Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: May 24 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
The looking out the soda can scene at her mouth is very well done!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I try to make pov shots like that as experiential as I can without making them samey. I hope I do a good job, but it's hard to tell. I appreciate your feedback on the matter.