is great. Can't wait to read more. Love the drawings too.

Reviewer: UserDoesNotExist Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 10:40 PM Title: Maundy Thursday

I... Actually learned something.

I still don't know what Maundy is, though, so I guess I'm lucky not to have HER as my sister.

The illustrations were really well done, and the writing complimented it. Usually the illustrations make up for the writing, but in this story both complimented eachother nicely, giving details in the writing that gave the images some 'animation.'

Cool c:

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 5:59 PM Title: Maundy Thursday

I LOVE Maundy Thursday!!!

 

Well except this was posted on Wednesday but I am willing to overlook such things for the cute little read and the great illustrations. 

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 4:08 PM Title: Maundy Thursday

Plz add more!!!!!! This was aswesome especially the pics!!!

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 12:32 PM Title: Maundy Thursday

Well that was fun. SmushedBoy's illustrations were great as usual, and I'm always intrigued when writers manage to work in a religious angle to these stories.

Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2015 4:58 AM Title: Utility

What story was it on writing.com?



Author's Response:

Oh, my bad, I thought I'd linked it in the story.  I'll go fix that.  You can see it by clicking here.  

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2015 9:03 PM Title: Utility

Wow, this was amazing, especially the 2nd 1/2!  I wish that part had a nice illustration too.  Hope to see more!

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2015 10:07 PM Title: Utility

How original! Great job

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2015 6:22 PM Title: Utility

Great story idea. Loved the necklace idea

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