[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Really liking this story even more now.
aaron
[Report This]Date: February 19 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
What a... Touching chapter. If this is Nicole now, how is she going to be when he's really small?
Author's Response:
Good question :) Honestly I don't think I know yet.
Date: February 19 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
That was pretty good. I like your description. I got a real sense of intimacy from this chapter. I can see their relationship blossoming.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
A gentle giantess on a morning-after? That's a rarity. Nice to see it employed in this chapter. :-)
[Report This]Date: February 19 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
this story should update every hour. I cant get enough of it lol.
Good work so far on the story
Author's Response:
:) Well for what it's worth, hearing things like that does motivate me to update it more frequently - so thank you and more to come.. soonish
Date: February 16 2013 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm sure Nicole is nice person but I am thinking Tyle does have second thoughts. And what will the people at work think if he's not there? Or his family? Nicole can't get away with what she is doing for too long, however much Tyle likes it.
Author's Response:
That's a very good point actually, I'm just not sure how much I really want to get into the "getting away with it" side of things. If I can work something in without taking focus away from the rest of the story I will definitely try. Thanks for your reviews and input.
Date: February 16 2013 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, that was scary.
Date: February 16 2013 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was interesting. I think Nicole is a very strange and mysterious character and I'm not sure if I will take a liking to her.
Date: February 16 2013 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
A good start. I like the descriptive language you use.
Date: February 15 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've been reading stories on this site for the better part of the last 5 years and never created an account. Your story has changed that. I had to tell you how well you've written it. The characters have actual depth and, while there is size play, it's secondary to the overall power dynamic. This is definitely one of my favorite stories. Keep it going!
Author's Response:
I don't even know what to say.. Wow. I am incredibly flattered. Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2013 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
If there was any remaining doubt that Nicole loves to be the domineering type, it's permanently gone. It's now indisputably obvious that when she wants to have her way on something (or someone), she's going to get it.
No "butts" about it! ;-D
Author's Response:
Ha, exactly!
[Report This]Date: February 15 2013 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow!! How devious of Nicole. Not shocking, but still outright lying to his face. Great job, I really hope you do another chapter of this theme when Tyler is totally shrunk!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, and you can definitely count on a follow up visit for (a smaller) Tyler in the future :)
[Report This]Date: February 15 2013 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
Woah, wait a second. That was pretty intense. But still a good chapter nonetheless.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I try to have Tyler come across as fairly obstinate so it gives Nicole plenty of opportunities to do some pretty intense things to get through to him :)
[Report This]Date: February 12 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's nice to see Nicole actually loves (too strong of a word maybe?) Tyler right now. She's in her protective, adoring phase. But what happens when bitchy, dominating Nicole rears her head?
The future holds many secrets. Great story so far. No faults I could find.
Date: February 12 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fucking amazing.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
Suitably tender cliff-hanger. :-)
Date: January 31 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please do not NOT finish this story! This is a fantastic story and it reads as if it was written by a seasoned veteran. Thank you for your contribution!
[Report This]Date: January 26 2013 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow. This story is off to an excellent start. Great work.
[Report This]Date: January 25 2013 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
It looks like they'll both get what they secretly want, in the end.
Date: January 24 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
You certainly know how to build up a relationship early on. Since you know how to do this, could you take a look at my story and leave an honest opinion on it? You don't have to but I would very much like feedback from another author so experienced at this.