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Date: July 31 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 15

Your muse is in overdrive this summer. Even when they can make themselves understood the shrunken men are still treated the same way. Wonder what will happen to them next.



Author's Response: " 'Tis in the hands of the Fates." ;-D

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 14

At least Beth speaks english. Not that will make much difference in the end.



Author's Response: Nope! Not much difference, at all. Check out chapter 15, if you don't believe me. ;-)

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Date: July 16 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

Remember the tiny man who turned out to be the master criminal in the Spider Woman 1979 cartoon about the olympic games?



Author's Response: No; but, if you hum a few bars, I could lip-synch it. X-D

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Date: June 11 2013 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

So little Bob has made a break for it. Why do i get the feeling he has gone from the frying pan into the fire?



Author's Response: Running in a blind panic like that, there's (ahem!) "little" else he could do!

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Date: June 11 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

Ah the girls locker room, where both clothing and reality can be suspended....



Author's Response: HA! GOOD ONE! :-D

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Date: March 23 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 12

Worn around the giantess's neck. That might be fun ... at least for a while.

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Date: March 23 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

I feel sorry for Gabe. He's still treated like a good luch charm.



Author's Response: But, of course, he doesn't feel lucky, at all. Now, does he? ;-)

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Date: March 21 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

Interesting call on the personality 'types', of GTS'er's .  The work-a-holic type whom unwittingly ignore the wrong woman?  I don't get it?  please elaborate...



Author's Response: Well, it seems like some stories feature a guy who's really focused on his day-to-day stuff. But, he winds up getting shrunk by some bee-yotch who thinks he's purposely snubbed her. Leading to all kinds of gruesomely gratuitious reprisals!

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Date: March 20 2013 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 9

BOING!  MMMMMMMMMPH!  Is that in He Wenna's native tongue, or.. :"{) LOL !



Author's Response: Gag-muffled pleas for help are the same in any language. ;-D

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Date: February 21 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 11

"he was working on a lap-top computer!"

Sorry to be silly, but my pun laden mind just placed this in another meaning, as in a shrinkie literally "ON a computer".



Author's Response: "Great Scott! I've created a punster."

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Date: February 20 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

An intresting change of pace. Wonder how the professor would react if he knew shrunken men are real and that he's a character in a GTS story.



Author's Response: Only time will tell.

Author's Response: Only time will tell.

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Date: January 14 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

Really top quality sound effects LOL



Author's Response: In the immortal words of Wm. Fakespeare: "I can do naught but try." ;-)

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Date: January 14 2013 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

It's been a while. Having that little recap at the start was a good idea. Aw Bob doesn't like being kissed. Too bad.



Author's Response: Thanks. And, public displays of affection aren't everyone's cup of tea. Although, at his present size, he could all too easily wind up in one! ;-)

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Date: October 14 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

A chapter driven by sound effects ... until we get to the leotards, of course.



Author's Response: Well, let's face it. They're half the reason men watch women's gymnastics in the first place!

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Date: October 12 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

Poor Bob. I do feel sorry for him and his brother. That said, keep this story going.



Author's Response: I shall, indeed. :-)

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Date: September 16 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 8

Chocolate Mouse.

Ironic to discover this now. I've been working on MOUSE MAN - TIME MASTER all weekend, and am about to post the first chapter.



Author's Response: That message brought to you courtesy of Shamless Cross-Plugs for Men. Of which I'm not only the vice-president. I'm also a client. ;-D

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Date: September 14 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wonder if the girls would have won anyway without Gabe? (I'm too lazy to check the results of the real games)

I bet Gabe hates the dessert chocolate "Mouse". 

Wonder what's going to happen next?

 



Author's Response: No need to check them. I did it as part of my background research. As for what's going to happen, next? That's up to the Fates! ;-)

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Date: September 06 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

and which part of his body was having the up and down motions ... or strange stirrings in the region of a utility belt?



Author's Response: In the immortal words of Louis "Satchmo" Armstrong: "If you gots to ask the question, you a'int never gonna know the answer." ;-)

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Date: September 06 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

Do unto smothers as you would have smothers do unto you.



Author's Response: Brothers Tom and Dick could not agree more.

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Date: September 06 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

Will Bob get away, or is he (as we Australians say) "Stuffed"?



Author's Response: Just keep reading, Oh Peerless Scribe. ;-)

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