Date: July 29 2017 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Very cool setup. I like that the little girl gave her find to her Mommy. Great that she is a scientest. This looks promising.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thank you, Diesel. I'm glad you liked the beginning and the scientist. I'm working on the next chapters already.




[Report This]Date: July 23 2017 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Simply epic! It's been some time since I last read anything of similar quality and interest
Author's Response:
Thanks io1908, glad you like it that much. I have much more chapters planned and hope the story keeps you excited.




[Report This]Date: July 23 2017 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Congrats on starting your first story. First stories in my opinion are mostly fantasies, so I expect maybe some of the stuff you are into to be shown later on.
I like the theme, a mysterious island, these 2 love birds and now 2 giantesses with them.
In the plot summary, you mentioned a 20 yr old, but the guy and girl are 26 and 24. Did I read something wrong, or will there be another character?
Nice pictures of the couple. The visuals help to imagine the character. Is it from a movie or soemthing?
You already have grasped my attention with this good cliffhanger and I want more. I will stay tune with this and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words, TomSpeedy.
Indeed, that 20 year old is another character. That character will be introduced soon.
The visuals are indeed from a movie and I'm also pleased by the emotion they give off.
You don't have to wait long, the next 4 chapters are almost finished and I will post them here as soon as possible.




[Report This]Date: July 23 2017 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
This is a wonderful start with a very neat surprise in it. I was not expeting that girl to be looming over them like that and then the mother to nonchalantly take them away like that.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for positive feedback and the first to review my first story. :) The next chapters will come very soon.