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Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2017 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 27: Special Privileges

I'm getting mix messages from Maggie, considering how much nicer she was towards Scott lately, least relatively to how she treated him before. 



Author's Response:

Scott is feeling some pretty mixed messages, too.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2017 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 26: Mother-Daughter Tag-Teaming

It's not about "completely" changing the way she works, the real question is about "permanently" changing it...

(not sure about anyone else, but when I was wondering about what the "tools" might be, I never thought about balls)

Author's Response:

No one ever thinks about balls

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2017 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 26: Mother-Daughter Tag-Teaming

The Stevens woman rides again! I always forget what Scott did at times, which is the mark of a good writer making you feel pity for those who are not totally innocent.. However Kyle seems really screwed over in this entire ordeal. Also one day your iconic bratty little sisters need to have a big sister to torment along with the bros. ;)



Author's Response:

Kyle's definitely the loser in this particular scenario. There've been times before in other stories when I planned to have some little sisters tormenting older ones, but it just didn't happen.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2017 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid

Sorry for the triple post!



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No worries

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 25: From the Foot That Feeds

I've read the 3 last chapters because i was away from gtsworld. Good to see kyle to taste of shrunken life. Just curious to see what maggie do next!!! I wonder what is the second person to be safe from punishement from Judy apart Maggie. And I hope that the father will make his entry soon! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for checking back in. Hopefully this newest chapter answers your questions about Maggie. The father isn't quite "soon" but he will still have an important role in this story.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 25: From the Foot That Feeds

I've read the 3 last chapters because i was away from gtsworld. Good to see kyle to taste of shrunken life. Just curious to see what maggie do next!!! I wonder what is the second person to be safe from punishement from Judy apart Maggie. And I hope that the father will make his entry soon! 

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 25: From the Foot That Feeds

I've read the 3 last chapters because i was away from gtsworld. Good to see kyle to taste of shrunken life. Just curious to see what maggie do next!!! I wonder what is the second person to be safe from punishement from Judy apart Maggie. And I hope that the father will make his entry soon! 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2017 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 25: From the Foot That Feeds

Wait wait wait wait wait, so Judy is possibly about to learn some tricks from Maggie? Now THAT was unexpected!



Author's Response:

Teacher becomes the student

Reviewer: TheJackdaw_v2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2017 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 25: From the Foot That Feeds

...aaannnnddddd THERE she is!! Good ole Maggie.. Can't Wait for next chapter!!! Keep it up, this stuff is AWESOME! Still my favorite writer on here!



Author's Response:

Thanks. There will be more to come in a little while.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2017 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 25: From the Foot That Feeds

Maggie's evil/bratty side is coming back again, I do wonder how Judy's story will end one day.



Author's Response:

Nobody can do a full 180 in just one story

Reviewer: TheJackdaw_v2 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 13 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes

Wow! I seriously did not see that coming! I bet Judy is going to come up with an excuse to keep Kyles height down there with Scott... And it's nice to see Kyle acting more brotherly towards Scott finally. It's about time the poor guy got a friend!



Author's Response:

Judy tends to be more of an endurance runner than a sprinter when it comes to punishments

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2017 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes

I kinda wonder what would have happened if it was Maggie that had stood up to Judy. Judy might give her more leeway, but i'm sure even that has limits. 

Though i'm also sure Maggie probably would have found a way to have Scott talking with his girlfriend without alerting Judy, she has before if i'm remembering correctly. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad somebody's thinking about this. Maggie's specific power relationship with her parent will be further explored in this story, especially nearer to the end. Hold that thought. ;)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2017 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes

I forgot in the heat of the moment - the way I pictured it in my head, Judy is in front of them, slippers ready to be worn, and somehow Kyle doesn't need to ask "which left, my left or the left slipper?"

But i guess they must be between Judy and the slippers - for some reason I couldn't get this silly thoughts out of my mind.

Author's Response:

Hehe. A fair point. Maybe Kyle just lucked out and the left slipper was also on his left.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2017 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes

Letting Kyle go wouldn't have been fair towards Scott, I see :)

 

Still I wonder if Maggie will be unaffected when she finds out what happened to Kyle and why



Author's Response:

All I'll say is that Maggie's reaction to seeing Kyle shrunk may be slightly different than it usually is for Scott, even if we don't see it all on the surface

Reviewer: V11 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes

Excellent!

I like the level of detail here. I have been hoping you expand on what happens underneath of Judy a few more times. Over the course of the story arc you get a good idea and it never hurts to add to that evidence a little from time to time.

I still have a soft spot for Scott underneath her big toe at an inch in height, which was something done in the first story of this series. I always found that iconic, since it is a theme repeated through several old and lost to us authors of yesteryear.

The more you write in this series the more I add to my wishlist for it. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks much. There will be several opportunities for Scott to be at his smallest and underfoot in later chapters.

Reviewer: realman Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2017 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid

Interesting to see what Kyle's reactiom will be once he's full sized again. Will he still be so nice to his brother? I'll admit I'm curious to see if he ever goes after Scott when he's small like Judy and Maggie do...



Author's Response:

Time will tell. Luckily for Scott, Kyle tends to be a bit more rational of a person than his mother and sister seem

Reviewer: CraftyLatin Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2017 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes

The last sentence definitely made me wonder what's going on through Kyle's head right now. That's some real motherly love she's giving him.



Author's Response:

We'll see how Kyle's feeling about this soon once Judy gives them a break

Reviewer: Badguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid

omg, please tell me we'll get Kyle's perspective too

Author's Response:

We won't necessarily get a full-on Kyle POV like we usually do for Scott, but we'll indeed get a better idea of how he feels about all this later

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes

She's tough but fair.



Author's Response:

Like any good mother should be

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys

It's brave of Kyle to stand up to Judy, but there's going to be complications, since she owns the house he lives in.



Author's Response:

You're definitely right about that. In this case, Kyle is going more on principle than future planning.

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